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|ok, so take a look at my profile and let me know what you think...I am expecting no candy coating so give it your best shot.....thanks appreciate the effort...bye|
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:38:42 PM
|Way too long...|
You drone on and on... just cut to the chase.
Try to find another way to start sentences besides using I....
Makes you seem kinda self centered.
Picts are ok, lose the one in the woods.
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:43:31 PM
|Get more and better picts...|
Again too long.
Three short paragraphs... one idea per paragraph.
Nice straight forward tone to the profile.
The last paragraph should go... a little presumptuous.
You've never been intellectually challenged... seems you're the one dating dummies.
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:44:50 PM
|Don't waste my time|
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:49:57 PM
|Ok, the blue tongue isn't really a turn on... and the santa hat in july, dated. |
Usually not a big fan of list's... the lazy way out.
Yours, without being compelling isn't a total bore.
Panic! At the Disco
Kinda a lame.
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:54:06 PM
|Charming pict, the country hick does seep through in a lovely fashion.|
Well you're honest... bonus points for that.
Chill... do not use that word!
Everything else seems fine.
Posted: 6/29/2006 8:56:49 PM
|Get picts where you're actually smilling.|
Add a few sentences instead of using the comma in such an abusive way...
The content is fine, but lacks a little luster.
Posted: 8/27/2006 12:34:10 PM
|Very well written profile... maybe a little on the long side, although the quality of the writing maintains one's attention.|
Bonus points for the humour.
The picts... ahh, amusing in the old fashion keep the pose attitude. Most of them don't seem very natural. It's a genre...
Have fun :0
Posted: 8/27/2006 12:40:34 PM
|It's not that theres not enough, there's nothing.|
I'm not going to write a review that's longer than your profile.
Nice pict with da hat
Posted: 10/7/2006 12:20:04 AM
|Alright fishies, back for a limited engagement...... who's first?|
Posted: 10/7/2006 6:49:43 PM
|Hi griffintown..Will you read mine please, and tell me what you think?.|
Posted: 10/7/2006 7:02:41 PM
|Please review my profile so I can know what needs to be changed.|
Posted: 10/7/2006 9:01:50 PM
The picts are fine, except for the last one which comes out totally distorted.
licensee of a public house???
OK, It's a pub.... was wondering if it wasn't a whore house :)
The about me section is fine, although the beginning kinda wanders everywhere, it's hard to figure where you're leading us.
Paragraphs are nice and effective... try them.
Basicly a nice, straight forward profile.
Posted: 10/7/2006 9:11:40 PM
|I have no idea why, but all your picts are really grainy, not sharp at all...|
Try to correct that... and also try to get picts that seem a little more natural, not just you staring a t the cam. Lets get some attitude going ;)
I really like the about me section, nice and honest.
I'm a little confused about your orientation. At the top it says you're seeking a women, for a long term relationship, then in the about me section, either men or women for friendship or dating. Try to make things a little clearer, are you Bi or straight. Are looking for friendship with both sides and dating with both or just one...
No big deal, but just needs to be cleared up.
Posted: 10/7/2006 9:18:33 PM
|The picts are fine, although I have reservations about the second and third one... Nice smile on the second one, but a photo booth... The third one, there's no smile, and basicly a lack luster picture.|
Not much to say about you because you don't write much about yourself. Brief and to the point, which is perfect for us slow witted men (us, which in french is nous, excludes the person who speaks)