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 canski
Joined: 9/29/2006
Msg: 426
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Hi...could you please review my profile so i can improve it?
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 427
nthingbutparticular
Posted: 10/4/2006 5:33:19 AM
@nothingbutparticular

Looking better! I like your profile now - but I'd get rid of the picture with the girl in it. Are you trying to scare women off? :)
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 428
dhanji
Posted: 10/4/2006 12:49:31 PM

The word cusine does have a plural of cusines

OK, I'll take your word for it. But you are still spelling it wrong -cuisine (you are missing the first "i")
 SuzeeyQ
Joined: 9/30/2006
Msg: 429
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/4/2006 1:05:13 PM
I'd appreciate an honest review of my profile. Thanks!
 METALLlC BLUE
Joined: 5/17/2006
Msg: 430
METALLIC BLUE
Posted: 10/5/2006 5:57:54 AM


@METALLIC BLUE

Well, you didn't really want a review now, did you? You wanted affirmation.

Personally, I think if you have to explain your profile, it's a problem. You don't want to raise the type of question that scares them off. Curiosity is one thing. Dread is another - and one to be avoided in a profile.


Of course I wanted a review, and I appreciate it. My explanation wasn't to convince you of my reasoning. I'm just proud of my profile. At worst I'm guilty of talking to hear myself talk.
 whiteroses255
Joined: 6/9/2006
Msg: 431
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/5/2006 10:05:48 PM
Hi, I would like a profile review when you get the chance. I Need help. Thanks, Rose
 KittehKhat
Joined: 10/4/2006
Msg: 432
Help
Posted: 10/7/2006 6:32:30 PM
I'll join the queue - might I request a review of my profile? I'm a newbie so I just want to check how I've done.
Thankies much =]
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 433
Lizbeth6
Posted: 10/7/2006 7:30:24 PM
Hi Liz,

There really isn't much I would change about your profile. It's well written, and gives a nice peek into your world. You come across as a very calm, self-sufficient woman. I would suggest possibly changing your headline - "good guys" seems to be a bad word around here

But overall, a very nice profile.
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 434
cinemaxius
Posted: 10/7/2006 7:36:08 PM
@cinemaxius

The first thing I would do with your profile is to remove the 2 lists - best and worst movies. I personally don't think it adds much to your profile, to put those there. Other than that, I think all your tweaking has paid off. It looks good to me.
 thegreatrockyhill
Joined: 12/26/2005
Msg: 435
dhanji
Posted: 10/7/2006 7:46:16 PM
Thanks for the review Kris. Just goes to show ya, everyone has a different opinion on my profile. :) some people think it sux,others think it's just fine as it is.
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 436
amandac120
Posted: 10/7/2006 7:52:09 PM
@amandac120

I LOVE your headline! That's definitely got to catch some attention. But now you need to keep their attention, and make them want to contact you (to collect their $20 ). You need to fill out your interests list - surely there are things you enjoy, other than simply hanging out with your friends. Let guys know what types of things they might get to do with you.

Then, take a couple of those interests, and expand on them in your about me section. Let the guys see what you like to do.

You should try to fill out something in the first date section too. Give them some idea what might be interesting to you for a first meeting.

Good luck with your fishing
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 437
canski
Posted: 10/7/2006 8:02:23 PM
@canski

Well, I think you took Mike's advice too seriously - your "reconstruction" (I assume it's done, given that none of his comments make sense with the new profile) is pretty sparse. Let's hear more about who you are, and what you like to do. Expand a bit on what "a mixture of an academician and a musician" means. Things like that.

First date section isn't bad - I can understand a cop-out being new in town. But how about a general suggestion, without nailing it to a particular location. Like "going for a walk - where do you suggest". Or whatever it is you like to do.
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 438
SuzeeyQ
Posted: 10/7/2006 8:10:31 PM
@SuzeeyQ

Your profile consists of 2 lists - what you like, and what you want. You need to put a bit more effort into showing guys who you are. You don't want to go overboard, but you need to spruce it up. Your "about me" certainly doesn't strike me like a profile of some who likes riding motorcycles for example.

You also need some more pictures. Your second one is not very good - you should replace it with some action shots.
 kris1082
Joined: 5/23/2006
Msg: 439
iwarrior
Posted: 10/7/2006 8:14:36 PM
iwarrior

everyone has a different opinion on my profile


So I guess you have to ask yourself whether or not I'm the type of person you are trying to attract. Or if it is turning off the ones you want.

Happy fishing.
 teddyb51
Joined: 4/4/2006
Msg: 440
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/7/2006 8:45:17 PM
Hello Kris,
Would you please review my profile... thanks
 Believe it or not
Joined: 9/12/2006
Msg: 441
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/8/2006 3:55:42 AM
Hi, what do you think of mine?
 Simply37
Joined: 10/2/2006
Msg: 442
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/8/2006 4:45:26 AM
Hi Kris,

can you review and let me know if the profile is good?
 Lizbeth6
Joined: 8/8/2006
Msg: 443
Lizbeth6
Posted: 10/8/2006 7:10:51 PM
Thanks Kris,

I actually did change my profile after requesting a review, but I used some of the suggestions I found on here and I like it much better.

Now, to think of a new headline...........


Liz
 omnimancer
Joined: 10/24/2005
Msg: 444
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/9/2006 8:46:52 AM
Hi Kris, could you take a look at my profile please. I was thinking of trying to spruce it up a bit - is it already too long? Is less more?

Thanks,
Mark
 Billbutler8
Joined: 3/12/2005
Msg: 445
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Posted: 10/9/2006 10:04:51 AM
Please review me again. I made some necessary changes. It needs further review and tweaking… I added a few more "I" s not to antagonize you, but the re-emphasis that the section is all "about me" and I can't for the life of me figure out anything other that I, me, I'm, I've, myself, etc. when it is really all about me me me me me me.



thanks for your help
 Trophy Boyfriend
Joined: 9/24/2006
Msg: 446
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/9/2006 10:11:55 AM
Well I thought I did some nasty profile reviews ,,, hey can you help mine???
 Footer3507
Joined: 9/9/2006
Msg: 447
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/9/2006 11:02:31 AM
bring it on tell me whats wrong with mine! haha im a big boy i can handle it... i may cry for a second or 2...
 loveliesbleeding
Joined: 2/28/2006
Msg: 448
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/9/2006 2:50:38 PM
I would appreciate your time if you could give mine look.

Thanks
 bluebutterflyprincess
Joined: 2/11/2006
Msg: 449
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/9/2006 3:02:04 PM
Just curious as to what your opinion is on my profile. Thanks!
 kjazz
Joined: 5/8/2006
Msg: 450
Profile Reviews offered
Posted: 10/14/2006 8:04:12 AM
Hi Kris.... I like your candor with the profile reviews I have read on this thread.
Would you good enough to give a review?? I don't seem to be making many 'favourite' lists but perhaps that isn't a very good measure of success in this game!! I'm still having fun trying!!
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