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 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 177
Between WorldsPage 8 of 15    (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)
I love the tentativeness of this, the feeling that these are small pieces of a mosaic that isn't complete until the last tile is put into place.
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 179
Between Worlds
Posted: 1/3/2008 4:14:53 PM
Cdn, this is so seemingly effortless - the mark of something truly heartfelt - and beautful!
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 181
Between Worlds
Posted: 1/10/2008 7:13:24 AM
Amazing how this took over the theme of my other poem and wove it into something so lovely!
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 184
Between Worlds
Posted: 1/21/2008 7:11:00 AM
Lovely ending, D.!
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 186
Between Worlds
Posted: 1/22/2008 7:13:28 AM
I loved "Train" when I first read it and I love it still. One of your best!
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 187
Between Worlds
Posted: 5/12/2008 6:40:58 AM
Snapshots: XXVI

A woman walks by
so lightly
she carries the sound of her footsteps
away with her
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 192
Between Worlds
Posted: 5/18/2008 3:52:30 AM
How gracefully you carry this off, never flaunting the rhymes or the images but bringing it serenely, bravely to its sad conclusion.
 Alyosha
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 194
Between Worlds
Posted: 5/19/2008 1:03:20 PM
There was a languid quality to the first two stanzas that I read as a signal to settle in for a longer, slower unfolding poem, which set me up beautifully for the direct, succinct quality of the last stanza.
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