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Where there is none
Merely a trick of mind
Amid much noise
And hurry
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Posted: 10/1/2007 10:24:32 PM | ..,,..........Wordy..........
........,...Angst..............
....,,,........Vexes..........
...........,,,,.....Even.......
..,...,,,,,,.....Song..........
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Posted: 10/2/2007 4:20:58 AM | Walking in the rain
washes out the pain
the torture in my brain
it rumbled like a train
I almost went insane
I won't go there again... | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 4:59:06 AM | Damn it all
I am just too much
overdo, overwhelm, overcompensate
for the one I NEED to be
damn it all...... | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 4:47:40 PM |
Damn it all
I am just too much
Very true of your prose Lacrymosa keep it coming 
Friendships and soul connections
whether close by or far away
lead us into those quiet reflections
showing us the beauty of the day ... | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 6:22:06 PM | whysper- i really felt that- very beautiful and scary....
Memories jolt me back to those flashing neon lights and glitz
Remember the boulavard and all 'em**** and tits
Remember the shows and the hot outfits we loved to strut
The five star service, treatment and hotels
We were so high and infamous in those sky rises
I'm on the fourteenth floor, dancing on the balcony... | |
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Posted: 10/2/2007 10:46:31 PM | 'Six Pack'
Six
Divided by two
Three left for me and you.
Three are left
Two alone, now
One..forsaken. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 6:27:56 AM | Thanks for the 'technical points' cuz
Some really nice writes I am seeing in here. Sorry I havent been commenting so much. There are many that deserved comments, but thank you everyone for chipping your wonderful 6 liners in on this thread.
They just keep getting better!
Jes I really liked the last line on that one. Pure poetry  | |
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Tasu
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Posted: 10/3/2007 2:39:58 PM | just standing there
i feel your magic eyes upon
my silhouette
and i dare not move for fear
a single breath will disturb
a thousand fireflies glowing | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 7:17:00 PM | 'Angel'
An angel
Beneath
Caring
Deserving
Evermore
Forgiveness from. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 8:09:07 PM | 'Angel Exposed'
An angel, with glowing light within
Beneath, thought by arrogant win
Caring She, even those so grim.
Deserving appreciation so tried
Evermore seeing the ignorant lied
Forgiveness from...those cried! | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:14:11 PM | "For My Darling"
Being with you is just like
a piece of heaven on earth
and lying in your loving arms
restores my soul like a rebirth. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:17:42 PM | My heart skips a beat, butterflies in my soul
when I look at your face, run my eyes down your limbs
I want to run my hands over your skin, through your hair
lose myself in the depths of your ocean
drown in your crashing waves, washed onto the shore
to lay in the whispering sea breeze of your smile | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:26:23 PM | Love is all around us
And it is love that found us.
Thru sunshine or stormy weather
we will always share this love together.
I am forever yours and you are forever mine
As our bodies meld, hearts love and souls entwine. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:26:35 PM | 'Emotion'
Sea breeze cooling in salt air
In freedom also stinging there
The call of gulls in freedom flight...
Lighthouse lonely beacon bright
Enter sunset colour waning light...
Sailors fear no ship crash in night! | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:28:52 PM | Classic Focus on Limited Editions
Bringing our love into focus
you and me equals us.
Coming to me in any condition
you are strictly limited edition.
A classic delight to behold,
to love, to cherish, to hold.
... had to cut last two lines to fit the thread parameters but still sounds okay I think:-) | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:31:50 PM | I’m waiting on the night
When you’ll make it all right
With all those sweet things you do
When we’re kissing in the dark
Igniting our special spark
Bringing me closer to you. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:32:48 PM | Hurry up and kiss me
Tell me how you missed me
While we were so far apart
You were gone so long
But the words in this song
Are coming straight from my heart. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:40:18 PM | When communication lines are slow
My gentle soulmate’s mind just blows
So here it is my darling mate
A communiqué that is not late
To let you know, when I rest at night
You are the one, you are my light. | |
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Posted: 10/3/2007 9:42:45 PM | If our love is solid just like this tree
Then the future is, for you and for me
To grow and to learn
To be happy and free
To be with the one who is
The beacon of light. | |
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Posted: 10/4/2007 3:36:30 AM | Somedays I wonder if I am from another planet?
Why can't I just shut my mouth and leave it lie?
I am no longer a child...but I feel too much...
it overtakes my common sense and drowns it
making me blurt out things I shouldn't
and leaving me alone again.....
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Posted: 10/4/2007 5:27:26 AM | ^^Really nice one DCG**
Lac and Gene you guys are cooking!
Thanks T
TNT: Salty Angels? Maybe time to fly? Thank you.
Welcome Micasso and Tasu! | |
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