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 mackja
Joined: 9/28/2007
Msg: 915
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Ok - I'm fairly new to this (about 3 months) so, give it to me straight.
 Warming Up
Joined: 12/24/2007
Msg: 917
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Posted: 12/29/2007 1:45:09 AM
I'm very interested in your thoughts.
 iceman2486
Joined: 12/22/2007
Msg: 918
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Posted: 12/29/2007 2:54:56 AM
Go ahead and tear mine to shreds.
 swfl_dan
Joined: 12/4/2007
Msg: 929
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:05:22 AM
Word smith - you're the only other person I've ever heard use that phrase. It was one of my favorites back before an English Comp teacher patiently explained I wasn't anywhere near as good a writer as I'd thought I was. javascript:smilie('')
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So take a look at my profile and let me know what ya think!

Please?
 mackja
Joined: 9/28/2007
Msg: 930
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:36:06 AM
Thanks for taking the time to take a look, and I will do what you said!
 Rockland Single
Joined: 6/3/2007
Msg: 931
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Posted: 12/29/2007 7:47:52 AM
Stageright: Russia, huh? I may have to travel there this coming year for work so I'll let you know if anything pans out.

I was just enjoying the entertainment you were providing; didn't ask for a critique! But, thank you. Nice of you to take the time. I highly doubt I will find "him" on here. "MY MATCHES" link hasn't changed since I've joined this site. I think I need to find a bigger ocean!

How are things working out for you? I hear Leno and Letterman are back on next week. Enjoy this time off. Doesn't happen often (hopefully).

Happy New Year and Happy Fishing!

Regards,
Dorothy
 mackja
Joined: 9/28/2007
Msg: 933
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Posted: 12/29/2007 9:07:08 AM
I did what you suggested, if you get time, please take another look and see if it's better now or if I should change something else.
 Rockland Single
Joined: 6/3/2007
Msg: 951
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Posted: 12/30/2007 7:46:20 AM
Yes, you have to hang in there. Unions are a necessary evil. But, if you're part of one, you really need to stand strong. I'm just amazed at how long it's been now. Might be a good time to start (or continue) that book, play, or movie you've always been thinking about.

Thanks again for the visual of the boots and tires - very funny!! You crack me up.

Regards,
Dorothy
 kitten23xox
Joined: 10/3/2006
Msg: 954
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Posted: 12/30/2007 11:28:13 AM
ok, what's your opinion?
 Pearnbran
Joined: 10/4/2005
Msg: 956
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ok Chris
Posted: 12/30/2007 1:34:05 PM
I hope your busy with your break out script.

if you have the time

give mine a look over

I hope you can help

Brian
 Pearnbran
Joined: 10/4/2005
Msg: 1025
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 8:32:35 AM
OK went in and made some changes..lets see if its a improvement also all photos recent to this October..if that helps. I think Guys don't want to put 58 photos in there profiles

I mean me in a speedo? Me with my toys and stuff. and no photos of me and my kids please..I have them if she wants to see more photos I have them..

and guys who put in photos of there "cars", house, Motorcycles its looks like there saying here's what you can win...I mean if sh writes and want to kn the mileage on my car or the blue book on my bike..that just might be a red flag..

or is that house paid off???...

why not just sit on a big bag of money?

I think I'm gong to do that..

but give mine a look over see if I fixed it up better..

Brian
 quietcowboy
Joined: 12/25/2007
Msg: 1027
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 8:49:48 AM
I made some changes to my profile, with some of the pointers you gave me before(possibly page 12?). Please let me know what you think. I'm still working on getting better pics!
 Pearnbran
Joined: 10/4/2005
Msg: 1028
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/4/2008 10:52:16 AM
thaks ad I did what you said but Maybe I need more photos??

lok it over again when you have time

Thanks for the heads up..

Brian
 txblond1
Joined: 2/11/2007
Msg: 1067
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ok Chris
Posted: 1/5/2008 6:59:27 PM
Please look at mine and give me some tips. I know I need more pics. Maybe to wordy...any input would be great.

thanks.......so much
 Sepa-Isis
Joined: 12/6/2007
Msg: 1084
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Posted: 1/6/2008 9:55:18 PM
Ok ... let me have it
 miggitymark
Joined: 8/8/2006
Msg: 1093
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Posted: 1/8/2008 10:10:56 AM
It's a toss up between Got Phobia (although it's too reminiscent of that show with Tony Shaloub) & eYoder. I think eYoder wins out.

Can you review me & offer some advice? seems like I got lots of replies in the fall, and ZERO after Halloween thru now. I haven't changed anything since before then though.

Thanks bud!
 Jacobus101
Joined: 12/30/2007
Msg: 1096
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Posted: 1/8/2008 5:55:51 PM
Please review my profile. Thanks.
 Shadowboxing
Joined: 10/29/2007
Msg: 1103
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Posted: 1/11/2008 1:45:19 PM
Ok -I should think better of this but go ahead check mine out..
no foget it....
no...yeah its ok
...maybe...

no I can't take the pressure just tell me..
 DenaliDadd
Joined: 11/20/2007
Msg: 1105
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Posted: 1/12/2008 9:25:37 AM
Hmmm...can a screenwriter write profiles while on strike? Or maybe you work for Letterman and aren't on strike? Or maybe...oh, never mind.
 Sherlock101
Joined: 1/4/2007
Msg: 1106
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Posted: 1/13/2008 4:24:48 AM
Hi,

It's been 1 year since I wrote my profile and only thing I've done is added some interest's. I just don't understand why I get so few emails when I'm told by many women that know me that I am a great catch. I do live in a small town but only seem to get contacted by older women. I've never had children and feel many age physically and mentally by having them so I have a very young heart and attitude... I could use some help on my profile before I just give this site up.
 jimboro
Joined: 10/26/2007
Msg: 1107
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Posted: 1/16/2008 6:45:52 AM
OK, I'm ready for it too. Help!

Thanks, Jim
 Sherlock101
Joined: 1/4/2007
Msg: 1108
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Posted: 1/16/2008 8:52:22 PM
I think he is on strike...
 happyfree1959
Joined: 7/11/2007
Msg: 1117
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Posted: 1/18/2008 12:06:42 AM
Hi chris let me know what u think about my profile and what I can do to make it better. Thanks gail
 Fire_Sign_333
Joined: 5/26/2007
Msg: 1124
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Posted: 1/21/2008 2:16:42 PM
When you have a moment, plz peek....
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