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|tyvvvvvm angel, that one truely came from my heart, that as with all my poetry flows from my heart like a river full of life and beauty.|
Posted: 5/22/2005 9:48:21 PM
|tyvvvvvm kseej, I poured my whole heart and soul into this one |
Posted: 5/22/2005 9:49:19 PM
|Cat you have a beautiful gift because it comes from your heart and soul.|
Posted: 5/22/2005 9:50:06 PM
|Kseej..your right shes good then she just goes from good to great with no warning|
Posted: 5/22/2005 9:57:14 PM
|@kseej and angel, your responses have made me become better. |
I do phase out the world to phase in on my poetry, once i start to write, good luck tryin to get me to stop.
Posted: 5/22/2005 10:38:43 PM
|@Portal-Time...Absolutely beautiful and speaks volumes.........|
Posted: 5/22/2005 10:40:24 PM
|omg portal, tyvm for sharing that. very deep. very nice write. feel free to post here anytime. |
Posted: 5/22/2005 10:54:53 PM
|anytime hun i'll still have more work coming here soon, i just have to "be in the mood" to write|
Posted: 5/22/2005 10:59:29 PM
|Awesome again Portal...Such a gift of words..And again you speak volumes with the unspoken..I love it......|
Posted: 5/22/2005 11:20:08 PM
|I will have to agree with angel, u do speak in such ways that touch my heart. Nice write again portal.|
Posted: 5/23/2005 1:08:54 AM
Can you see me?
I am here
Lost beyond your resentment and fears
holding your hand and wiping your tears
in the darkness
I am your light
when life is dim
I help you shine bright
when the world seems unfair
you need but to call me
and I am there
I live in your dreams
and inspire you
no matter how hard life may seem
I encourage you to cope
I am always the last to leave
For I am hope.....
Posted: 5/23/2005 9:35:02 AM
|Nice poem juicy, ty for posting that here. Please feel free to post here anytime, I look forward to reading more of your work.|
Posted: 5/23/2005 9:56:56 AM
|This poem goes out to my father and what he put me through this weekend.|
Work for you can be really tough,
And makes you want to say 'goodbye',
Because you have put up with enough,
But bare with it and give it a try.
Dealing with it by drinking is not the way to go,
Because you lose everyone in sight,
By choosing the wrong path to travel down so,
And you know that it's just not right.
You left those you love feeling worried and scared,
Because they thought you were going to die,
But that shows you how much they truely cared,
And they weren't ready to tell you 'goodbye'.
This all happened because you chose to lie,
Hurting the ones that love you really deeply.
Posted: 5/23/2005 4:07:54 PM
|I read this and I didn't know whether to laugh or to cry,|
I put in my two cents and tossed to the side,
A tear I wipe away from the corner of my eye,
My feelings which i cannot hide.
You don't know what goes on inside my head,
So I wish you would try not to force it,
I write how I feel in a poem instead,
To get them out so they don't sit,
Building up over the things that aren't right,
Causing my head to hurt with a great deal of pain,
So out they come pure and in sight,
As the tears fall, just like the rain.
Soaking my pillow as they fall,
Why don't I feel the love that I give away?
No one returns it, my life is at a stall,
And that is where I don't want to stay.
Posted: 5/23/2005 5:05:16 PM
|Nice write Portal, plz continue to post them here, i love to read them.|
Posted: 5/23/2005 5:32:43 PM
|Wonderful writing Portal...I love poetry that is spoken between the lines.|
Posted: 5/23/2005 5:41:27 PM
|Cats, Your thread is really coming alive. Awesome writes going on in here! Thanks for sharing everyone!!|
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