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|No Portal you are not spoiling my thread, I love others poetry in mine, after all I did call it poetry collection for a reason, I wanted others to post their poetry here. And keep it up Portal |
Posted: 5/23/2005 6:22:20 PM
|Cat..You showed a depth of feelings in that poem..Great writing..Keep up the good work. A creative gift should never be wasted.|
How was your day Cat?
Posted: 5/23/2005 6:22:55 PM
|Wanted to say Hi Sam..Sam has done some awesome writing.|
Posted: 5/23/2005 6:29:59 PM
|My day was ok, I wrote that poem today, that's how badly I was affected|
I am also on yahoo if you want to talk again tonight angel
Posted: 5/23/2005 6:34:38 PM
|I will be on yahoo in about an hour ok? |
Posted: 5/23/2005 7:42:40 PM
|I havent been all the way through this thread... but you have some very good writes in here!!! Keep them coming!!|
Posted: 5/23/2005 8:10:51 PM
|tyvm cross, u just haven't gotten to the best ones yet, lol|
Posted: 5/23/2005 8:34:53 PM
|Kseej and angel, if u are here, im on yahoo willin to talk for a little bit. come find me, lol, i'll be waiting|
Posted: 5/23/2005 8:50:44 PM
|All the pain that I feel as of late,|
Has nothing to do with you,
I am just in a hurtful state,
And there is nothing you can do.
I am not in the mood to laugh, smile or cry,
And I don't want to talk about what's wrong,
I have to pull through, I just have to try,
And keep my spirit strong.
But there is an empty void in my heart,
Even though I find it really tough,
To try to hide it, but out slips just a small part,
Making my life incredibly rough.
I am oftly young to be dealing with such pain,
And it is causing me to begin to weep,
Slowly tears fall like a light rain,
Into my pillow where they slowly seep.
Posted: 5/23/2005 9:29:24 PM
|very moving portal, keep em comin, i love to see more|
Posted: 5/23/2005 10:39:53 PM
|Cats, Your work expresses much emotion, keep that touch in your writes!|
Angel, That goes for you too! great writes going on in here!
Portal, Hi, love the one about the planets.
Kseej, Glad you like it, your story hit home to many. The poem just felt right.
Cross, Almost done with your thread, your a very interesting writer. Great to read!
Hope I didn't forget anyone. Can't wait to read again soon!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 5/24/2005 2:32:14 PM
Friends are great to have at anytime because they care,
And you know that you can tell them anything,
Because they will always be there,
Which can make any heart sing.
As you grow up, friends come and go,
But some friends stay for quite a while,
And those friends should know,
How to make a heart truely smile.
No matter if you're happy or sad,
Friends are there to turn the darkness into light,
Which makes your heart extremely glad,
Because they made everything right.
Friends are there when you've had enough,
Because they can take away the pain,
Which really isn't all that tough,
Even when tears fall like rain.
A friendly hug helps to dry those tears,
Making you smile and feel really great,
Taking away all those empty fears,
Even when it seems too late.
That friendship we have is growing strong,
And let's hope it doesn't end at all,
Because my heart is alive with song.
Kseej and Angel, this one goes out to you both,
Posted: 5/24/2005 2:39:08 PM
|@Catsmeow...Absolutely beautiful. I will cherish it always.. |
Posted: 5/24/2005 2:40:43 PM
|tyvvvm angel, im tryin to think positively instead of negatively from now on, and that was just the first attempt at a positive poem. More will follow.|
Posted: 5/24/2005 2:47:06 PM
|@Catsmeow...Great thinking Cat..Positive thinking will give you positive things..Can't wait to read more of your writings...How was your day today?|
Posted: 5/24/2005 2:49:23 PM
|My day went alright, work was oftly slow today, but I made it through. lol. im just not a morning person. I just wonder what Kseej will think of this poem.|
Posted: 5/24/2005 3:04:02 PM
|@Catsmeow...He will love it..It will be a fabulous end to his very long day..|
Posted: 5/24/2005 3:11:11 PM
|Well, that's good to hear, i wonder if he'll get the chance to read it tonight|
Posted: 5/24/2005 4:05:58 PM
|@sam, tyvvm for those kind words about my thread. It has helped me become a better writer. and hopefully you can continue to post here your thoughts.|
Posted: 5/24/2005 4:23:00 PM
|@Cat..I'm sure he will be able to read it tonight. He'll be on ina while..Like I said he's going to love it.........|
Posted: 5/24/2005 5:31:17 PM
|"Friends" was truely written from your heart Cat..Thank you..........Keep up the good work!!|
Posted: 5/24/2005 5:41:01 PM
|tyvm angel, I wanted to prove to Kseej that i do have a happy side, I just need to express it more often|
Posted: 5/24/2005 6:02:01 PM
|Hi Portal..Great one!! I will say it again, I love writing that leaves the between the line unspoken..Wonderful...|
Posted: 5/24/2005 6:02:10 PM
|hello again portal, how are ya hun?? |
nicely written. and its true that the kookaburra does laugh. I remember a song back in elementary school about kookaburra
kookaburra sits in the old gum tree,
merry merry king of the bush is he,
laugh kookaburra laugh
kookaburra gay your life must be.
kookaburra sits int he old gum tree,
eating all the gumdrops he can see,
laugh kookaburra laugh,
kookaburra gay your life must be.
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