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 Poetry Man
Joined: 10/21/2009
Msg: 922
I don't care what you write......Page 41 of 46    (6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45, 46)
Do unto others as you would be done by,
what goes around comes around.
Don't let your hate leave you hung dry,
and never ever look down

Pay for your mistakes in trust,
never let fools be your guide.
always use crisco for your crust,
and you'll have a perfect pie.

( sorry...I'll get better at this)
 WeAre1
Joined: 3/18/2008
Msg: 923
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I don't care what you write......
Posted: 10/25/2009 5:36:25 AM

I landed softly in you
energy passing through
an invisible pulse
stirring your soul
nothing to hold onto
so nothing to let go
just a feeling deep within
whispering freedom


written two days ago on
LAST LINE REPEATED...using 8 lines
 hashcannon
Joined: 2/11/2007
Msg: 924
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Posted: 10/25/2009 6:05:48 PM
infancy ..

falling again farther to the front
splitting the time between now and then
staring again at the things blinding me
souless orbs guiding me backward

the things from then haunting me now
rushing at me in the dark, blurring my vision anew
when do you begin again, when you have finally fallen..???
starting over is easy, you just have to figure out
how to take that very first step

Hash 2009


hay girl ...wtf over ... how the heck r ya ...???
 ash.i.am
Joined: 8/14/2008
Msg: 925
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 10/26/2009 5:24:30 AM
Jamesless, poetry man, Weee, pearl, windswept, fishouttaH2O: thank you for stoppin' through...pearl, writing from your heart can help you heal, and others as well...so, write on, and don't worry about what anyone else thinks.....
Sorry to make it so short...but I've got the flu and my brain hurts...(don't freak out on me, you can't catch it over the Internet!)...

Hash! What it do, boo ? ;) Other than this sickness I'm finer than a frog hair split 2 ways....Colo-friggin-rado? Definately not the guy next door, now....call me...we need to catch up...soo much has changed here, too


these chills
feels
like Braille
in Hell.
electrolyte
overdose
I wanna feel well
my mind says one thing
my body says another
it's times like these
I really want my mother
 Super_Eve
Joined: 10/23/2008
Msg: 926
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 10/26/2009 8:00:55 AM
Another resurrected poem...(Someday I will come up with new stuff...)

This one was actually published. Can you believe it? I read it now and think...wow, there must have been a desperate need for really bad poetry...

(at the edge)

at the edge of the pier
I lean across the railing
and look out
at the edge of the Universe.

the jagged rocks
and the white foam
from the infinite unknown
at the edge of the Universe.

(you can't touch me because you can't see me)

solitude.
seclusion.
(I like being alone)

so I step outside the railing
and I climb up on the rocks
and
watch the Universe twist and churn below.
frothing white salt caresses my body
in white foaming stars.

(you can't touch me but you can see me)

I am a planet.

(and I like being alone)

walking on the beach
you say
one step further

I am at the edge and I want to go further.

so I step off the rocks, outside the pier.
so we step into the water, out of the dry sand-

i am drowning i am drowning and you are touching me i am drowning you try to save me because i am drowning (I like being alone) i dive under in white foaming stars and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't touch me because i've drowned

-so I climb back on the rocks
and I step back on the dry sand
but
I am wet and sticky
and
I don't like being alone
but I don't want to go back into the Universe anymore.

How emo is that[/]...
 ~Tropical~
Joined: 10/27/2008
Msg: 927
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 10/26/2009 10:14:45 AM
I think this is a great write and quite wonderful that you got this published....
it made me think of an old song ...by Nick Cave redone by Ute Lemper...Little Water Song

<div class="quote"> am drowning i am drowning and you are touching me i am drowning you try to save me because i am drowning (I like being alone) i dive under in white foaming stars and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't see me because i have drowned and you are smiling and you can't touch me because i've drowned

as the reader, I really felt like I was drowning...the constant flow of words and the repetition.....I say


write some more!

Please!
 Super_Eve
Joined: 10/23/2008
Msg: 928
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Posted: 10/26/2009 8:39:38 PM

I think this is a great write and quite wonderful that you got this published....


Awww...thank you so much, ~Tropical~!



You have made my day...
 iceaxe
Joined: 3/13/2008
Msg: 929
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:23:59 PM
a man of timeless wisdom
met a girl with infinite heart
and when they touched
clouds gathered and gushed
and a celebration did start
a dance in the rain
washed away all pain
and a flicker became a fire
but the man had learned
how not to get burned
by trivial wanton desire
her heart was soft as she looked aloft
past the wrinkle in his brow
could it endure something so unsure
to weave a future from the now
a stitch a thread aren't a pillowy bed
but a bed is made from such
is a bond an alliance or is a bond a chain
too hard to tell from a touch
 TNT_DYNO
Joined: 1/1/2007
Msg: 930
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Posted: 10/26/2009 9:56:33 PM
Hi Ash:

Here is one for you: never mere ash, always a Fire.

Sleek strong in confidence
Mired secure if common sense
Shined in steel bell o' brass
Restrained not, idiot encompass

Stalwart standing mainline steamed
Nurtured free expression dreamed
Fueled with compassion tender
Strength within angels sent Her

Steel shined in spirit grind
Sleek along the rails refined
Headlamp proud shining beacon
Life struggles from never weaken

Locomotion carried train
Sweet strong, whistle refrain
Always in tune, and on time
'Ash' fired in respected rhyme

Trackside admired stop signal red
Green advance confidence spread
Fired from the soul boiler steamed
Fueled in experience not schemed

Mighty sung is the confident call
Locomotive beauty shining enthrall
Passioned boiler soul glowing bright
Trained not repressed, freedom delight!

Hugs.

Sincere.

TBK
 ash.i.am
Joined: 8/14/2008
Msg: 931
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 11/10/2009 6:12:25 PM
I'll second that opinion 'Tropical'.....that write takes you with it...thx, wildflower...Iceaxe, it's a pleasure to see you 'round these parts...s,been far too long...(you too Rose!!! thx!)

Blueglove....I'm glad that you find peace...AND that you decided to stop by..

And TNT, I thanked you on your thread....and in re-reading that, I thank you again....*hugs*....writes such as those serve as awesome reminders for those days when u need it....

Had to at least acknowledge that I'd read those....I usually try to accompany any responses and such with a poem.....but...well...some days the words just aren't there...and I kept waiting...and they never came...oh well...I suppose sometimes silence is nice too right?...

I guess I'm gonna go with the original 'idea' of the thread and try and 'steal' a line and see what I can come up with...
(I absolutlely don't mean that to be condescending, I'm just reverting back to plan 'A'...but plan 'B' suits me just fine too)

ash
 ash.i.am
Joined: 8/14/2008
Msg: 932
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 11/10/2009 7:10:53 PM
Pardon me....I got lost...(the following is a fine illustration of why it's a damn good thing I don't care what I write either )


Black..

were the eyes of a deer that I bumped into
to share a moment of silence..

well....actually....a few

on a mountain top

where all the world would stop.
where all the whirrled would stop.

and hold me in it's breath
bearing witness to the death

of previous ways
and lazy days

with eyes wide open
lungs expanding...no longer choking...
On the taste of change.

Isn't it strange?

To think of what that deer has been through...
To think we are running, and hiding, and eating too...

And there's a fish out there that changes sex when it's mate dies..
And is then followed by the harem,
although it was previously one of the wives....

Swimming
Upstream
Living in
The In-Between

when what I would really rather do
is get lost in the view

of the black

and the endless

eyes of the friendless

dear
 Fish Outta H2O
Joined: 7/9/2009
Msg: 933
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Posted: 11/10/2009 10:23:09 PM
For three weeks in October you terrorized us all
Gas station, school yard, bus stop, mall...
Not one was safe in your three state spree
Until you were captured up the street from me.
Seven years later, after ten lives lost
Yours makes eleven the final deadly cost.
You showed no remorse say those
Bearing witness to the death...
Refusing to offer apologies
With even your dying breath.
With that revelation, a final thought comes to mind
It's straight to hell for you, Sniper...
Now you're paid in kind.
 diehard romantic
Joined: 11/5/2009
Msg: 934
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Posted: 11/11/2009 9:08:09 AM
the world is a better place
with that SOB dead and gone.
scum of the human race
finally where he belongs.
 Dorrian X
Joined: 6/30/2009
Msg: 935
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Posted: 11/11/2009 11:53:22 AM
Thank you

i try hard not to be the bad guy
but loneliness has captured my heart
and every word i express to you
feels like the rapture has sparked
the evil ones left behind
the innocents raised above
im not bad for the evil i do
but because of my expressions of love
i want to hold you, embrace you
know your inner most thoughts
but it seems that i disgust you
so even to heaven im lost
the smallest phrases i utter
makes you shudder from utter distaste
perhaps i should shuffle off this mortal coil
and leave you no more disgrace
for there's no opera that held such a phantom
no cathedral that held such a beast
as the one so in love with you
pray Lord let this madness cease
call me, posthaste, back to the essence
burn my ashes to nonexistence
let my soul linger in limbo
none would know the difference
you never had a design flaw
even Satan's a masterpiece
so i know this is the plan for me
but please Lord, just let me leave
you wont give undue pressure
i've heard that a thousand times
pressure i don't mind
i don't even mind the dying
its just so hard to see and focus
through all the tears im crying
and i know you know my mission
and your visions much greater than mine
but i don't want to exist like this
your world is too unkind...

Then a shadow fell across the earth, and the clouds begin to drift apart.
The sun shone ever brighter as a VOICE began to speak:

MY SON, I AM THE DESIGNER OF ALL THINGS AND YOUR DESIGN TO ME IS FAMILIAR
I NEVER DESIGNED YOU A SOUL MATE I WAS A BIT APATHETIC
BUT YOU HAVE SURPASSED MY GREATEST EXPECTATIONS FOR YOU
AND NOW I HAVE GROWN SYMPATHETIC
I WILL TURN TOWARDS YOU THE HEART OF THE ONE YOU MOST DESIRE.
NOW SLEEP MY FAIR CHILD AWAY FOR NOW...

then the sun dimmed, the shadow retreated, and the clouds merged

i awaken from my slumber lying next to you
and i can only wonder the things that we will do
my tears are gone forever
your smile has awakened anew
and i stare into the Heaven's
and whisper...

Thank You
 Windswept786
Joined: 4/20/2010
Msg: 936
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Posted: 5/23/2010 8:04:54 AM
Spending some time gathering my own journey. Finding a need to reflect and know that I am moving forward. Found several things posted here over the past year or two. Thanks ash.


Lives found along the way
to share
words to say
Realizing just how much has been provided
by each of you
on days that were lovely
and some that were blue
Trusted that the truth
could somehow be found
a sounding board
helps to bring a life around

Thanks for each of your presences within my day to day moments. At times, I have opted to walk away, but found the breezes kept bringing me back to this place. As I gather my own writings, I do understand why. ~Wind~
 wool_c
Joined: 11/30/2010
Msg: 937
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Posted: 2/22/2016 5:53:01 PM
(I borrowed a line from post #1019)

Another Monday morning new,
'Twas dreary out and foggy, too.
As baby slept and coffee brewed
I wrestled with my attitude.

Pitter patter little feet
Thumb in mouth, small lips sweet
Eyebrows furled, half smile - we meet
Early, this new day we greet.
 cesska
Joined: 11/7/2011
Msg: 938
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Posted: 4/15/2016 11:20:00 PM
I don't sleep at night
should I move back to vegas
 tizzabelle
Joined: 8/20/2010
Msg: 939
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Posted: 4/16/2016 4:32:54 PM
if you can make it there, you can make it anywhere
oh wait a minute; that's New York isn't it?
 CarefreeBeauty
Joined: 5/30/2014
Msg: 940
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Posted: 4/17/2016 6:09:18 AM
the thing is
that wherever
you go
there you are
still all alone
you and your bones
till you turn
into a star
 CarefreeBeauty
Joined: 5/30/2014
Msg: 941
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Posted: 4/17/2016 9:36:21 AM
^^^from above

Destination:
As mad as a hatter
Poisoned by mercury
But what does it matter
His mind is blown
He chatters and blathers
At certain personages
Dressed all in tatters
 wool_c
Joined: 11/30/2010
Msg: 942
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Posted: 6/8/2016 4:55:13 PM
Destination as mad as the hatter
Heart on the mend, but completely shattered
I never thought that I would be here again,
Nor torn by my lover, much less my friend.
 alotmarc1
Joined: 6/15/2008
Msg: 943
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Posted: 6/10/2016 7:14:12 PM
Win or loose
Why
Is there no middle ground to be found
Time is the one thing without an expiration date
Yet time is a relationships true enemy
Remember when
We usta
And you usta
Back when we still had our zen
Time takes a toll on the clock
Tick
Tock
To much time to figure out things we don't like
To much time to remember things we did like
When right it doesn't become a fight
And the clock has no value
So be bold and tell the hands
To fck off
 CarefreeBeauty
Joined: 5/30/2014
Msg: 944
I don't care what you write......
Posted: 7/8/2016 3:35:39 PM
don't tell me what I feel
don't tell me that I'm wrong
don't tell me that I've got no clue
don't tell me that the song
that song that sings in my own head
don't say it's not my song
 h0peFiend
Joined: 2/5/2017
Msg: 945
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Posted: 3/11/2017 7:25:22 PM
His love was like rain..
Not heavy
Not a mist
It soaked into the soil
Just so
Strengthening roots
And causing shoots to grow and reach for the sky.
I really like that guy.
 Cynderella
Joined: 3/8/2007
Msg: 946
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Posted: 3/12/2017 11:54:47 AM
^^^Very touching :)

His love washes over me like rain
Quenching my lost soul once in pain
Thirsting eagerly for every last drop
Praying purifying rain never to stop
Now feeding my every longing desire
Floating in the heavens even higher
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