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 BerserkPoet
Joined: 11/21/2006
Msg: 196
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.Page 11 of 15    (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)
Shadows raven black eyes staring at me
All around me voices telling me to be myself
Each cold stare leaving me bitterer as I realise I am nothing
Waiting holding onto a day I can shine
Lost within the cobwebs of eternal devastaion within my soul
Black beady eyes waitin for me to make a comment while I slip into paranoia that I am weak
Finally Clairvoyance steps in but the eyes are gone
Leaving me empty thoughtless abandoned upon my own home
Not knowing who to trust with my problems
A bottle of Seroquel to thrust my burning desire and leaving me lame
I want more of of my f.ucking life as I once again fall into paranoia
Never to be myself today tommorow and only the god's know when I will shine
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 197
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 10/9/2008 3:22:35 PM
Note to self

"...So fail. Be bad at things. Be embarrassed. Be afraid. Be vulnerable. Go out on a limb or two or twelve and you will fall and it'll hurt. But the harder you fall, the farther you will rise. The louder you fail, the clearer your future becomes. Failure is a gift, welcome it. There are people who spend their whole lives wondering how they became, how certain chanced passed them by, why they didn't take the road less traveled. Those people aren't you. You have front row seats to your transformation and in transforming yourself, you might even transform the world. And it will be electric and I promise you it will be more than terrifying. Embrace that. Embrace the new person you're becoming. This is your moment. I promise you, it is now, not two minutes from now, not tomorrow, but really NOW. Own that. Know that deep in your bones and go to sleep every night knowing that, wake up every morning remembering that. And then...after that...keep going."
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 198
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 10/13/2008 12:53:50 PM
Finds love like a pretty picture. Picture perfect, beautiful, unique, different, comforting, therapy for the mind and soul.

Least till you put the picture painting out in the rain and the f*cking colors run. Then its what love really means. A total f*cked up mess.

Even pretty paintings were never meant to last.
 livelovelaugh
Joined: 9/21/2005
Msg: 200
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 10/13/2008 1:47:46 PM
Your Heart

For all the years I've known you
I've never known your heart
Not matter what we weathered
You kept it far apart

I opened up my life ,my soul
You knew my darkest sin
But never could you open up
Oh God ,what could have been

We talked about so many things
About where our lives were bound
Yet every thing you said to me
The words were twisted 'round

You gave to me your strength and calm
But couldn't give your trust
Yet for a chance of tomorrows
This last one is a must

And so I must say goodbye my love
But wish before we part
That one day you will trust someone
And let them know your heart
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 201
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 11/12/2008 5:26:03 PM
Falling in love is like putting a shot gun to old head and wondering when the trigger will be pulled. You cant help who the heart has feelings for no matter how much the brain tells you its wrong. I guess it could be viewed as a drug. Something like an addiction. Something about their pheremones that they release exactly the right amount to fit into what you think the perfect DNA is out there for you. How they smell, taste, and of course how they look. There toxic yet pleasant vapor rising from their skin, their smell and there you are addicted.

Like smoking you dont even realize you are addicted till you go without. Being loved is a very good aphrodisiac, perhaps even the best in the world.

I have this love/hate, bittersweet romance with the thought of love. Sometimes i think its just a great way to trick the human race into reproducing. With love there comes suffering and pain. It sometimes seems to lack morals and in turn it turns into a self guilt ridden pool of shame. I have no idea what i am babbling about when i am bored i tend to think too much.

I wish i could go into this world without feeling broken, without being my own worst enemy, to erase every bitter thought i have had. Its funny sometimes i take a look at myself and i am everything that i despise about others. Ironic eh?

Maybe not ever feeling love would be easier. I mean without ever knowing the true extent or depth of the emotion. Maybe just maybe i would be happier as a frigid b*tch. Just never having known what i am capable of..

I have always been a hopeless romantic. Or maybe thats just hopeless?
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 202
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 11/12/2008 5:27:13 PM
I want to feel like a new person. Just something different then all these fake smiles, tinted words that mean nothing. I want to feel you inside me. I long for feeling your body pressed up against my own. I cant tell where my skin ends and yours begins.I want to find out what side of the bed you sleep on and what you take in your coffee. What you think about on a rainy day, how would you hold me if you had me in your reach. But yes i do, i do want to feck your brains out. I want to be the one that you have no words for after, except forever.
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 203
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 11/12/2008 5:28:01 PM
Feeling flesh power
Heat radiant
Warm, soft, velvet like
Grinding
Releasing my wild side
I let you feel
My gifted treasure
Skin to skin
Flesh to flesh
Eyes enticing
Your rhythm fits mine
You know my name
Speak it
Climbing your body
As if it were my temple
I am the Queen
Feel my curves
But most importantly
Feel my climax
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 206
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 1/9/2009 8:30:04 PM
Its been awhile

I want you to touch me from the inside out
Feel my warmth wrap around you
Shiver with goosebumps
I dont want you to tell me how pretty i am today
Just tell me how good i make you feel
Lust
Raw
Emotion
Let your animal inside you creep out
Creep me
Feck me
Lust me
Pull my hair while you throb inside me
Ride the wave, drown in my being
Such dichotomy
A mind feck, feck with my mind
...My velvet spasm
Saved just for you
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 207
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 1/9/2009 8:30:58 PM
Anal-retentive...BUTT..
Life teaches,
We stumble,
Wisdom is earned.
Each of us is a wise fool.
We must take comfort in what we piece together.

This message brought to you by cawk nuggets! Get them while they are hot. Have them with a side of feck sticks and butter.

Ca-noodling cawk nuggets since 1999!
 BerserkPoet
Joined: 11/21/2006
Msg: 208
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 2/28/2009 12:42:27 AM
You have any idea where this place has gone without you visual. And what the f.uck? no parade no naked midgets jumping out of cake? Gotta fix that hold up....

best i can do work with it ;)

First things first i done clapped one kid tonight
Now this mother f.ucker wants to flap his jaw at the stoplight
Yo I'm a ryda I don't give a f.uck who you know b.itch
I'm Full clip so i pulled him out his window

I'm down with being one of your cawk nuggets from birth to the grave just do visit more often it's lonely in the dark
 NaiveAndWitty
Joined: 4/14/2007
Msg: 209
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/22/2009 6:32:16 PM
what if I told you,
that the only thing
I can promise, is
that I will never be
overbearing—that
I was once a broken
soul, but now I breathe
again. what if I told you,
that my love for pain—
is ever with me—but
only for the sake of
poetry. what if I told
you, that I enter into
this relationship, knowing
that it will not last; for I
am subject to ask of
you, what you cannot give.
what if I told you, that
I am a complicated
math problem. would
you take time out to
solve me—knowing that
there are no guarantees?
what if I told you,
that I know his name—
the one who killed
the love in you. what
if I told you, that
I hate him. would you
take the time to
solve me? I am a
times table chart—
multiply me—help
me to find myself.
 p~s
Joined: 4/13/2008
Msg: 210
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/22/2009 7:26:51 PM
The original poster seems to have a darker nature to her writing, I`m no poet but thought WTH , this is about expression and so here is something i jotted down that i hope works :)
What happened to the girl inspired, lit with life, the girl that dreamed, believed?
What happened to her light you wonder, dimmed and muddy, lost to shades who's coldness crushed, drained those dreams, feeding insecurities, tearing her away from this world? Now she's alone with only shadows of past hope to plague, taunt and tear her slowly apart.
 CatchFyre
Joined: 7/9/2009
Msg: 211
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 1/27/2010 11:14:09 AM
Hey Viz
You're an azz
 hummingbirddancing
Joined: 6/27/2009
Msg: 212
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 1/29/2010 12:36:24 PM
dang, where did you go? and what is this on this thread??? lmao ????

Fire , Fire
girls a wire
ends exposed
take her higher!

Burnt edges
untamed hedges
catcha ride
she's a live wire~!







 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 213
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/21/2010 9:51:34 AM
Oh but i am an azz thank you. Welcome back to me.

They break you
They take you for granted
They laugh when you are not looking
Or when you are
They are everywhere
Feckin parasites
Dont give me any sh*t
Cause
I am tired
So very tired
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 214
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/21/2010 7:22:11 PM
Good to see a familiar face again, hi HAMster

An orgy of emotions run through my veins
Ecstasy and pain
Blood pumping
Leg humping
Feeling my intuition whisper
Spreading like bacteria
Virus
I fall victim once again
To the inside of my head
The beating of my heart
Has lead me astray
The good, the bad, the ugly
I am all
I am not perfect
But
Perfecked
After all
I am nothing but
Human
And to be human
Is to feel
But to feel
Is to hurt
Snap your brittle bones
Only to decay
Ashes to ashes
 .word.on.the.street.iz.
Joined: 3/13/2010
Msg: 215
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/21/2010 8:29:40 PM
good to see you back around these parts,again, Viz....started writing on this the other day....i'm not sure that it's finished...you're neck of the woods is as perfecked a spot as any to leave it, I'd say.......really, though, s'good to see your face (well...half of it at least)


Romance is dead.
and we all want change
for a dollar
I'll show you a counterfeit

we looked everywhere for the elusive ideal image that we had painted inside our heads..
we did not search...we looked, instead
at this distance


that was perfect...and yet uncomfortable enough to make us always want a little more

Who was that woman, truly, on isle 4?

What WOULD we trade for this "something" that doesn't exist?

a lifetime
the experience
and the other things that we didn't miss
 hummingbirddancing
Joined: 6/27/2009
Msg: 216
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Posted: 3/21/2010 9:16:43 PM

These spiritual window-shoppers,
who idly ask, 'How much is that?' Oh, I'm just looking.
They handle a hundred items and put them down,
shadows with no capital.

What is spent is love and two eyes wet with weeping.
But these walk into a shop,
and their whole lives pass suddenly in that moment,
in that shop.

Where did you go? "Nowhere."
What did you have to eat? "Nothing much."

Even if you don't know what you want,
buy _something,_ to be part of the exchanging flow.

Start a huge, foolish project,
like Noah.

It makes absolutely no difference
what people think of you.
[


Rumi
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 217
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Posted: 3/24/2010 11:24:11 AM
Hi everyone good to see you posting. Post post post

Morphine lips
Seductive hips
Refraction
Retraction
Echoing in my mind
Parts of me are gone
Lost and never found
Fool
There are no winners
Only losers
Such dramatic irony
Something like a recurring hemorrhoid
Life is literally a pain in the ass!
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 218
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 3/31/2010 8:31:05 AM
I wrote this two years ago now but seeming as its almost that time, i thought i would repost it

Dear Easter Bunny,

I know you keep many secrets deep down inside of you. I have come to learn a very dark secret of yours. It seems that you have been in cahoots with the Tooth Fairy for many many years now. (Tooth Fairy is the body part mafia) You see the person that told me your secret tells me that the Tooth Fairy only pays children for their teeth so that later on in life she will get them to sell a kidney. Sure Bunny you have wanted to distance yourself from the sorrid affair. But it is a known fact you offer the children chocolate. Chocolate which makes teeth fall out. If that doesnt sound like a partnership to me, i dont know what is. You have disappointed me Peter Cottontail. I hope the Tooth Fairy keeps you happy and please keep it a secret how you actually shit out chocolate eggs kthanks.

Sincerely heartbroken Kim

PS Please do not go hopping down my bunny trail. If you do, do at your own risk as you may be used as bunny stew. Fluff off!!
 hashcannon
Joined: 2/11/2007
Msg: 219
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 4/1/2010 5:00:43 PM
ahh a nicely spiced easter bunny stew
hossenfeffer peppers fried and tossed for two
hold still little bunny I've got plans for you
a spanish delight Cuenca 'Morteruelo'
or a freshly braised tomato paella BBQ
ahh yes Mr. Bunny, you'd be quite yummy
suddenly surprised alone there on the trail
Your petite cottontail, scampers to no avail
easter sunday breakfast or maybe brunch
come over here Bunny we can "do" lunch


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 knightwhosaysnih
Joined: 4/2/2009
Msg: 220
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 4/2/2010 9:34:58 AM
Not so very long ago
There was a fire in my computer
Fuelled by human emotion
For months it blazed
But not to worry
Everything’s under control now
The danger has passed
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 221
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Posted: 4/21/2010 10:26:03 AM
Future hope slashed
The present held to me with electrical tape
Inside dwells a monster
He feeds off my veins
It drinks the acid flowing through my body
Licks the cement from my lips
Hold me hostage
My arteries are clogging
My body is a cage
My mind is a prison
Pour salt in my wounds
Make it sting
Breathe me back to life
Under my skin
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 222
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Posted: 4/21/2010 6:44:10 PM
This is a weird poem, if you wanna call it that, dedicated to some people in my life a while ago on here

With a mapt in my hand i look around for my distortedknight . With no real12luv i look up eyestothesky with such intenzity . Om i feel the burn in the ink and scars in my life. I miss the deadwh*re i used to be, nothing but visually distorted. On the road i shall travel once more.
 lenag
Joined: 9/30/2010
Msg: 223
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Posted: 12/26/2010 7:23:30 AM
There is a haunted look in his eyes. Is it his past catching up to him? Some long ago wound that hasn't healed, the loss of a great love, lonliness, or fear? I am drawn into his gaze. Filled with a desire to find out. I long to hold him until hope appears. Give him my body, my heart, and ultimately my soul! I can't look away. There is something familiar there, a story yet told. Maybe in time he will tell me his tale, and cast his eyes upon me.
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