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 Duality of Nightshade
Joined: 5/8/2008
Msg: 76
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.Page 4 of 15    (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)

Beauty became void
Left to remain on the door step of a herb shrine
Backstreet grime redemption
Halos make such great holla hoops


The whole poem was a great read. Thanks!
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 77
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 7:42:38 PM
The cold washes with my sorrow to the terra

I turn my back to the sun

and dream of hurricans



The ocean can be the most beautiful thing
It can also be the deadliest
Such as life
You either learn to sink
Or you learn to swim
Do you wanna fight or do you want to give in?

On that note welcome back and thanks for posting in my thread. Its good to read your words again. Stay awhile it wont hurt you
 ChrisR20
Joined: 6/12/2008
Msg: 78
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 7:50:32 PM
from a while ago...


Growing up all alone
with no real place to call my home
playful and funny is all i show
but hurt and pain is all i know
abused, Kc and jojo all my life
trusted many people but it was all a lie
this miserable shit im in is called my life
sometimes i just want to fall and cry
bright skies turned blatantly grey
with hopes and dreams fading away
can end it all with the edge of a blade
but this is my destined fate
i made a mistake, but it doesnt seem real to me
trust and love is what everyone steals from me
sorry but hurt and pain doesnt appeal to me
memories from the past are still in me
they all come back when it happens again
i live a lie just wrapped up in sin
i cover my secrets with half of a grin
you were family way more than a friend
you pushed me to a point where i want to end
and hoping for the day i wont be back again
you caused a horrible pain across my chest
im now scared of life and look forward to death
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 79
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/19/2008 8:13:58 PM
Illusions, delusions and conclusions.....welcome to my world and my thread. Thank you for posting and feel free to post as much as you like.

Clockwork
Tick tock
Choices steer the boat into the river
The river then proceeds to carve its way through
Through the future of the grains of sand
Sometimes we have a tendency to flow, over flow
Through the glass we are looking
Our future not melted yet
Not fully solid
Possibly a flower petal to see us through
Like a never ending spiral staircase
Never expect to read the world in a single atom
Each day starts a new chapter

.....Till one day you finally reach the end
 iaanybodyoutthere
Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 80
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/20/2008 10:16:55 AM
That will be a good day
 BerserkPoet
Joined: 11/21/2006
Msg: 81
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/20/2008 10:49:28 AM
You're so beautiful but you'd never notice me
I sit and wait for you day by day
Just a word from your lips to my ears to a instant thought of romance
Love's fading dream as you dilly dally with your cellphone
Inside I die a lil each day
Drinking my strong aromic coffee as the stains pour out from my cigarettes
I strive to find some kinda crazy saying in hopes to get a laugh from you
You still gesture with your phone
Must be thinking I'm some sort of oddball for gazing upon your femininity
I'd love to just walk up to you say hi
That would be all too easy for me I suppose so I smoke another one and hide my pride
Pride falsely used as I wake up alone another momment of failure
If you could see my heart you would know I'm true
What's a poor fella left to do
 iaanybodyoutthere
Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 82
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/21/2008 1:32:39 PM
Give me art or give me death
Give me oranges,greens,stone cold lines
Give me Autumn,December frost my vision
Give me Sass Christan
Bring impressionism back to the conscious impression
I'm little boy blue without Ryden
Give me a moment to swing from the chandelier
Give me art or give me death


Let the stars be the backdrop
Let me be a Thespian for the sea
Spouting a parody of love while claiming to be a man named mud
Leaving much deserved ado's to the lapping waves
Let me be leaves being crushed to texture the pigments
Let prayers be centered around magenta sunsets

Give me art
Stain the walls with it
Monochromatic the air
Give me art,or for god's sake give me death

Maybe a human will one day paint a monument to the ants
One that hums of the dead inspired
Narrating the fissures in the cloud rifts

Properly shading the edges of a crumbling society
Give me art and it's journey
I wish to be eaten by time
Slowly worn to the seams
Popping at the buttons
Smiling amongst a pile of wrinkles and Merlot
Writing postcards to those moments yet to come.......................

Give me part in the connective element
Give me art
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 83
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/22/2008 9:44:06 AM
Just wanted to say thanks to everyone who has and still posts in here. I may not comment on everyones thoughts/poetry but i do read them and its appreciated

Depression is comforting
Love is disturbing
Mistakes are forgiven
But never forgotten
Have you ever polluted yourself so much that you f*cked up reality?
Pollution, justification, garbage of the brain
Take out the trash
Pushing further, wild and untamed
Such a violation of what you used to be
Dance before me
Flames of the heart
Honor your heart
Follow what it tells you
Dont deny emotions

...But how can you when

All you have done is make mistakes
When its your biggest fear
Emotions
Shall it seal my fate?
Or be the death of me?
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 84
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/22/2008 7:33:19 PM
Cheap as a whore
Emotions come dime a dozen
Emptiness existence
Take the ax to your heart
Closed behind prison walls
Say those sweet things to me
Let me hang on the last bit of hope
Dangling for life
Dont let me fall
Or let go of the rope you bound
So my fate can be sealed into the ground
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 85
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/23/2008 9:08:53 AM
Nice piece T fully enjoyed it. Feel free to post as you wish here

Broken dreams
Broken heart
Broken glass
Shattered into pieces
Tremble like a solider
Deep into your trenches

Drink away painful memories
Hide insecurities
This path i walk on seemingly alone
Sponge bathe me in holy water
Maybe i will see the light

Cannot breathe, cannot escape
Prison, this small cell i am in
Until you enter my flesh
Until you walk in my shoes
You will never understand
I shall cut the noose
And fall where i may
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 86
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/23/2008 11:57:26 AM
Dont like raw silly x rated material? Then dont read this kthanks . I call this Silly c*ck, tricks are for Halloween, nun-sense really

Dont worry it wont hurt long
Nuckingfuts
Cream of corn
Cream of c*ck
Fruit roll up
Or
Roll up your c*ck
Get the hell out of my vision
Barb wire in my mouth
Here darling let me suck you off
Such a pr*ck!
Such sarcasm you pound out of your mouth
Even so
I would save my orgasm just for you
F*cking brillant
Save a kiss for me?
Kiss me or go to hell
Here here let me wash your mouth out
With bleach
 iaanybodyoutthere
Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 87
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/23/2008 5:42:22 PM
She,asked why I walked in sorrow, A brief chuckle


She,

after the morn noon arose
was named Sophia,or Sonia,something relevant to the s syllable

In answer to the prodding,I answered

"I saw them cast the limestone facades in to the kilns,Feeding father Christianity"

She sipped caffeine as I longed in the lost remembrance of burning wafers

To the door of the ronnin,

I acclaimed prose,

tripping on the flowers that dripped off garden vines

there were war kings on the hearth
Lonely concubines underneath



Lighting a slag, I baptized Bourbon in Resurrection

in comes a little to soon, a dogs day rendition of the blues


Another stony boy with a harmonica


She told me she would smile from the gates

"why"
I disclaimed the reputable offers


We were earth and slumber


Nothing more
nothing less
 iaanybodyoutthere
Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 88
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/23/2008 5:53:03 PM
The day has come
A roosters crow resigns his fate
The toll is tallied
Daybreak's.......mud encrusted boots
Wet stone,blade
I wonder the far side of the farm
Music to my ears
The timbre of steel to wood
Flesh folds
Heads roll at my overall shrouded figure
Over and over

Blood
Down
floating in a cycle that never ends


In this spinning downward edged precision



I am Zeus

unappeased

There are pillars to be built for me

Cartilage for the pigs to grind jaws on
They march post to post

forever vigilant
........................


My son Ricky fell to Peta's' persuasion

Now a Beret covered liberation hails from the haystack crows nest


I am the cyanide touching moisture

I know

My teeth have outlived Babylons battle with the sand


The tally was written by someone besides me

So crow,crow all your sorrows away

The dinner bell brings new,ah,refreshed

I am Louis the 8th

reborn
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 89
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/23/2008 8:30:48 PM
You guys rock

Skin crawl.....shuffle
Dont touch me
Because you never really meant it
Dont think about me
Because you never really wanted it
Dont f*cking touch me because i cant stand to be f*cking touched
Lift the burden from your life
Its so easy
Let me go
It wasnt written in the cards
The cards i am dealt
Always the joker
Always the old maid
F*ck your kings and queens
And
Screw your aces high
Throw your royal flush down the toilet
And
Burn down your full house
My game was never poker anyways
More of a
Russian roulette of the heart kind of gal
 iaanybodyoutthere
Joined: 6/14/2008
Msg: 90
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/24/2008 4:07:53 PM
A picture and earl grey tea
I can not help but think she is beautiful,like you could never understand,covered beds and passion
there are not enough doors
for me to open or for me to close
i think of something of an enigma
but dream of simplicity
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 91
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/25/2008 12:42:36 PM
The following program is a paid advertisement.....Its called Infomercial love

Dont you want to be like everyone else and experience the amazing feeling of love?
Heart for sale
Grab it while you can
Such a steal
At a very low price
Dont you want a bleeding heart
One that pumps and breathes as much as you
I know you do, i know you can feel it
Tingling of the soul
Pop rocks of the heart

...For only $9.99 plus applicable taxes, (Canadian funds) this product could be yours! If you call within minutes we will also include a free years worth of kleenex! Such a great deal if you act fast! Limited quantities so order now. Call 1-800-Crockofsh*t and an operator will be pleased to serve you.
-----------
Just as infomercials are a bunch of bull, so is love so dont full yourself with fantasies. Infomercials are never reality and love is just the same
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 92
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 6/25/2008 9:02:57 PM
Black waters of sin
The angel sits on a rock
Contemplates the meaning
Wishing for a river of blood
Heart to heart
Let it flow
An angel stripped of its wings
Because people refused to let her fly
Greediness
Taking pieces of her as souvenirs
As she blows you a kiss goodbye
She plunges into the
Black waters of sin
 livelovelaugh
Joined: 9/21/2005
Msg: 93
Raw and emotionally exposed....Dear Diary thoughts
Posted: 6/25/2008 9:24:43 PM
Colour leaches slowly from my skin
Joy drains aching from my heart
As memories linger,waver, fade
They attempt to pull apart
The prison on my reality
Walls seeping with responsibility
Cold, dull, black, stark
A memory pops...a freed balloon drifting in the dark
Uproarious laughter, shy timid grin
Coarse sand gritty, wet toes
Sun on my body warm. Sin
Real LIFE. Bills to pay, problems pending
Day by day existing
Shoulders sag, knees bending.
Memories of stolen kisses,
holding hands under spying stars
Bright,warm, clear
Drowning in moonlight
Ecstasy creeps so near.
I need, give me ,can you?
Demands rain daily down on broken spirit
Shoulders straighten, backbone stiff
Clouded mind. Try to clear it
Pop..more memories come
Dancing, grind, sway , slow
Friends,family new to my heart
I cannot let them go
Life was made for living
Laughter,warmth,love. It should
Contain,overflow,surround us
Melt the numbness from our soul
 Just_Serendipity
Joined: 4/7/2008
Msg: 94
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Raw and emotionally exposed....Dear Diary thoughts
Posted: 6/26/2008 6:42:03 AM
Perfection

Today I wondered along the shore
The wind blew loud and furiously
I watched as waves crashed with a roar
And a seagull spied me curiously

Then looking down towards my feet
I found a stone rounded to perfection
So smoothly refined and sleekly neat
And it came to me upon reflection

That this perfection of cold stone grey
Was made so by the onslaught of sea
Tossed, battered and chipped away
Till it’s edges were worn and scar free

And so much like life now I can see
Beaten and blown this way and that
But will perfection ever come to me
Will my life ever be smooth and pat

Will the rough edges ever wear down?
So that only peace will exist for I
Love and joy and without a frown
Will my life be perfect… before I die

But the past sh*t clings clawing
Eating away at any smoothness
Like an algae rotting and destroying
A leach infested abscess
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 95
Raw and emotionally exposed....Dear Diary thoughts
Posted: 6/27/2008 9:34:15 AM
Lovin the writes. Especially the last paragraph Serendipity

Chaotic
Promises are empty
Such uncertainty
No one safe
Nothing sacred
Doesnt anyone believe in something strong enough anymore?
Circumstances stand in the way
Losing the will to fight
Spiraling them down into nothingness
Is this what we have become?
Weak, defenseless and lazy
Void
The tears will never fill
The tears will never stop
Behind a wall in a fortress of darkness
Feeling empty
Pain, insanity
Chaining yourself to the decaying of eternity
Destroying all that comes through your path in cold flames
Insecurities and fear
Grabs a hold and doesnt let go
Tears have caused many floods
Broke the dam
Confusion
Delusion
Illusions
A fire consumes your brain
Your heart that once beats sits rotting away
Eyes are wired shut
Ears are deaf to those who show care
Everything gets tossed in the wind
In a chaotic mess
 Just_Serendipity
Joined: 4/7/2008
Msg: 96
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Raw and emotionally exposed....Dear Diary thoughts
Posted: 6/27/2008 11:11:35 AM

Lovin the writes. Especially the last paragraph Serendipity


Thank you Visual. funnily enough I was sad when I wrote the first 5 paragraphs and added the last when I was angry, perhaps I should write more in this frame of mind


Circumstances stand in the way
Losing the will to fight
Spiraling them down into nothingness



Insecurities and fear
Grabs a hold and doesnt let go
Tears have caused many floods
Broke the dam
Confusion
Delusion
Illusions
A fire consumes your brain


Having to take my ex through the courts on 4 different counts I can sometimes well associate with your words. My only consolation is that I won the first battle, almost certain to win the second and now I have a good man beside me to help me win the war.
 carlos_007
Joined: 2/25/2008
Msg: 97
Raw and emotionally exposed....
Posted: 6/27/2008 1:07:20 PM
Time to go, Ive had enough.
I can't take the pain you put me through.
Even though, you think it's not heavy stuff.
You drove me insane, you turned the screw.

You made this mess, but i'm paying the price.
You screwed me very well.
My best guess you screwed me twice.
As you can see, now I'm going to hell.

While i put this barrel in my mouth,
I only think of you.
you left me sterile, and ill of health.
I'll never again feel blue.

'cause when I'm dead, no more pain,
no more fun, no more you.
But like the rain, dried up by the sun.
I'll soon be forgotten too.
 carlos_007
Joined: 2/25/2008
Msg: 98
Raw and emotionally exposed....
Posted: 6/27/2008 1:41:28 PM
I hate you, you make me sick.
don't you have anything better to do,
than be a prick.

Tell me what's your bother,
why do you always have shit to say.
was it your father, did he make you this way.

You know, I feel sad. 'Cause you don't realize.
some day, someone will get real mad
and cut you down to your proper size.

When you're down there, you will see
No one will care, not even me.

There's only one way one solution.
To stop your everyday verbal pollution.

It's not cutting out your tounge,
although that would be fun.
You aught to be hung,
You're still someones son.

So the only way
I can clear my head.
Is to stay away,
and wish you were dead.
 carlos_007
Joined: 2/25/2008
Msg: 99
Raw and emotionally exposed....
Posted: 6/28/2008 10:12:33 PM
Maybe that second one should not be here. I was on a roll, sorry.
 NaiveAndWitty
Joined: 4/14/2007
Msg: 100
Raw and emotionally exposed....
Posted: 6/28/2008 10:35:01 PM
i come back time and again, visual. you truly have the intensities and passions of the poet. and this comment goes beyond what you refer to as the physical distortion. i thank you for sharing such pieces of yourself.
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