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 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 146
Raw and emotionally exposed....Page 5 of 15    (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)
Apathy and gluttony always made a good team
Another perf*cked day ahead of me
Some people say i am must losing it but
When did i really have it?
From the past i own nothing
From the future i want everything
From the present i want something
It never hurts to dream
It just hurts to wake up
But even out of chaos
There comes beauty
 Shayma
Joined: 7/7/2008
Msg: 147
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/1/2008 4:55:55 AM
raw ...emotionally exposed....i like

Never done this before. Be gentle

dear diary

Sat with rage today….rage that broke
not mine……it could have been,
but that was another time and place
I sensed it ....early in the telling
pain...lips tremble....broken control...then gone...
unexpected .....forked lightning
across a cloudless sky
in a brutal face
a face for his world....survival kit.
Pause……avoided nerve revisited….and the
mask turned nimbus…..glowering….
a flash of hate in eyes….his familiar friend
pricked me for intruding.
A storm was coming.
Slowly…. the rumble of distant truth
a thunder…..buried deep…..deep
so deep…needing to be dead….but alive
corrosive….only bearable and almost forgotten
in the fix…. venous hiss……..intimate
and back to the womb.
He knew I knew….locked eyes held and held
defiant….scanning…… for treachery,
and finding none…..risked his soul…
and broke ……broke with eyes that
now unseeing turned inward back…
back.
I listened,
still…. so still, to the spilling,
cold ….robotic…..expressionless
the telling of another’s story
but it wasn’t……. it was his
became his…… rising into
the vent of hate and rage
I ……imagine …….and shudder…
comprehend …how…I cant ...but can

In silence following….. his quiet…
a soothing silence…he is heard and spent
and somewhere between the journey
back
from there to here
he has the face of a child….. and tears
for the first time….just a few…….since childhood
so do I…just a few
…….tears instead of rage!

I have been moved by a lot of what I have read from you all on this thread …Thank you

Love Shay
 carlos_007
Joined: 2/25/2008
Msg: 149
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/2/2008 4:42:10 PM
It has me, it wont let go.
tighter it squeases, till i cant take a breath.
all i can see, all that I know.
Is it teases, and brings me to the edge of my death.

There'll be no doubt, I'll sell my soul.
Eventhough, I know what's instore.
I'll seek it out, through every seedy hole.
'Cause it leaves me shaking, wanting it more.

Ah i found it, in me it flows.
It's induced uforia, inside me grows.
Through my veins, through my head it blows
and it does, what it knows.

my eyes get a cloudy haze,
I'm again in it's grip.
I have not slept for days,
Ahh, into darkness i finally slip.
 mthuckleberry
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 157
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/3/2008 8:52:08 PM
There's a crack in everything,
I've heard somewhere around
That's how the light
a way in is found.
So as a heart breaks
and flood gates open wide
the light of truth
finds its way inside
Immersing your soul
with sadness and knowing
but preparing you for a new day
when healed and glowing
Only then will love will find
a new abode
In an open ready heart
to which so much has been showed.
So, embrace the pain
and let todays tears flow
Living in the moment
births a lighter tomorrow.
 transcend
Joined: 1/13/2007
Msg: 159
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/3/2008 11:46:27 PM
what a gift clarity seems, knowing why can be expensive
understanding is always cheaper than a head in the sand
lets see ..head in sand ..just what part of me am i offering to others?
uh oh
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 160
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/4/2008 6:57:48 AM
Hi everyone sorry i havent been around lately but the writing bug just wasnt there. Thanks for choosing my thread to post your stuff, many talent in here i am jealous

Would you sell soul if you could?
I think some people would.
Or maybe they should?
Feel the essence of passion
Within their emptiness of their flesh
Your soul makes you feel
Can you feel anymore?
Your eyes let you see
Can you see anymore?
Are you just a robot going through the motions of life?
Perhaps you did sell your soul
Can one be truly comfortable with themselves?
Or does your skin always have to crawl?
Breathe me into you
Legs apart
Theres a light to guide you on your journey
Thrust thrust
Feel the center of my being
Under the pale moon light
Share my soul
Do not steal
Do not take it for granted
For i can sell it at any minute
Will you let chaos rape you off who you are?
Or will you guard your soul with every last breath?
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 162
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/8/2008 8:11:14 PM
Tonight i want you beside me.
Lay next to me in my soft bed.
Let my voice sing you a lullaby as you relax.
Taking all your problems away.
Just you and me tonight.
Nothing else matters.
Feel the passion in the tip of my finger
As it gently rubs up and down your chest.
Feeling you push my hair aside you kiss my neck.
Play with my hair and turn me on.
Flesh against flesh
Relax with me tonight
De-stress with me
Be with me
In this moment
Of nothingness
Because in nothingness
Nothing matters
But your heart beat and mine
 carlos_007
Joined: 2/25/2008
Msg: 164
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/9/2008 8:32:18 PM
All i want,
is peace and quiet.
all the memories in my brain,
always cause a riot.
I'm sick and tired,
of trying to fight it.

Someone please,
put me out of my missery.
I'm ****ing hurting,
can't you see.
What will it take,
to get a bullet in me.

Not the gut,
I don't want this to last.
I'm tired of living,
in my past.
So put it in my head,
do it fast.


Will you help,
or will you run.
I won't be missed,
I'm no one.
If you need to,
you can use my gun.
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 167
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/12/2008 9:03:48 AM
I breathe in the humid air
Trying to find my amazing grace
Florescent lights show me the way
Every tear drop that falls from my face
Every salty tear drop that i taste
Reminds me that i am alive
Reminds me that i feel
Breathe into your hands
Cup them like a glass
I will drink from your palms
Imagining all the if onlys
That are playing constantly in my head
Rasping sensation at the back of my throat
Ragged and shallow
I struggle
To find
I need that amazing grace
To help me find the way
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 170
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/13/2008 9:35:06 AM
Good to see you Render dont be a stranger eh. Hey Lust funny finding you here. You really need to change your name. Just saying...Ok kiddies close your eyes....This isnt for you but the soulja boy over there

Theres a throbbing pulse in my mind, in my p*ssy, in my being
It calls out to you, its hungry
To taste you, touch you, devour you and f*ck you
You got under my skin with great ease
Sleepless nights
Torments my mind
Consume me with your flesh
Remove my panties with your teeth
Are you hungry?
Feast upon my warmness
Sexual pleasure feels like heaven
Wont you take me to your cloud angel?
Dont be gentle bend me over
Take me to the lust you feel
Fingertips finding the moist spot
Thats right...right there
Your fingers as stiff as your c*ck
Your lips against my tender nipple
Bite me like a razor blade slicing my skin
Spank me, pull my hair
Just never spare me
Not now, not ever!
 BerserkPoet
Joined: 11/21/2006
Msg: 173
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Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/15/2008 8:01:23 PM
Smile for a second or two
Don't let the rest of the world's problems destroy what's deep down inside of you
When you smile don't you feel loved by atleast yourself
Does the rest of this retarded world even matter like cobwebs upon a shelf
Relax it'll work out in the end if you stay true
Love yourself is all that matters deep inside of you

writing that from the very lair of my wounded heart. Almost took my life tonight. Why? I have no real idea except i'm emotionally drained by the world. So Kim if you ever feel down there's always someone out there worse. Even worse than me I know but it's too hard to realise it. Anyway writing that poem made me feel a lil better thanks for listening.
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 175
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/18/2008 8:53:05 AM
Wow B i dont know what to say to that really. I think in some point in our lives we have all been there, well some of us. I am glad you are here, if you ever need to talk you know how to press send message.

Hey R wanna come over and play house sometime? Just askin. Need some inspiration to say yes? No problem.

I want to feel his skin against mine, bare flesh against bare flesh, to know how warm he feels, to feel his lips brush up against mine teasing me before we kiss, to succumb to his heat as his embraces me in his arms, to look into his eyes and see the tiny sparkle, to see his lips curve up into a smile, the only smile thats meant for me, i want to feel him press his body into me, crush me with your being, to feel him enter me, heaven on earth, hot as hell, the magical burst inside my body as he feels me from the inside out.
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 178
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 8/18/2008 10:58:02 AM
Stepping stones into the ocean eh?
Cyber? No way
Seduce? Hell yeah


How about a fancy dinner?
At a fancy restaurant?
Chit chatting about nothing
About everything
Flirting across the table
Reaching across
Holding hands as we eat
Giving you a wink
Shoe off
Rubbing my foot up your leg
I see you shiver
As i giggle
Up up up
Reaching further
To the place
Rubbing with my foot
Cant concentrate on eating
Mind is elsewhere
I look into your eyes and ask you
Are you ready for dessert?
You nod knowing what i mean
We pay the bill and head home
With smiles on our faces
Home to share our most intimate dessert
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 182
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/1/2008 9:19:10 AM
The comfort you seek is not with me
But who can blame you
When i am dancing on insanity
I will succumb to the world around me
Toxic
I am failing fast
The peace within myself is gone
Lost amongst the missing
No poster to help me find it
No search or protocol
Crushing my spirit each day
Each day i die just a little bit
Fears overwhelm
Today i will become silent
Silent because of the darkness
Dont feel guilty
Dont feel responsible
This will all be over some day
No stress
No grief
Just smiles
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 184
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Posted: 9/11/2008 6:47:49 AM
Use me
Abuse me
Till you dont need me anymore
Confess
Such a mess
Comfort
In others
Such a rose that fades into the night
Darkness is what comforts me
Hidden behind artificial smiles
Such materialistic objects of desire
I am not here just to fill the empty void in your heart
People like that come dime a dozen
I call that the f*ck you factor
Give me one last kiss
Because
Someday
I will stand on my feet
Only to fall once again
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 185
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Posted: 9/14/2008 6:27:34 AM
This is where i come to the point and say:

I told you so Kim
They are all alike
Every one of them
It will never change
Always something waiting around the bin
Talk to others
Comfort you seek
Dont try to deny
Realizes all the lies
Move forward
You cant
When you already did
Ha
The bed wasnt even cold yet
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 186
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Posted: 9/14/2008 6:27:49 AM
Tumbling failure
Tumbling seething vortex of utter confusion
Up
Down
Which way is the way to go?
A fork in the road
A spoon in the tree
A knife in my back
And a middle finger showing you the way to go
Fairytales and riddles
Make me happy in the panties
Twitching with delight
Smile like a fool
Pretending was always my thing
Lets play dress up shall we?
You pretend to care
And i will continue to drown
Misery is home
Leave your lies at the door
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 187
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/14/2008 6:28:01 AM
Buy one get one free
Cheap
Drowning in the red and blue substances
Brain freeze
Being swirled in the machine
Well feck you and your damn slushy
Stay the hell outta my way
Or least get me a straw
So i can share it
Greedy will only get you so far
Make it a bendy straw please

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Kims smarts for the day:

Some people are apathetic
I mean pathetic
Such oxymorons
I mean morons
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 188
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/14/2008 6:28:35 AM
Use me
Abuse me
Till you dont need me anymore
Confess
Such a mess
Comfort
In others
Such a rose that fades into the night
Darkness is what comforts me
Hidden behind artificial smiles
Such materialistic objects of desire
I am not here just to fill the empty void in your heart
People like that come dime a dozen
I call that the f*ck you factor
Give me one last kiss
Because
Someday
I will stand on my feet
Only to fall once again
 ash.i.am
Joined: 8/14/2008
Msg: 189
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/14/2008 11:25:51 AM

I call that the f*ck you factor
Give me one last kiss
Because
Someday
I will stand on my feet
Only to fall once again


yeah....the "we're all fuked factor"...nice....well said....
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 190
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/15/2008 8:21:04 PM
Nothing like anger to make the veins pump with full energy!

Buncha fecking liars
Guilty conscious get the best of you?
Point fingers at me
Because inside it was eating you all along
Dead turned to black
Too bad i didnt listen to the warnings before
But hey even i can be blind
Label me the wh*re
Who wants first dibs?
HA!
Zee feck you factor is always in affect
Toodles


PS Goodbye
 ash.i.am
Joined: 8/14/2008
Msg: 191
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Posted: 9/15/2008 8:39:29 PM
for the record: i just meant "we're all fuked...'cause we all fall...and rise to our feet..only to fall again"....labels suck (no matter who creates them)...fuk 'em....we're all human....period.....and anyone that would judge you soo quickly ain't really worth worryin' about....'tis life....and any of us who are honest with ourselves, would admit that we've worn those shoes....and may very well wear them again, in some other backwards ass way if we point fingers enough....'tis life....

sorry for your pain
but YOU WILL rise again
and any who would shun you
in the end
were never, in the beginning,
to be considered a friend


not that you gave a fuk
what i had to say
but me, being me,
i said it anyway
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 192
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Posted: 9/15/2008 8:45:16 PM
I swear i never heard the word shun before the internets. Of course i care what you have to say. I dont always uhh listen to advice but i do hear it.haha!

Pain tells me i am alive
Pain reminds me that i do care
Pain reminds me i am human
Pain reminds me that others dont care
Pain reminds me that i feel
Pain is a b*tch and so am i
You either like it or you dont
Thats your choice in life
Good thing everything isnt always gravy
Because i have about run out of french fries



Of course the word you was used in general form
 alotmarc1
Joined: 6/15/2008
Msg: 193
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Posted: 9/16/2008 5:46:00 AM
Finally some real inspiration....Hope you dont mind....

pain yea I know there is a need
joy wouldnt feel so good without it
but fck man does it have to make me bleed
think this time it got the jugular
cant stop this shyt from spillin from me
gota find someone to use as a plug
maybe even take up a new drug
get outa this rut and flee
else I take it out on everybody else
I can see my pissed off self
is gona fckin ruin everything around me
got me on go! ready to snap
lookin for a chance to get rid of this crap
Im eatin at my own fckin character
cant see lettin this shyt have
this much control over me
I refuse not to find a way
even if that means I havta
bounce someone's innocent head off the floor
yea I declare war
so if you see me
best find a door
cause my pain fixin to make it rain
 Visualdistortion
Joined: 1/13/2008
Msg: 194
Raw and emotionally exposed, welcome to my world.
Posted: 9/16/2008 10:55:01 AM
You are welcome here anytime my thread its dedicated to those times we all need to unload

Welcome to the confuzzled part of the internet
Where people are real
And have real emotions
Its more than a screen, its more than a past time
People feel, people smile, people cry
Sometimes even people you know die
Its life this thing we call the internet
A world of useless knowledge
A world of useful knowledge
The real world just isnt out there
Its in here too
So pull up your seat
Will you make a friend or foe today?
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