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Joined: 2/8/2008
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I wrote this for a special guy not too long ago....... the only poem I ever wrote for someone.
I Whispered

I whispered to you during the night
Did you hear it?
Was it caught up with the wind
Like feet on the dance floor
Swept away by the stir of melody?
Did the words
soft and gentle
rest quietly on the clouds
adrift among mountain peaks
in the glory of moonlit splender?
Did they fly with swift gales
brushing the prairies that lie between us
to be kissed by the sun
as you awoke to a new day?
While sweet slumber faded into the dawn
Did a smile cross your face
intuitive and knowing?
I whispered to you during the night
Did you hear it?
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 2
Poem : I Whispered
Posted: 5/20/2008 3:08:56 PM
Thanks tropical...... Its kinda new for me.... but I am enjoying it!
Joined: 9/19/2006
Msg: 3
Poem : I Whispered
Posted: 5/20/2008 7:22:33 PM
an intimate look, into a passionate mind! Lovely write Huck!
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 4
Poem : I Whispered
Posted: 5/21/2008 5:45:41 AM
Thanks everyone...... Appreciate the encouragement... Will definitely keep working on it.... but this really IS pretty new to me. Whispered really did start with middle of the night thoughts that I penned in the morning when I awoke. It flows when the feelings are strong and the inspiration is there...... more difficult when its not?? Again though...thanks !!!!
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 5
Poem : I Whispered and other random words.....
Posted: 5/21/2008 2:42:36 PM
What Do I Do??

It seems a familiar feeling
Perhaps you know it well
I stand here with a heart rejected
I thought it safe, .... I thought it protected.

What do I do with the love I now feel?
Do I put it in a box?
Will it cuddle with my socks?
Can I save it for a rainy day?
Will it smile at me when the skies turn gray?

Can I toss it from a mountain high....
Caught up in the wind, .....can I wave goodbye?
A heart so full like a river in spring
Designed to flow,... and wanting to sing.

You built a dam,
And your music stopped playing.
And now I stand here,
in tears and dismaying.

I know that I'll heal
And I know my heart will mend.
But my wish for this love
was to your heart to send.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 6
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Posted: 5/22/2008 6:41:27 AM
Deeply touching and encouraging words , Salty..... thanks for sharing them here!

And thanks, Lucky!
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 7
Poem : I Whispered and other random words.....
Posted: 6/6/2008 3:20:50 PM
Spring Into Dance

Open Skies envelope a world of thought.
In drifting clouds deep feelings now caught.
Full as with raindrops, quiet tears may fall.
Reaching the ground, to the soul they each call.....

Dreams interwoven like lacy young leaves
A soft wind blows and they gently tease
Stirring imagination, inspiring to create
Swift currents erase, and forge a new fate.

Tender new blossoms open gracefully in time.
Nourished by love as fresh rays of light shine.
A melody breaks through as new hopes prance.
Quiet steps taken now spring into dance.
Joined: 5/16/2006
Msg: 8
Poem : I Whispered and other random words.....
Posted: 6/6/2008 4:46:17 PM
You poem was really nice, good write.
Joined: 7/4/2006
Msg: 9
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Poem : I Whispered and other random words.....
Posted: 6/18/2008 9:05:44 PM
pretty writes in you mthuck..
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 10
Poem : I Whispered and other random words.....
Posted: 6/18/2008 9:13:20 PM
~~~~~written a bit ago...but just now posting....~~~~

The Hues of You

Flying above snowy peaks today,
Gazing beyond a blinding sun,
I ponder the beauty of your heart.
My own sighs, sadly undone.

Cotton ball clouds nestle below me in splendor,
While effervescent lakes invite my eye.
They draw me into the depths of your soul,
Fueling mine, still, with desire.

My world is colored with the hues of you.
The palette from each stroke of your brush.
Beautiful images painted by eloquent words
Leave me longing to yet know your touch.

All of this beauty now shrouded by shadows,
The rest of our journey unknown.
Yet I dream of a day when our trails might merge,
Our hearts then, never alone.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 11
Behind a glass wall.
Posted: 8/28/2008 10:28:24 PM
You stand behind a glass wall
built to protect your heart
so with love I write these words
as I sadly must depart.
Your invitation to share
will only bring more tears
for the boundaries you place between us
keep you from facing all your fears.
I know my words will cut right through
and pierce you to the core...
but only if you consider them
can they create an open door.
Someday I hope you'll rise up strong
open and ready to trust
but you'll need to face your demons
and fight them, yes you must.
Then the glass wall will shatter
and you will be able to trust and give
It is then that a fulfilling relationship
will find you , and you'll truly live.
From the depths of my heart
come these hopes and dreams so true
Whether a part of them or not,
I so desire them for you.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 12
Posted: 8/31/2008 1:05:43 PM
Thanks Hammy.....Wonderful for you to do a write here too!!!

And something really different for me......
In response to a really nice story shared by Grizzerman in Quotes.....

Two unknown persons
Crossing paths in an uncertain world
Souls connecting, hearts touching
Finding something rare
A special person
a kindred spirit
a soulmate perhaps.
Words of love spoken
and beliefs embraced
Presence in anothers life
forever promised.
As quickly as the other appeared
Suddenly gone
As if they had never played in the sand
sharing stories
happiness and hurts.
Hearts that will never touch again
Its quick love
in a throwaway world.
Joined: 7/4/2006
Msg: 13
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Posted: 8/31/2008 1:24:32 PM
a passing of time ,some words that must ryhme
two souls intertwined,hearts so sublime
treat each other kind,ain't love devine
when will i find..................................................
Joined: 4/24/2008
Msg: 14
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I Whispered
Posted: 9/3/2008 9:22:17 PM
I whispered to the wind,
The breeze answered.
I whispered by the ocean,
A white capped wave rolled in.
I whispered near the river,
The breeze
Sent ripples
With smudges of foam.
I whispered with the trees,
Autumn leaves cascaded.
I whispered to the flowers,
Their beautiful blooms smiled.
I whispered to the birds
While they sang their song.
The trees and the flowers
Audience for the wonderful chorus
That filled the morning air.
I whispered thanks to God
For His Creation all around me.
At that moment the sun's rays
Began their journey rising in the east.
Another day for us to be warm
On our earthly journey.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 15
I Whispered
Posted: 9/4/2008 1:35:26 AM
Thanks for adding something here, tranquilrose....... That was beautiful!!
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 16
I Whispered
Posted: 9/7/2008 9:46:15 AM
~~~bringing this one home from a resolution of sorts~~~~

Carrying me back
to a place I thought I'd left
Thoughts fueling emotions,
once smoldering
now with sparks from within,
fantasies and illusions
of what might have been
Flames of pain
crowning in trees of hope
but perhaps once ashes
within an outside view,
the knowing will take hold
that its over.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 17
I Whispered
Posted: 9/7/2008 10:33:41 AM
The deer are feeding
and the baby's so grown
viewing outside my window
sad thoughts are sown..
I'll miss my wild friends
and my mountains so tall
the freshness of spring
larch's yellows of fall.
Beautiful clouds
dancing above these hills.
sometimes so awesome
they give me deep chills.
Though I wont be far,
I'll still be away
yearning to return
another day.
 Perfectly me
Joined: 12/10/2006
Msg: 18
I Whispered
Posted: 9/7/2008 10:40:57 AM
Just beautiful writes Berry, you have a great gift for flowing poems that take me on woodland walks with you.

Hammy you rock and you roll, loved reading you too.

grizzerman, I always enjoy you too

I'll have to come back when my muse is more amusing than it is right now.
Joined: 7/4/2006
Msg: 19
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I Whispered
Posted: 9/7/2008 10:45:49 AM
they'll look for you everyday
the babies will grow with lots to say
your thier's now in the world of wild
every small animal you watched grow,is also your child

so the days you can get away
go back to there,these words to say
jump out the car and yell,I LOVE YOU ALL
and remember the cold comes with the end of fall.....................
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 20
I Whispered
Posted: 9/7/2008 12:49:31 PM
Thank you Perfectly for the nice comments...

Grizz.....thanks for adding, and the great idea!!....... now, you just had to add that bit about winter didnt you?????

Riv..... thank you too for sharing your own.......hmmmmmmm do you think that baby deer would live in town in my little backyard ?? Ok.... a little too much, eh??
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 21
Its a process.....
Posted: 9/12/2008 7:26:25 AM
phantom pain
amputated dreams
heart bleeding
unraveled seams
minds delusion
hearts illusion
hope despairing
touched by caring
loves soothing balm
eases the burning
spirit calm
with growth and learning
steps supported
fears deported
time ever turning
continued journeying.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 22
Its a process.....
Posted: 9/12/2008 7:14:28 PM
Riv......thank you!!!

And hey Lunar!!!!........Thanks for adding something to my little world here!
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 23
Morning Moon
Posted: 9/15/2008 7:14:56 AM
Greeting the day as she begins her story
a huge morning moon rests in all its glory
over distant hills and goodbyes being told
as newness of life begins to unfold.

I pause and I ponder what meaning to draw
from all that I see as I gaze in deep awe.
I find that my thoughts do not run so deep
perhaps to just appreciate is all I should seek.
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 24
Morning Moon
Posted: 9/15/2008 3:36:08 PM
at first, Hammy, I was going to say "you may.......anytime!!"...... then I actually realized what you were talking about!!!!!

This gal can be blonde
at the darndest times
even when
she's reading your rhymes!!!

Thanks for adding, girl! .....
Joined: 2/8/2008
Msg: 25
Morning Moon
Posted: 9/19/2008 6:51:26 AM
deer lingering in the road.
casually meander to the side
wait till reaching the safe green hill
THEN take flight, ... run and hide.

funny creatures , these my friends
you've grown in number since I came
I'll miss your eyes, your steps , your play
town's busy life wont be the same.
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