|Asking for profile review.|
Posted: 4/4/2009 8:29:40 AM
|This is coming along nicely.|
Please delete this line in its entirety:
In terms of true relationships, I have only had one. I thought it would last and I was engaged but it didnt That's nobody's business.
Are you 'just' a cook, or do you have some type of specialty? It sounds like you are especially good at Italian cooking. That may need to go up closer to the top of your profile, as long as you throw in that you do the dishes after, too.... ! Do you have enough experience to call yourself a Chef yet? (I'm sorry, I don't know if there really is a difference but one seems more casual and the other sounds like a career and it's all about perception, isn't it!)
Where you talk about one day opening a restaurant and getting published, you use the word "support". This may come across to some as financially supporting you. Why not change that particular word to "Inspire"? Same meaning, not as scary.