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 iherdcats
Joined: 6/15/2006
Msg: 2
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this thread is up for deletion... the reason stated is "should be obvious"

not so obvious to I.
what does that mean, this catch phrase "should be obvious"
... i know, i know some smarty pants will tell me ... it should be obvious...

perhaps a little over used and bereft of meaning.

and give the guy a break - the OP - sounds like it was written as a form of healing.
 *mandrake*
Joined: 9/19/2006
Msg: 3
The Real Look t Pretty Women
Posted: 3/4/2009 8:34:37 AM
who ever voted this off....get a grip!

this is the poetry forum...and that is a poem...there is no reason to hit the delete button! None! I guess someone just got bored!

edit:...you may not like what he/she writes, but they have every right to post their poems here.
 grizzerman
Joined: 7/4/2006
Msg: 4
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The Real Look t Pretty Women
Posted: 3/4/2009 8:42:40 AM
i agree......................good poem.............also seems like he is working things out....
nothing wrong with this poem...............not degrading............i hope to read more from this author...................grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.............<-;
 Jason Nigrelli
Joined: 11/5/2008
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The Real Look t Pretty Women
Posted: 3/4/2009 8:45:41 AM
I agree - good poem - let the man speak his truth!
 seriousperson420247
Joined: 6/19/2011
Msg: 8
The Real Look t Pretty Women
Posted: 7/1/2011 9:13:42 PM
Women don't have to take things
men offer them to us
because they see our eyes
reflecting pain and sadness
from another man's doings

They can smell the scent of anguish
heartache
they see that their kind has placed a terrible burden upon
a drifted soul
with a quiet demeanor

They pour the drinks in until everyone is numb
we sit beneath the streetlamps pretending they are sun
then go about our business
sometimes an occasional mistress
but always a lady
until that Seventh Glass...
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