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 sauble
Joined: 2/6/2009
Msg: 2
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my first thought is - this is a creative idea (day in the life), but it's REALLY long, and a little mundane. I totally get that daily life is that way, but you're trying to entice someone into your world. Why don't you try the same idea but base it upon your 'perfect day', or your perfect week', something that includes some of your goals, aspirations, future thinking. A girl wants to see that a guy has direction, ambition, a clue about what is in store, and sometimes if she gets past the photos, maybe even image where she might fit into it all.

You are articulate and I like voluptous profiles...maybe these ideas will help.
 19justice78
Joined: 7/23/2008
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Posted: 6/22/2009 3:42:17 PM
Hum ....it's to long ... and the first sentence doesn't grab me enough to keep me reading.
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