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 mystyre
Joined: 12/19/2009
Msg: 1
Can I get some general feedback, please?Page 1 of 1    
I need some feedback on my profile. I already know I need to add a decent photo. However, is the message effective in piquing curiosity and wanting more information? Does it give off a feeling to the audience? How can I impliment those values? All constructive criticism is welcomed.
Thank you for your time.
 mystyre
Joined: 12/19/2009
Msg: 2
Can I get some general feedback, please?
Posted: 12/28/2009 4:47:19 PM
Alright, I've done some revamping. How do you like me now?
 You go first
Joined: 5/1/2008
Msg: 3
Can I get some general feedback, please?
Posted: 12/28/2009 6:24:06 PM
Still trying to figure out how you support yourself... or are you expecting your dates to pay? "Entrepreneur" doesn't really say anything unless you're Donald Trump. What pays the bills? Retail? Sales? Student loan?

Good for you for having goals and ambition and inviting the right type of lady to join you. That paragraph was particularly well written. Good luck.
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