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 ChillinChill
Joined: 6/17/2011
Msg: 1
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"The Love Poem"


Words and ryhmes with words sublime
Yet he is
Screaming at the door

What you are and what we were doesn't matter any more

Silly poems and candles illuminate the dark
What adventure steals away your heart
Why oh why have you fallen
Youre burried in your rut

Excuses hindering abusing the word but

but only if
but only if

just supports your fantasy

and only if
and only if

Keeps you owning meee...

Pen in hand you ink out all you feel
Will I find an open door to something real
Or is that just a bitter and cruel joke

I remember promises and all the foolish
Empty words you spoke

What you are and what we were doesn't matter anymore...

With words that rhyme those words that hurt
don't matter like before

Why can't I just say good bye?

God knows I'll ask him
To help me try

but only if
but only if

Don't spare your fantasies

and only if
and only if

You had never lied to me.
 U make it entertaining
Joined: 7/17/2009
Msg: 2
Surrendered Heart
Posted: 8/12/2011 7:35:22 AM
Welcome back Chill.

It's been too long!
 ChillinChill
Joined: 6/17/2011
Msg: 3
Surrendered Heart
Posted: 2/12/2012 12:30:25 PM
"Come"

Im here Im here too
Come back end the crash time
Gimme some beat
Something to work with
Something sweet...
I hear mad words
And their floating in my head

I hear your expertise
I hear your disease
I hear your anger my friend

I know why your actin up
What brought u to end
I know why it's crunch time
And your down with the rest.

Cuz you think your the best
Cuz you know your the best

Im here, I'm here too
Come back in the aftermath
Gimme some candy
Give me something sweet
Come on now.
I'm keeping to my side of the street

I'm here, I've been watching
All along
You just never invited me
To sing your songs
To sing your song

So.. Okay
It's okay, I know why your acting up
I know whats in your heart
I knew I remembered when
That was the day it was over again

I'm here... I'm here too
Come back and cud you give it up
Stop being a pretender....
Ahhh..BECAUSE I'm all set ...


I'm at a session, dumping on her
Sittin in your shyt
You'll have your own forshuaa
You know when it's your day to quit...

Ha.. I see the big show
Under your belt...
And you never let me show you
How I felt..



I'm here, I've been watching
All along
You just never invited me
To sing your songs
Yo sing your song

Come on sing
Say it
Say it


You wanted Chill
You wanted to slow your roll
And I'm sitting here still ..
You re outta control.


Sweet music it doesn't stop
Soooooths me for days
I'm not talking til your done, done...
I know Im gonna do me too
Yeah know the score
Do you want some more?

Come, Cuz I'm here too.
I'm saving something special for you
And there's nothing but truth
Come over here I'm not through


I'm here, I've been watching
All along
You just never invited me
To sing your songs
To sing your song.


m.mizzoni 2/12/2012
 ChillinChill
Joined: 6/17/2011
Msg: 4
Surrendered Heart
Posted: 3/3/2012 9:53:51 AM
Escape from the Offender

He finds his worth in subtle cues
And fights against things misconstrued
Guards his anger like dog and bone
He never brings his tools to hone
An eloquenece to words alone but
Spews out a venomous hate
To which he stays and lays in wait
Awish to find those who will relate
to darkened pain and in the lull
Grows restless because his sences dulled
Will perhaps take him to the place
Where mirrors reflect no other face.
And he has to look at his hateful stance
But wishes that there will be a chance
That he may make a clean escape
From walls that hoard his deafening hate
Is hurt that closes in his heart
And keeps him locked and far apart
From reality that would make him see
That pain was never born in me.
And yet his venomous attack
All though its off the beaten track
Will frame him in his destiny
And keep him far away from me.
I try not to read between the lines
The cruel intent turns to sublime
And falls upon the bearers lap
And I find freedom from his trap.
I cast the clothes onto the floor
His garb of hatred remains unworn
He retaliates to the thin air
Because the target isnt there




A poem I wrote December 19, 2009
I was just recently reminded why I wrote this... unfortunately.
mizzoni
 rockinscotto
Joined: 3/9/2012
Msg: 5
Surrendered Heart
Posted: 3/15/2012 7:14:56 PM
LIAR

You had to lie about me
I had to let it be...
That's how you set me free....

I watched you standing there,
waving your arms in the air
I couldn't believe what you said
Your vacant eyes were red
You looked like hell
and I can tell
you were choking out those lies

AS I remember it
Now take me if I'm wrong
I never went to you
You always came around

I never sat at your table
Never drank your wine
I never went to you
YOU CAME TO ME EVERY TIME

You had to lie about me
I had to let it be
That's how you set me free


I watched you take my pic
You know the tension was thick
I couldn't believe what you said
Your angry heart went dead
You looked like hell
and I can tell
you were choking out those lies


I never drove to your door
your always back for more
I never went to you
YOU CAME TO ME EVERY TIME

You had to lie about me
I had to let it be...
That's how you set me free....

I watched you sitting there
You asked for your special chair
I wouldn't believe a word
Your presence is absurd
You looked like hell
and I can tell
you were choking out those lies

I never said no to you
I did what you wanted me to..
BUT....
I never went to you
YOU CAME TO ME EVERY TIME

You had to lie about me
I had to let it be...
That's how you set me free..


written 3/8/2012

a charthartic excercize after listening to someone commit perjury.
 rockinscotto
Joined: 3/9/2012
Msg: 6
scotty7777dog
Posted: 3/16/2012 11:07:59 AM
" Transparent Man"

You shuffled your papers
And stood at the door
Looking at me
Looked at the floor

You wrote up that page
To set your stage
Lying about me
Hiding your rage

You spoke out of turn
No lesson learned
You made your bed
You can toss and turn

I read it out loud
Your antics allowed
You ruin yourself
Your foolish and proud

You think it's done
To fool someone
You make your mistakes
And blame everyone

Think that your free?
Can't even see
You gotta live
With your destiny

A false witness spoke
Given those quotes
Your mind is weak
You are a joke

Okay let it be
Think about me
When fate returns
You won't be free

Etching in stone
Your not alone
They see your act
Give you your bone

The reward is cheap
The lies steep
Maybe you won
Dig the hole deep

So say I care
When I'm not aware
Given the truth
you are not spared

Live with your life
Lie to your wife
It's set me free
From active strife

Pictures you paint
Stories you taint
Transparent man
You are no saint

So torment me
With your insanity
Never again
I am finally free.
 cesska
Joined: 11/7/2011
Msg: 7
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scotty7777dog
Posted: 7/15/2013 8:59:27 PM
don't bother me
I play for keeps
don't start nothing
you don't wanna finish

I no toy
I play for keeps
I give my heart for good
and I can't get it back
 PennyAnte
Joined: 4/17/2016
Msg: 8
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GO
Posted: 7/14/2017 5:12:59 PM
Yeah I got it back
Like a heart attack
It was serious
That was the part you
missed
I grew restless
Can't say it was in vain
I just had enough
Heartache and pain
You'll never win again
I'm gonna take it back
You stole it anyway
You tried to break it too
But I was on to you
Now I am done
You bet and lost this one
I'm on to better days
You can go your
Own way...
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