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 Sav_20
Joined: 7/7/2011
Msg: 1
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Wanted to get a perspective as to how my profile can be improved. Any tips on pics, words or the little things would be much appreciated! Seem to be getting some views, but not many responses - thought I could get some help! Thanks!
 Rozewater
Joined: 10/4/2010
Msg: 2
Ladies, want to help a guy out and critique my profile?
Posted: 7/12/2011 4:49:18 PM
In my opinion, for a Hang Out profile, it is fine. You may want to add a sentence of what you want to do when hanging out: i.e., you want to hang out for movies, dance clubs, walks in the park, visit a museum, see a show, etc? and how often do you envision, every couple of weeks, weekly, once a month?

Good luck.

 Spider_MacGyver
Joined: 6/11/2011
Msg: 3
Ladies, want to help a guy out and critique my profile?
Posted: 7/12/2011 6:36:41 PM
Great opening line but then it went all ordinary
 You go first
Joined: 5/1/2008
Msg: 4
Ladies, want to help a guy out and critique my profile?
Posted: 7/12/2011 9:56:27 PM
Movies, Sports, Television.
What kind?
Watch or play?
Favourite show?

Generic Interests in that field are boring and won't tempt your viewer to want to read further. They also don't give her anything to find in common. If you love Opera and I love Death Metal, there's not a lot to talk about. But - if we both love Techno, there's a starting point. Be specific. Now do the same with Sports and Television and add a couple more unique things you enjoy.

As mentioned, this is geared toward a buddy/hangout partner, not a romantic partner. Don't remove any info, but you can certainly add a couple of lines about who you'd like to meet - what personality traits/energy level is attractive to you? Have some fun.
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