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 Fsuguy1228
Joined: 3/25/2011
Msg: 1
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Hello, ladies and gentlemen!

Someone once said that you can't improve until you venture outside of your known world. So tell me, denizens of this online world we venture into, what say you?

(Comments on my profile, please)

-C
 Rozewater
Joined: 10/4/2010
Msg: 2
All advice welcome!
Posted: 7/12/2011 6:35:26 PM
Two things:

1) For a Dating profile, thosse are way too many details about you.

2) You have nothing about what kind of girl you hope to date.

I would suggest keeping your list of details about you to four or five. Add a sentence or two about what kind of girl you are looking for and also a sentence or two of what you would like to do on dates and how often you would like to hook-up. As well, mention whether you just want to date for now and not get serious or you are open (or not) to a possible long-term relationship.

Hope that helps. Good luck.
 Spider_MacGyver
Joined: 6/11/2011
Msg: 3
All advice welcome!
Posted: 7/12/2011 6:47:46 PM
Pix don't need improvement. Disagree that the list of details is too long since it's cliche'-free. Interesting contrast between being patient with people vs. impatient with books. Suggest speed-reading through some Steinbeck if you didn't already.
 cupcakefl
Joined: 6/16/2011
Msg: 4
All advice welcome!
Posted: 7/12/2011 7:06:04 PM
I think it's a great profile. Dean Koontz is my favorite author. Read 'Watchers' if you haven't already! :)
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