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 brtena
Joined: 8/31/2010
Msg: 1
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just looking for some advice on how to do this profile thing right i have a feeling its going to be a free for all but lets get over with. don't be shy let loose. i am just worried that i am turning women off from my profile. i feel its not personal enough? or maybe to personal i don't know. but it seems like when i message a girl they hardly ever reply and i think its mostly about my profile its presentation and such.. any advice criticism is welcome thank you much
 _eunique
Joined: 6/9/2011
Msg: 2
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Posted: 7/15/2011 11:54:28 PM
There is a woman in your pics. It may be a sis, a cousin, or possibly a girlfriend. We don't like wondering who she is (could be your wife if our imagination takes flight).

You have alot of "I am....I have...I consider...I,I,I..." Change the flow of your paragraph because this seems more self centered as opposed to who you're looking for.
 brtena
Joined: 8/31/2010
Msg: 3
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Posted: 7/16/2011 9:50:50 AM
thanks guys. any way on of you could help me with my punctuation?? not really good at all that mess and what do you mean self shots? thanks again really appreciate the input
 brtena
Joined: 8/31/2010
Msg: 4
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Posted: 7/16/2011 10:12:20 AM
haha thanks.. : ) got rid of those now im just working on the punctuation part. it's def not one of my strong points
 brtena
Joined: 8/31/2010
Msg: 5
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Posted: 7/16/2011 8:19:03 PM
thank you. just got to double check its much better?? ;) appreciate it people
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