|Don't make the picture of you and your niece the main photo. It's centered around her. I almost thought I was going to be looking at a profile of a brown haired girl and wondered how you came up with the the name bigred.|
Like the last guy said, get rid of the picture with you and the blond unless there's some caption about how's she's related to you. Or send her my way. just sayin'.
There's a few things in your description that I'd tidy up, but nothing that really is going to make or break it. Just one that I'd point out...
and punk (not hardcore but).Either have "(not hardcore though)" or "(but not hardcore)." The but(t) on the end is not attractive!