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 SunnyBlueSkies23
Joined: 5/16/2011
Msg: 1
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I'm SO sorry this got put in the wrong place last time.......a friend was over,trying to help me,and I guess,got a little confused.I REALLY wasn't trying "hyjack" anything,honest! Thanks! Jess : )
 Irish Eyez
Joined: 12/30/2008
Msg: 2
Could I PLEASE get someone to critique my profile?
Posted: 9/15/2011 7:25:33 PM
Not single/not looking?

Ok, you need paragraphs BIG time...while you're at it, run your profile through MS Word and correct ALL grammatical errors, etc.

Definitely need more and better pics and certainly at least one full length.

Btw, please have a space after ANY commas.
 IndyLee
Joined: 9/4/2011
Msg: 3
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Could I PLEASE get someone to critique my profile?
Posted: 10/2/2011 2:12:00 PM
Hi BB,
I've only been on POF for a month and I'm still trying to figure it out.
I think your profile is fine.
The only thing I would change is your "first date" - I'd keep it short since I don't know what Bliss Hits are, I'd take that out.
Best of luck to you!
IndyLee
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