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 makavali7dayz3
Joined: 2/15/2010
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Hello everyone.

I want to know if my profile is any good. constructive critcism only. I don't need to hear you suck as a person or you won't get any women because your ugly. I wish i don't even have to say that, but some people on here are very immature.

Any advice, tips, hints would be apperciated.
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
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Posted: 1/17/2013 9:20:10 AM
You need a main photo with you SMILING.
You skipped the Interests Section. You need to fill that out so women can see if they have anything in common with you.
Delete all the dying part. It way too intense for a dating profile.
Delete the last paragraph. The last few sentences are very negative. The beginning is too generic. Everyone wants that, right. Try to use better adjectives that not everyone would describe themselves as. Outgoing, reserved, sporty, nerdy, adventurous, outdoorsy...whatever you like. Add some fun activities to could enjoy together.
" I'd love to meet an outdoorsy woman to hike the trails with." Or whatever you like.
Capitalize all "I" s
 makavali7dayz3
Joined: 2/15/2010
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Posted: 1/17/2013 9:21:16 AM
Maybe that is a bit too intense. I am extremely positive. I didn't think i had any negativity in my profile. Thank you for pointing that out.
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
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Posted: 1/17/2013 9:24:34 AM
I've read your other posts in the forums. You seem like a really intelligent guy with a lot to offer, but it's not quite coming across in your profile.
 makavali7dayz3
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Posted: 1/17/2013 9:29:00 AM
You gals are right. This was kind of a rough draft and i was planning on making huge changes after i got opinions. I am going to take new pictures.
 makavali7dayz3
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Posted: 1/17/2013 10:46:33 AM
Any other opinions ? I feel like i should be getting alot more responses.
 makavali7dayz3
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Posted: 1/19/2013 7:52:54 AM
I posted new pictures and totally revamped it. Opinions please
 Indira46
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Posted: 1/19/2013 2:46:23 PM
Your new picture is terrible. Delete immediately
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