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|You can send a sh*it load of messages without getting an answer. Yeah, it comes with the territory.|
Main pic isn't helping you,pic 5 is on the right track for main but can be better. Group pics, bro pics don't help you either.
They don't like the pic, they don't read the message, they don't read the message they don't answer. Simple as that.
Wants to date but nothing serious is something guys can't afford to answer, put relationship unless you really really feel it's a lie.
Content of the about would do the trick for a lot of girls, just needs to be refined imo, remove all negativism and but's, sounds unsure.
ie your a good listener, period.
Capitalizing the ASS OFF feels a bit out of line.
|Review, and quetion.|
Posted: 3/10/2013 12:44:39 PM
|Separate paragraphs would make it more readable. |
Take out " (get used to it), " people know that it's one of your interests. If it's that big of deal to them they either won't get with you or if they try to change you then they probably won't be around very long.
Over all I think you've done a good job. I really like how you explain what you'd like to see with your future somebody "Some day I want to have kids, but mostly I want to find a girl I can travel with, rock out with, laugh my ass off with, and hopefully grow old with." and also what it would be like to be with you. That's probably the hardest part of writing a profile.