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 hashcannon
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Asian, We, DoubleP, Waiting and all you other guys rock, hard to believe this thing is still going and quite strong it seems to me (I see posts in here almost daily sometimes multiple pages in a day).. I think before the mods take it down for being to big, I should start another thread (PS why is there no link to poems and quotes at the forums page).. I like it better when the cinquain is carried on for a length, it seems to expel so much more ..either with the last word of your initial offering and expanded downward or perhaps compounded over and over with the last word from the previous post.. each cinquain seems to reach farther, more exploratory, thereby becoming more intellectually directed as to your perception of the previous postings or maybe your immediate vibe... what do you think..???


vibist
that 70's
idiom expressed
and sensationalized hereby
for all

for all
vibrations
may not be felt by all
some are much more insensate than
myself

myself
I'm wondering
how exactly am I
washing away, these stains on my
membrane

membrane
stained with cinquain
provincialized,
cluttered and devoid of all
others

Hash
2013
 m8t
Joined: 3/14/2013
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Posted: 4/7/2013 11:39:09 AM
others
making the chain
continue in rhythm
eternal living poetry
again
 cesska
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Posted: 4/7/2013 7:01:25 PM
don't
do not quit this
IT is my favorite
it strains the brain for good health
bon soir
 WeAre1
Joined: 3/18/2008
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Posted: 4/8/2013 12:34:16 PM
bon soir
she says softly
as daylight fades away
and the darkness of night beckons
again
 cesska
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Posted: 4/8/2013 10:57:00 PM
again
and again she
trys to forget him
live in today not tomorrow
but now
 m8t
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Posted: 4/8/2013 11:03:45 PM
but now
stars dance boldly
playing upon dark blue
reminding us another day
shall come
 hashcannon
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Posted: 4/9/2013 4:36:27 PM
shall come
the morning sun
bringing forth a new day
pushing back the darkness once more
welcome

shall come
her steady hand
adrift in the waking
unclenched from restless desire
longing

shall come
meaningless bombs
death, destruction and pain
mass murder disguised as our flag
war crimes

please ....

Hash
2013
 m8t
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Posted: 4/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
war crimes
stained upon hands
wth the monsters of hate
breeding greed with destructions lust
alive

alive
I hear that voice
calling through the pink mist
saying please save me if you can
right now

right now
it never ends
as the faces do change
upon the clocks of tomorrow
ticking...
 cesska
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Posted: 4/9/2013 8:23:29 PM
ticking
life ticks away
everything ticks away
so i have decided not to
tick on
 WeAre1
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Posted: 4/10/2013 11:15:33 AM
tick on
a metronome
the monotonous drone
keeping me in time while i play
away

away
drifting beyond
the confines of my mind
letting the sun clear the cobwebs
away

a way
to find the calm
releasing the alarm
relief to hear that horrid sound
no more
 hashcannon
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Posted: 4/10/2013 5:22:24 PM
no more
will i stand for
idle intolerance
beset upon my fellow kind
awake

no more
will i wander
adrift in a sea of
darkened ubiquitous
awake

no more
will i cry out
in blinded allegiance
for a neo-con warmonger
poser


ok this just plain rocks..!!! I wanna come back and use my own last line ....


Hash

2013
 cesska
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Posted: 4/10/2013 8:54:48 PM
poser
fake, fraud
men are fakes, frauds
my therapist says no,
then where
 hashcannon
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Posted: 4/11/2013 6:44:30 AM
then where (two syllables)
from lofty heights (four syllables)
upon your pedestal (six syllables)
your therapist is really a (eight syllables)
poser (two syllables)

fakes, frauds
charging you for
something you should deal with
yourself.. if you look closely you
will find

the path
it's always been
directly under your
pedestal.. hidden from your view
the truth

the truth
fakes and all frauds
haters, racists and mods
apathetic posers ..should be
outlawed

Hash

2013


cinquain; a five-line stanza a five-line verse formed of specific metre. Analogous to the Japanese verse forms haiku and tanka, it has two syllables in its first and last lines and four, six, and eight in the intervening three lines and generally has an iambic cadence.
 m8t
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Posted: 4/11/2013 9:31:35 AM
outlawed
the ice cold glance
freezing generic stance
of ignorant indifference
standing
 DoubleParked
Joined: 10/22/2008
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Posted: 4/11/2013 2:43:37 PM
Standing
there all alone
shifting weight, foot to foot
Alone, in a crowd of people
Thinking
 m8t
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Posted: 4/11/2013 3:48:11 PM
thinking
embracing life
and its diversity
tasting and hearing colors song
like food
 hashcannon
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Posted: 4/11/2013 4:35:08 PM
thinking
about drinking
and obvious effects
it's nigh time to tip one or three
like food

thinking
obnubilate
indeterminable
adumbrative obfuscation
clouds me

like food
when it suits me
but I hate doing dishes
pan seared arugula and mead
like food

Hash
2013
 m8t
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Posted: 4/11/2013 4:52:41 PM
like food
paint feeds me well
nourishing mind pallets
while my body craves every shade
spilling
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/11/2013 5:17:12 PM
spilling
crying over
hold of/on knowledge unspent
milk or seeds both needs a breath meant
teapot/cupped hands

teapot/cupped hands
clasps in/out freedom
pours rivers to life bends
art in eyes, sandman's courtship blinds
concept

&Etcs ToBeCont <3

*~*~Aw Abit late but alls good still..Maybe well..:That OlSir did it ..Thrilled for another Artsy Words Thread &all..Great works again hope keeps on &betters..
A Thanks to you Miss DP Chan to reminding me an such
Thinking
= ^ _^=
 DoubleParked
Joined: 10/22/2008
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Posted: 4/12/2013 2:01:37 PM
Concept
of the moment
is the agenda of
the day which is at hand and well
hidden
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/13/2013 9:21:54 AM
hidden
weekend in fritz
put to much on sale
realizing the error stayed
appear(ed/s)
 DoubleParked
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Posted: 4/15/2013 3:44:21 PM
Appeared
Before me then
Apparitions I feared
They seem to come--- again, again
In dreams
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/15/2013 4:06:04 PM
In dreams
the world is made
of melted marshmellows
and cotton candy pillows in
my hair
 m8t
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Posted: 4/15/2013 5:22:11 PM
my hair
through your fingers
wavy raven softness
smells like a bouquet of flowers
for you
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/15/2013 6:00:38 PM
for you
Kama Sutra
in a perfumed garden
at the gate of seventh heaven
awaits
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