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 Bearfish13
Joined: 11/3/2012
Msg: 1
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Second round on pof after meeting someone here and having a 8 month relationship with this person, im back and active here again, just looking to get back on the scene more or less, so any advice or things that I can add or subtract to my profile can help greatly

Thanks,

BF13
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
Msg: 2
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Posted: 5/8/2013 12:17:58 PM
i also, i also, i also....

That's all I see.

Capitalize your "I"s.

Lose the cliches.

This job title of yours "ask"? What does that entail being an "ask". Sounds boring.

Start over.

Read the profile writing tips up top in green.
 Bearfish13
Joined: 11/3/2012
Msg: 3
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Posted: 5/8/2013 1:47:55 PM
Thanks @Indira46
 Eric_Summit
Joined: 11/3/2009
Msg: 4
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Posted: 5/8/2013 2:38:12 PM
Using your same words, here is how I would rearrange and adjust your narrative to something like this:

I am an easygoing, reliable and dependable guy. My daily goal is to work hard and play harder.
Exploring weekend getaways with a fantastic and fun woman would be perfect. There are so many hidden gems all throughout California...one never knows what cool spot they will find with just a simple drive with the windows down and enjoying time together. More locally, attending pro basketball and baseball games are a favorite pastime.

Trying new cuisine and (attempting) new cooking recipes is fun. If the experiment is a total flop, it would allow us to try a new restaurant. Other hobbies and interests include physical fitness, reading, and music. My favorites are hip/hop and R/B sounds, yet I have a good ear and enjoy many types. Tell me about your most recent concert...as I will undoubtedly appreciate the artist.

As far as you know, I have a good sense of humor. Looking forward to getting to know you and meeting soon.
 Bearfish13
Joined: 11/3/2012
Msg: 5
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Posted: 5/8/2013 3:43:01 PM
Thanks for your response @eric_summit
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