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|Here is my profile:|
how awesome is it?
What is missing?
What can I improve?
|how would you rate this profile?!?|
Posted: 5/14/2013 2:46:56 PM
|It's a bit dull.|
Delete the words "about me" as it is already stated.
Delete the "my future" section. You can leave in the travel sentence.
Show some personality. It's bland.