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 DuKez87
Joined: 7/9/2010
Msg: 1
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Here is my profile:

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=20843171

how awesome is it?

What is missing?

What can I improve?
 Bearfish13
Joined: 11/3/2012
Msg: 2
how would you rate this profile?!?
Posted: 5/14/2013 1:33:20 PM
well you need to condense it, its too much, not that many people will read the whole thing
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
Msg: 3
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Posted: 5/14/2013 2:46:56 PM
It's a bit dull.

Delete the words "about me" as it is already stated.

Delete the "my future" section. You can leave in the travel sentence.

Show some personality. It's bland.
 DuKez87
Joined: 7/9/2010
Msg: 4
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Posted: 5/14/2013 3:17:25 PM
I took out first part. But I don't know how you can say it's bland.....
 DuKez87
Joined: 7/9/2010
Msg: 5
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Posted: 5/14/2013 3:36:04 PM
ok I changed up the writing.
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
Msg: 6
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Posted: 5/14/2013 3:37:54 PM
It looks exactly the same.

Delete the my future section.
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