|I think the picture of your smiling should be your main, it's the nicest one. But you could do with a new, nice clear headshot as a main. There are 8 slots photos, use them|
I would have thought someone who is a 'life coach' would be more positive and be able to sell himself...
I had this all worked out before I got to this part. But I forgot all the prolific things I was going to say. It was going to be something very eloquent, I mean you would've been thoroughly impressed. But I guess I'll just have to go with the usual,
3 and a half sentences in and you have said nothing about yourself, other than that you are forgetful and havn't much confidence in yourself.
Delete all this section and start off with something positive and shows you have self confidence. Women fin confidence attractive. Grab peoples attention in the first few lines or they may never get up to the parts where you say what a good guy you are.
Talk about the kind of person you are looking for and what you like about starting a new relationship. Try and use 'we and 'you' and 'us' language as much as 'I'.