|I've seen worse, it's an OK start, but it needs a lot of work.|
You put yourself in a 'class clown' category. Yet your profile reads a little dry and downbeat. If you are class clown, have fun with it, make us laugh.
'It's complicated' is not a valid category for profession, put a real answer, women your age will want to know what you do for a living. If you are unemployed it will drastically reduce the number of responses you get.
There are 8 slots for photos for a reason. Use them all! Nice, bright, clear photos. Don't crop a photo of you with your arm round a woman, people will instinctively think it's some ex you havn't quite got over.
Let's have a little read through this first paragraph....
I've been single for a while and I'm looking to get back into the dating scene. I'm probably better at doing this face-to-face. I'm a busy guy and between a full-time school schedule and other responsibilities, I don't have a whole lot of time for the bar scene (gets old anyway,) so I figured I'd try out this online dating thing. I don't have high expectations for actually meeting someone on this little venture, but I figure it's worth a shot. ;) I recently moved back to my home town after moving around quite a bit over the last 10+ years (there's no place like home) and most of my old friends are either busy with family and/or work, have moved away or I've just lost contact with them. So I'm looking to make some new friends and jump-start my social life. Friends first is probably the best way to find a good long-term match anyway.
Remember this is a dating site! You sound like you have no confidence in this site, online dating, or in yourself. Women find confidence attractive! You also basically say you don't want to date but just want to make friends. Women have PLENTY of male friends, they don't join a dating site to find new friends they join a dating site to....you guessed it....date.
I would say delete that paragraph all together (and maybe have a good think about why you are here).
The second paragraph is far better.
Add a little something about the kind of person you are looking for, what attributes you find attractive and what excites you about starting a new relationship.