|It's funny that you say you can't do anything with the photos, as your current one was clearly taken from a webcam or phone. It takes what, 5 seconds to take a photos, then a minute to upload it to the site?|
You claim to be a writer and an author of detective fiction. I am not a big fan of the genre but what I do know is crime fiction is often fueled by passion, desire and lust. Your profile makes you sound quite 'nice' but not really datable. Like I could imagine women wanting to be your friend from it, and wanting to talk about books, but you may never get out of the 'friend-zone'. Where is the passion and romance??
Also why is this there?
"It is a little known fact that the ‘Infinite Monkey Theorem’ stating that apes with typewriters and enough time could produce the entire works of Shakespeare, has been tried out in real life. The apes wrote five pages of ‘S’, hit the keyboard with a stone and then defecated on it!
Now you may be wondering what that has to do with my profile, well, the answer is; nothing at all, but it just goes to show how your mind can wander at the worst possible times.
So, onto the profile…
In a world where you have around 8 seconds to make an impression you have said exactly diddly-squat. As an intro to one of your books, this might be interesting, but all it will do is make the reader think NEXT.
As a writer, how would you get a reader hooked on a character, your leading man, in 3 paragraphs? So much so that the reader is desperate to find out more about him.