I know my profile is far from being good at all. I know it is not as bad as some other and that it needs some work
I never go half way I go all in when I know something is right........
...........Also I absolutely love kids.
Your sentence about "kids" should be removed immediately.
Also, save the drama for your mama.
By talking about it in your first couple of sentences,
you have essentially immersed your profile into the "Well of Drama."