|I have a slight issue with this section:|
I would describe myself as a down to earth guy who is laid back, independent, a little geeky (who isn't?). I'm genuine, have a sharp wit and say what's on my mind. I enjoy a good laugh and connect best with people who have a good sense of humor.
The issue is you just described about 99% of men on this site.
Down to earth
A bit geeky
Good sense of humour.
While these may all be true for you, they are true for many other guys too. Women will likely look at lots of profiles in a row and the issue is by they time they get to yours they have read the same thing a dozen times already.
So start with what makes you unique, how do you stand out from the crowd? Why should a girl date you over the millions of other guys on this site. Grab the readers attention with that kind of stuff and you'll do fine :)