Me gustaría que le echarais un vistazo a mi perfil y me dijerais cómo puedo mejorarlo.
My two years of High School Spanish classes, seem so long ago.
I do remember the teacher though....
She was taller than you might expect.
Long black straight hair, big brown eyes with a slim build.
When she leaned back, her body curved like a sliver of a waxing moon.
After "reading" your profile,
I was only able to deduce a few short facts.
You were born in a small village
and now ride a burro to work each day.
You play string instruments, mostly 80's tunes.
Creamed corn with bologna are your favorite foods.
Your father was a macho man, and taught you to shave with a straight razor.
I suggest adding more detail about you.
writing an English translation below
to eliminate any possible misinterpretation.