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 Selvino88
Joined: 11/9/2013
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I'm not sure what to include, but I wrote what was on my mind one night. I tried to keep it short, but with enougb pertinent information. If anyone has any constructive criticism I would appreciate it.
 ScooterSB
Joined: 8/25/2011
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Posted: 11/2/2014 11:01:36 AM
Honestly it is a poor effort. Imagine it was a girls profile and you clicked on it and read through it. What in those three line would make you think "oh my gosh I really need to date her!" Well thats what any woman visiting your profile will be thinking.

Start again:
Read these tip and give it another go.
http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts16292593.aspx

On top of that these are my top questions to answer in a profile, answer them well and it will really stand out from the crowd.

What are you passionate about? (Women love a passionate guy with fire in his belly)
What makes you special and unique?
Why should a woman date you over every other guy on this site?
What is the most exciting part of your life right now?
What attributes do you find attractive in a woman?
What is it like to date you?
What does romance look like for you?
 oldfashmntman
Joined: 10/20/2009
Msg: 3
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Posted: 11/2/2014 2:28:36 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^ what Scooter said, read those profile tips, then post back to THIS thread and someone will help you tweak it.

Best wishes

Jerry
 Eric_Summit
Joined: 11/3/2009
Msg: 4
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Posted: 11/2/2014 4:02:16 PM
That is an interesting Halloween costume pic as your main image.
You should add a photo caption to tell more about it. Paint a picture, so to speak.

Speaking of pics, you will need more!
Have a friend take two dozen well-lit, OUTDOOR, crisp photographs using a high-quality digital camera...which is preferred over a fuzzy cellphone. This is primarily due to better ergonomics and superior capability of a camera to process available light. Include a variety of backgrounds, activities, and various articles of clothing to add greater interest. Make sure there are enough without hats or sunglasses. Have both close-ups and full-body images. Upload the best pics of the bunch. Ensure you continue to date and caption each...to make them more entertaining to read. Good luck with your romantic search. :-)
 tennistown
Joined: 9/7/2011
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Posted: 11/3/2014 11:15:14 AM

I tried to keep it short, but with enougb pertinent information.






So far I have fixed my car a couple times...and I am no mechanic so I felt proud of myself.



Does your car need fixing a lot?


Some sort of jalopy,
your going to continue driving
until the wheels finally just fall off?

I understand the fulfilling gratification
of completing an arduous task, unscathed.

I suggest replacing that last sentence of your "About Me"
with a different example of your astute abilities.

Especially, in light of your main picture,
riding the bus, instead of your car.
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