wondering where I could possibly improve?
You came to the right place.
You main picture should be replaced.
It currently looks like some sort of "fog machine"
went haywire moments before the camera went "click".
Plus, your shirt.....
Now, I'm no fashion Guru.
But it looks like you pulled that shirt from a hanger in your Moms closet.
Now if deep-V tee shirts are trendy "down under,"
and straight guys are wearing them too,
then forget my advice to ditch that shirt.
Think I'll throw another shrimp on the Barbie, tonight.