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 tennistown
Joined: 9/7/2011
Msg: 2
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Maybe is my photos or what i writted in profile.


I will comment on what you have writted in your profile.


From the "interests" section.....




Good food - pizza is mine number 1
that why i make it myself from strach



I also like pizza,
especially if it's made from scratch.




Hang out with friends on friday
and saturday ok unless is my princess
then i will have to sorry to b




Huh?
Perhaps a rewrite of your interests would be best.
If they show up in blue, you are doing it right.

You have lots of potential.
And,
room for improvement.
Good luck.
 oldfashmntman
Joined: 10/20/2009
Msg: 3
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Posted: 11/17/2014 5:23:07 PM

Ohhh... there is soo much to write but you probably bored right now lol


Bingo OP, you pretty much hit the nail on the head there, not good AT ALL.

Check out the profile tip at the top of the page in green, then post back to THIS thread and someone will help you tweak it.
 Forums_only
Joined: 7/20/2014
Msg: 4
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Posted: 11/17/2014 7:19:51 PM
I'll guess that English is not your first language?

You need to explain that in your very first sentence so that any odd grammar structure or spelling issues can be read with the appropriate accent. You can be forgiven a lot if you have a cute accent.

The cheekbones are killer. Why no big smile???
 Forums_only
Joined: 7/20/2014
Msg: 8
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Posted: 11/18/2014 7:17:37 AM
Much better opening line! Even with the spelling mistakes your personality comes through much better.

Even though YOU think you look funny or wierd or whatever when you smile, the woman who is reading your profile and you decide to meet up with will want to see it anyway. You'd be surprised how wrong you are!
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