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Take this out. It sounds negative:
but I'd need some convincing about having kids of my own. No dramatic reasons, and if you’re curious then feel free to ask why.
For the first date, I wouldn't be so specific about what the food and beverage choices are going to be. She might prefer something else entirely:
First date - coffee and cake (or hot chocolate for me, I never grew up in some ways), or a drink.
I would leave this out entirely. It sounds too controlling. Let the lady pick the venue. vvvvvv
Second date - walk with a pub at the end, live music in a beer garden, trip to the Snowdome, or a picnic in the park (depending on the time of year!).