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 wavesinthepacific
Joined: 12/9/2015
Msg: 1
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Hi there people.

I didnt even know about these forums. Anyway if anyone would like to look at my profile and provide some feedback it would be interesting to hear some honesty I wouldn't get otherwise.

http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=109152219

Thanks in advance. I, like some others here don't have too much luck but I try.
 Ouija2025
Joined: 6/11/2014
Msg: 2
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Posted: 2/6/2016 8:08:35 AM
Hi
Are you Justin or was the photographer?
Add your name instead of about me
Hon - women already have friends.. how you have crafted this means you going to get friendzoned. Dating profile remember?
Get rid of all the negativity ( not caring for Vegas, women here not liking black men, etc)
What do you do for work> state it
What kind of woman are you drawn to? What is it going to be like to date you?
If you don't give her some idea then she won't reckon it is worth meeting
Your Main is wonderful. All pictures should be current
Enuff with the awkward.. you used that word so much I was left wondering if you are well, awkward :/
 oldfashmntman
Joined: 10/20/2009
Msg: 3
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Posted: 2/6/2016 8:39:18 AM
I concur with the reply above, change those items.
 tennistown
Joined: 9/7/2011
Msg: 4
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Posted: 2/6/2016 9:01:35 AM

. . . it would be interesting to hear some honesty I wouldn't get otherwise.




I will be honest. Can you handle the truth?



EVERY paragraph in your "About Me"
contained some negativity. Was that
what you were attempting?

I will highlight what I mean.





About Me

I'm just so over Vegas . . . .

. . . we can go our separate ways and awkwardly never speak again.

. . . . the amount of women who hate black men on here is kinda disheartening.

. . . . . definitely not . . .

. . . . . . I'm terrible at this . . .

Lets go ahead and make this awkward.



Something shitty in every paragraph?
Dude, the crap you are writing is permeating
your profile to the point of toxicity.
Nobody, likes a Debbie Downer.

Can you put a positive spin
with your words, to your profile?

Reread and rewrite your profile
until it smells like a rose.
Good luck!
 wavesinthepacific
Joined: 12/9/2015
Msg: 5
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Posted: 2/6/2016 3:25:24 PM
Thanks for all the replys.

I'll take this advice and try to change things up.
 ScooterSB
Joined: 8/25/2011
Msg: 6
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Posted: 2/6/2016 3:46:51 PM

I'll take this advice and try to change things up.



by nuking the profile? lol
 Ouija2025
Joined: 6/11/2014
Msg: 7
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Posted: 2/6/2016 5:31:55 PM
well that went well. I fear by the time most find reviews they are coming with their own theories
So perhaps time to stop trying to help
Enjoy
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