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 tennistown
Joined: 9/7/2011
Msg: 3
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Posted By: PickMeForOnce123 --- Age 30
I get little to no replies back.




Your "User Name" sounds winy.
Something the short guy might blurt out
when selecting players for a pickup basketball game.

You probably have heard women can smell desperation a mile away?
Your user name reeks world wide.
IDK, can you change that?


Also, you have an unusual "Mail Setting."

Age Between:18 and 34.

18? At eighteen she won't be able to have
and adult beverage when dining out.
Do you know why? Because she is just a teenager!

That will make the heads spin wildly
of women your age, you are also trying to "date."

I suggest eliminating your mail settings entirely.
Men don't need restrictions for the volume
of messages we receive.
Good luck!
 Scaretale
Joined: 1/9/2016
Msg: 4
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I need help...
Posted: 4/28/2016 2:24:36 PM

Your "User Name" sounds winy.
Something the short guy might blurt out
when selecting players for a pickup basketball game.


lol!

Oh my gosh, that is hysterical :-)

OP - you have a nice profile, but quite a few grammar mistakes. Just fix them, and change your screen name, and you'll be good to go :-)
 call_me_tater
Joined: 12/30/2014
Msg: 5
I need help...
Posted: 4/28/2016 4:18:43 PM
Hi Oscar,


PickMeForOnce123: 3.3 billion of women out there, I just need you
That combo is a killer.
Change both.

So you are from Miami but living in the UK. Are you stationed there? For how long?
A woman isn't going to invest in you if you're taking off to your next assignment.

You have quite a few errors in spelling, caps, punctuation.

List of TV/movies is way too long.
You need to talk about something else.
Do you like England? What are your fav things about it?

Draw your reader in by writing the way you talk and tell more about yourself.
 Forums_only
Joined: 7/20/2014
Msg: 8
I need help...
Posted: 4/28/2016 7:07:29 PM
Two things stood out for me.

1. it appears you are actually trying to hide your smile/teeth. This feels odd. I'd bet you have a killer smile whether you think so or not.
2. your occupation (US Military). It's one of those things that either the women love it or hate it. The ones that are not into it have the sense (and you actually encourage it in your profile) that you are not going to be in one place very long. Why would someone in your age range with an established career waste time and emotion on someone who may be moving on in a year? Just thinking out loud...
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