|Adorable and adventurous.|
Add some more pics where we can see your face.
You look 10 years younger.
I think your writing style shows English is your second language and that's perfectly okay.
Professional is not a job. Tell your actual job.
At 35 you should know whether you want children...the women do.
I don't like people who often complaints and that can't find a positive aspect in daily things. If you are optimistic, don't write about negatives or what you don't like.
Anyway, this looks like a showcase where we have to sell our person... but I'm not like this, I will not write words and words about myself; I've got a professional CV not a dating one :D That's exactly what it is.
It need not be a CV; it's just a peek into your world and the most successful profiles give more details.
So...tell us more.
Where do you volunteer and what do you get from it? My passion is dog rescue/fostering so I wrote about that when I had an active profile.
You could tell about a favorite SCUBA dive, place you traveled to, write something about your job.
She need to picture you and whether she wants to date you.
You will do very well her with a few fixes.