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|A few suggestions...|
You could replace the main with a smiling colour photo and/or add more photos.
You could add the Interests field - at least 6 one or two-word items that describe your 'favourites' (ie: sport you play, team you follow, author, music group, artist or genre; food or cuisines; tv show, comedian, holiday spot, weekend activity... you get the idea)
Spellcheck the obvious typos.
The opening paragraph has no real specific information about you and it a virtually cliche-palooza. Don't waste valuable profile space with cliches - get to the details. What is your best characteristic? What is something you are looking forward to? Don't be generic.
From the Urban Dictionary: Netflix and Chill
It means that you are going to go over to your partners house and f*ck with Netflix in the background.
This is pretty much common knowledge now and could be something your viewer is clicking away from.
If you are messaging like you texted your thread here, at least make the effort to add capitals and punctuation.
Start with the photos.