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|Warm beside me, she lays gently sleeping.|
What sweet magic is this softly breathing?
With the face of an angel framed in curls,
Soft silken tresses, tangled flaxen swirls.
And in innocence, child like seeming,
What mystic beauty lays deeply dreaming?
It seems the sweetest of dreams she must be!
lovingly, trustingly, curled against me.
Yet, no ethereal mirage is she.
I feel this angel tenderly holding me.
Open slowly, those eyes of crystal blue,
And catch me watching this vision of you.
Angelic beauty in your sun lit face.
Peace and serenity in your embrace.
Long have I waited to lay down at night,
Wake in the morning with you at my side!
Posted: 3/21/2017 11:08:14 PM
|You have some very interesting stories. |
Very emotional evoking
Posted: 3/25/2017 8:33:28 AM
|I've read your stories too.. but I think you may have some talent as a poet. I like your poetry better..and I am complimenting you not being critical ^^^|
Posted: 3/25/2017 3:40:57 PM
|^^^I couldn't find any of his poems|
Posted: 3/25/2017 3:47:54 PM
|^^They are erotica and not poems but a sequel of short stories. He gets a lot of criticism and shade thrown at him for what he writes. I don't read his erotic work I knew after a few paragraphs or so but I do appreciate his right to post what he enjoys writing here. He gets a lot of backlash so that is why I said I was just complimenting. |
igottaname : I think you should try your hand at some more poetry we think it's very good.
Posted: 3/25/2017 4:39:36 PM
|Thanks I was in left field|
Posted: 4/25/2017 9:07:59 PM
|Thank you all for your kind comments. I have more things I've written here under older user names, but the poetry and haiku forums are gone.|
Posted: 4/26/2017 9:31:51 AM
|The Poems and Quotes forums have been taken off the menu but they still exist. I find them by google. If you go to this link they are here: |
you can bookmark this link.