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 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
Msg: 1
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I have had several friends look at my profile, due to my not getting any activity, and they all say it looks really good. Not sure how bias there opinion is. LOL So I figured I would post here to get some very unbiased opinions. Any thoughts would be welcomed. Thanks
 Robyn143
Joined: 7/19/2016
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Posted: 10/28/2016 5:08:16 PM
I honestly just think you need newer and a few more pics. I would also loose the PPS part.to most people it is common sense that no reply equals not interested but that just adds a negative vibe to your profile. Good Luck to you on here!
 FullMoonGuy
Joined: 3/7/2014
Msg: 3
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Posted: 10/28/2016 5:17:01 PM
Overall, pretty good.

The smoking question IS a bit of a dilemma.

The age restriction is too narrow in my opinion. 57 and 1 day is no good, but 56 and 364 days is OK?
I'm also not a fan of the "must have a photo" restriction, for obvious reasons.

Best of luck.
 VikingHoosier
Joined: 5/8/2015
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Posted: 10/28/2016 5:43:14 PM
Date nothing serious will get interpreted as sexual, then they might associate the word "curious" with sex.

Caption could say "Dec 2015 with my son" or whoever that is with you in the photo.

As already said, best if you add new photos.

Fix the to/too error.

Excellent interests list. I like long, fun interests with multiple words.

Your about me has a slow start. Those of us who do searches that include opening text are more likely to view a profile if the beginning text is interesting.
 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
Msg: 5
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Posted: 10/28/2016 6:14:51 PM
Thanks Robyn :)
 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
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Posted: 10/28/2016 6:15:27 PM
Thanks Fullmoon. Good point about the age range.
 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
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Posted: 10/28/2016 6:16:19 PM
Thanks Viking. Working on the slow start. Excellent points made.
 Forums_only
Joined: 7/20/2014
Msg: 8
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Posted: 10/28/2016 7:18:41 PM
You mention you're 'not getting any activity'. Are you actually messaging men you find interesting directly? I had a MUCH better result doing that.

You have a cute smile, a few Interests that could be conversation starters, and an OK profile body, but you could always add more description/examples in the written part so guys could have more things to work with.
 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
Msg: 9
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Posted: 10/29/2016 1:54:38 PM
HI, Yes, I am contacting people but usually don't get a response. I will try adding more to the body. Thanks for your help. :)
 SydneyChalkie
Joined: 1/8/2016
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Posted: 10/29/2016 11:28:14 PM
Any feedback appreciated :)

Seems I'm using the wrong bait! Hardly getting any nibbles :(
 sun___flower
Joined: 5/8/2015
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Posted: 10/29/2016 11:56:17 PM
SydneyChalkie, you need to start your own thread. Do you see how to do that?
 SydneyChalkie
Joined: 1/8/2016
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Posted: 10/30/2016 3:43:38 AM
I tried,

I got a message in red saying that either my message was under 200 letters (It wasn't) or that the topic had already been done several times.

I assumed it was the latter so just added to an existing one.

I'll try again and see how I go!
 Ouija2025
Joined: 6/11/2014
Msg: 13
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Posted: 10/30/2016 5:11:54 AM
Hi L :)
To me the header and user name implies kink or something - I'd change the Header
For the love of Prada remove snuggling as an Interest
Why are you featuring your son on the profile?
I'd reword some of it so it doesn't read like to laugh/giggle at nearly everything.
Def add more pictures. Change the age restrictions
You could write more - like the type of man you are seeking.
Odd you aren't getting replies. Perhaps your message is too long, too many Qs.
Great smile, I think with some tuning you'll enjoy better luck
 InquisitiveLisa
Joined: 9/16/2016
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Posted: 10/30/2016 6:03:42 PM
Thanks Ouija, I will work on some of your suggestions. :)
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