|Not a girl, but...|
1. It's VERY basic. You want to stand out from all the other guys on the site. Saying you're a nice attractive guy isn't enough. Tell more about yourself, your personality, you're likes, and what else you like in a woman. Add a few interests and get some more pics up there.
2. There are a few typos and grammatical probs, the one that really stood out is saying you work in a wherehouse, and are loking for a cutie. If you don't fix anything else, make sure you do correct the name of the place where you work, and get your headline.
2a. The headline is too generic as well. Cutie is a subjective term, but to be honest, aren't we all looking to find someone we consider cute?
Me I'm pretty simple cause I'm open to do most anything and I can take a bunch of crap.
...that makes you sound like a bit of a pushover, almost like you're inviting women to bring their drama to you.