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Joined: 1/5/2008
Msg: 1
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I wrote these lyrics lately, what do you people think of them?

When Ive been out of sight
And away from eyes
Shes been in my mind
And its a side I hide

How could you blame me?
with all that had happened to me
You knew damn well I loved you
but too much trouble surrounded me

You know Ive been trying to walk away
like you told me at the door
but how could I ever leave
when you claimed my world as yours

Now summers come and summers go
I wander aimlessly all alone
and noone knows
why I am this way

If I can rebuild all the peices
I may find it once again
I may live someday again
and be myself again

I still try to walk away
Ive tried to live in other arms
Ive been down to the bottom
and Ive felt im number one
but somethings still gone

Theres noone else besides you
even if the sun & moon collide
it seems its been forever
How I still wish you were mine
Joined: 2/11/2008
Msg: 2
what do you think of these lyrics
Posted: 3/5/2008 5:04:37 PM
I think it has all the essence of a sweet love song!
Very nice!
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