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 airplane_geek
Joined: 5/9/2005
Msg: 2
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I'd definately get new pics. BTW- the links don't work for me.

It mentions that you have a child. If that's not correct, I suggest correcting it. If you do, I'd mention something about having a child in your life. How you deal, struggle. etc.

If you've got MS Word or something like that, I suggest running your "about me" section through a spelling check. Some of your tenses are not quite correct.

The content is good though.

Good luck!
 tunesman
Joined: 5/20/2005
Msg: 4
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Posted: 6/4/2005 9:32:31 AM
Hi Sprinkles.

First of all, I'd like to say you are doing very well with your English.

You do a really good job in painting a picture of who you are. You write as you would speak - a really good thing. I really don't see anything negative here at all. What you have written is very good. It looks like you've already taken a lot of Airplane's and Buni's advice.

Posting only pictures with you and other people may make others think that you are too busy being with those people and that you may not have time for someone else in your life. Time to bug that friend who loves to get out and about with the digital camera.

If you have a few moments, would you mind please looking over my profile and letting me know what you think?

Thank you ever so much and best of luck with your search.
 teamgreen
Joined: 5/24/2005
Msg: 7
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Posted: 6/11/2005 9:49:44 AM
lol used to be on top? really? when? lmao, it's our game and it will saty that way also, you guys are close secon though, very tough...but we are #1
 teamgreen
Joined: 5/24/2005
Msg: 9
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Posted: 6/12/2005 10:41:55 PM
ummmm lemieux, the rocket, dryden, guy lefluere, roy, ect....
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