: As the first poster suggested, most of your sentences shouldn't start with the pronoun, "I". This makes you appear self-centered. Condense your profile - it's too verbose.
By the way, I looked at the first poster's profile and I'm not the only one with a lot of sentences starting with " I ".
Take the picture of the football helmet out; it's against the rules. You need to be in all the pictures
If I'm breaking the rules with the helmet picture then there are 'Thousands' of others in violation as well. I see pictures of dogs, cats, cars, motor cycles, sunrises, sunsets, grand kids, etc., etc., etc. ....
Consider including a picture of yourself taken outdoors, engaging in one of the activities you enjoy.
At this time these are the only pictures I would consider putting into my profile. As the weather warms up, and I again get outside doing the activities I enjoy, I will indeed include those types of photographs.