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 Author Thread: 8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4922 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 10/23/2017 2:52:40 AM
settling for g'd times waiting on the world to change
Angels violence, is worth what for the deranged agreeable dementia
To the meadows the larks will go in our dreams noone knows
Setting their burdens onto the cursed berth, remade the dried packs of tears & sinew
my shadow says not time to stay
Ants to my fellow damned, say much the same way to the wise of blind screams following
so told so foretold, work hard, doing better
another establishment but for who to reap the reward, all ridden the same day

...
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 327 (view)
 
Acrostic Poetry - first letter of each line spells the Title of your poem...
Posted: 10/23/2017 2:46:30 AM
Aww TY We! G'd to have returned & writing again. Missed the artwork here..

Did the sound of a cherub
Into the inside of a gong
Die out when the wing was hung

Interloping my world

Back, back, the babble
Around, atone, the loners town
Concerning tones, wrecking no mischief
Kissing the starry cheeks, the eye of the sky

...

Etceteras To be continued maybe lol <3 n_n
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4180 (view)
 
Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 10/23/2017 2:40:09 AM
It is
Predetermined
Justly amongst the chose
Heavens knights in a row, thousands
Support
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5660 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 10/23/2017 2:33:46 AM
^- Hey MsS! Long time no see
...

swallows mud daubed nests
sheets so weigh in blank map chests
Blankets of soup home

Blankets of soup home
Cutting corners honing drones/thrones
Zipping the migrate

Zipping the migrate
tail kits & fin suits aced
Crashing man's gestures
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 325 (view)
 
Acrostic Poetry - first letter of each line spells the Title of your poem...
Posted: 10/13/2017 11:50:00 PM
Canning the weeds
And the poison that is faith
Noting the time
Cancelling the wait
Expectations not as eager
Regrettably the hate is left only like one, an old tied shoe

Do you use
On the giving of blood
Notice of sender, delivery without a name
And to the top
That we stop
Echo return, repeat, the same wind stagnant freshness
...
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1166 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 10/13/2017 11:42:41 PM
Belt loop
notches tugging
pulling upwards downward
if it was a cheap present, jobs
thankless

thankless
a tirade cleanse
gutless hunger hanging
scarring those striking honesty
buckler

belt loop
tying down fat
hiding fails, failing
tight cavity, loosely brought
thrown outs

...
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5657 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 10/13/2017 11:40:30 PM
air she dare not breath
bereft of fact & tact kinds
careless whispers locked/danced
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4177 (view)
 
Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 10/13/2017 11:38:08 PM
Was cool
Seeing you soothe
& yet prickliness
Other side of me demands meant
I swore

...
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4915 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 10/13/2017 11:26:00 PM
guess it all depends on Reality
a cuppa tea, it isn't too much for poetry yet isnt it still a fond fantasy
Gimme a cure for my elder's woes, warmed & safely by our home
Seein' my future die cause I ain't so sure on who is still my hero to mourn
Between the lines of mocking grief & being truly grieved I kept myself brief
Mornin' a flight out toward the black dressed stone, angels in the headlights make no tomb, no short story to memory
a ticking bomb trying to get behind as I see the consequence of yours stay on hold on a phone
dont let my papa go on dying, I'd rather be lying but I know we all go alone

...

(Etceteras to be continued perhaps...& This isn't part of the poem)
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4707 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/9/2016 4:02:29 AM
but, for now I'll write haiku

that buds a rested under two, beams beneath dreams in trickle/a puddle/pool of dew upon thy croon/thine runes/ivy ruins so it/I may lay in wait & drew

Sailing ships & polished wax, cavorts the taxed the falsely relaxed. Of the hung crowns & sweet duress, fresh gardens in the sky & heavens crest, wings aloft adieu g'dbye this kittenish mewl survives the loon

Billowy breaths left unto the embraced the caress the tenderhearted slew, what yules that rules

On realization that hits the most, on target that breaks a pointed yew

What there is lewd to the stone minded chest, upon where such sudden views are aways of you/my truth

my fair country eyes in startled light in the weather of bewitchment, bewildered art you twisted cruel

Whereas the wild beasts on our marks do go cross our watch by the first poetic enticed, our lovers moon that hung a lost

...OR

But, for now I'll write a haiku

We are jewels as Summer echos, neptunes rings following the jewels we cannot fuel ruefully endow

Duty bounds & ties a many, as far in between those few refuse allowed a duel

Ghostly darkness in falling knights, drops the tools in hells basket, grazes soft a chance at Confucius

Romance brought at speed & glass ceiling domes

Cavort & convert to remote yearnings

Do we deserve or desert our earned ownings, our brittle raw urns yawning

Tie me to a cross in a circle & tip, bind tight with moss & myrrh, none to kind these last pyre sticks are a noose, can't the chain tear/unchain itself loose ...

... Etcs Cont.
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3843 (view)
 
Cinquain on My Brain
Posted: 9/8/2016 11:54:31 PM
Call love.
Violently
Mimicry repeating
Wingless, boneless, removed from, hushed
Signet

Call love.
Love or lust, tease
Beating sweetbitter touched
Words & sense practiced, young elder
Temper

Call love.
Like our songs
Heartsbroken, moving on
Soul intensed, spirit in trance, fleet
Mirror/horror/murder/memoir/collect/album/?...

Call love.
Another plane
On to informal dance
Pleasures dressed a gifted release
Reload

Call love.
Vulnerable
Visibility impaired
Soar over caged, country & flags
Waves bye / Flushed at /...

Call love.
Warble autumn /Silent homes nudge
Harvest moon festival
Empty yet, strength nude, wills without
The tide/time /...

Call love.
Accompany
Companions invitation
Tea too small, to welcome through, here
All sides /...

Call love.
Liars fire
Iced withdraw withhold, wins
Withering heights slumbers acceptance/
Pardon/A Truce/Forgive/Forgave/Begging/Baggage /...

... Etcs Cont.
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5123 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 9/8/2016 11:37:39 PM
unbelievable
bedridden unmoved to tearful
match per match unwrap

unbelievable
inconceivable depressed
demands a myth show

unbelievable
uncontrollable freedom
reigns slacked, bit hard, whips

unbelievable
irrecoverable terms
bastards met summit

unbelievable
irreconcilable mates
fates understand learn

unbelievable
September's office regulars
atrociously stacks

unbelievable
fakes upon pretense & burns
insufferable / insufficient leaks / ineffective stalls / inefficient scorn/source /...

unbelievable
lead last, first across, dwindle
linger lost puppy/human/..?

unbelievable
truth but an atrophy seams
stemmed the core into

... Etc Cont.
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4704 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/1/2016 7:53:49 PM
after giving each other their heart.
a piece of each was left to dust, rotting in hearths under earths rust
crying from the deer & turtle mated pair, speared like fresh game on seasons fair
crusted diamonds in florals faces, drops buds & lady's laces
men enjoy the fresh pickings & served, pays the wares unaware fared
beauty & beauty a toxic society, high & lows a boneless philosophy
worse comes to humour & the rest pass
sudden syndromes of nostalgia in its flask

Et etceteras To be continued an all maybe...
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3840 (view)
 
Cinquain on My Brain
Posted: 8/31/2016 3:37:54 PM
Again
again it was
all for you, everything
the eyes did was for youth to play games
in love
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5117 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 8/31/2016 3:34:44 PM
up & down the line
toes & necks racing cheques, backs
against shoulders weigh

against the shoulders weight
lain the scribbling's tardy
cursive works in throes
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1257 (view)
 
Post Your Favorite Music Lyrics part 2 =) 2015
Posted: 3/31/2016 2:34:26 PM
Asian, Duet. Lovely, & the meaning, story etc
Think about a couple, man & his wife, one is deceased and other still talks/sees to them...?!
By Humbert, Humbert Onaji Hanashi (Same Story)
Romanization:

Doko ni iru no?

Mado no soba ni iru yo


Nani wo shiteru no?

Nani mo shitenai yo


Soba ni oide yo

Ima iku kara matte


Hanashi wo shiyou

Ii yo, mazu kimi kara


Doko ni iru no?

Kimi no soba ni iru yo


Nani wo miteru no?

Kimi no koto miteru yo


Doko e iku no?

Doko e mo ikanai yo


...

Zutto soba ni iru yo


Sore kara

Boku wa kimi wo mitsume


Sore kara

Itsumo onaji hanashi


Doko ni iru no?

Tonari no heya ni iru yo


Nani wo shiteru no?

Tegami wo kaiteru no


Soba ni iru no?

Demo mou ikanakucha


Hanashi wo shiyou

...


Sore kara

Boku wa kimi wo mitsume


Sore kara

Nakinagara waratta


Sayounara

Yuube yume wo mita yo


Sayounara

Itsumo onaji hanashi

~Eng Trans:
Where are you?
*I'm right here beside the window

What are you doing?
I'm not doing anything

Come here beside me
I'll be there just wait for a minute

Let's talk
It's ok, you first

Where are you now?
I'm right here beside you

What are you looking at?
I'm looking at you

Where are you going?
I'm not going anywhere

……
I'll be always here right beside you

And then,
I took a gaze on you

And then,
It's always the same story

Where are you?
I'm beside your room

What are you doing?
I'm writing a letter

Are you there?
But I have to go soon

Let's talk.
……

And then,
I took a gaze on you

And then,
I laughed while crying

Goodbye
I saw a dream last night

Goodbye
It will always be the same story

(*Italic would be girl's part. *Bolded parts-both singing.)
-Saw on YT as a Fan AMV for VG for UT, & or others. Was nice, sad an all. Hope this is right

To be continued <3 Happy Spring and light fun to flow, balancing the life
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1034 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 3/22/2016 11:20:45 AM
If I may, Version Two Sir I think.

wrapped in moss & in the sea
drifting in the windy trees
on the tails of myth & lore
swaddled in furls & sunrise pearls

curling up under way
sails made of cotton & waves
sandy shores in the cove
dances lightly footsteps glow/grow/grove

dipped in feet the mud & fun
water running past the hum
vibrant greens & clear view suns
each a lullaby in the momentum

melting castles under rays
moon & salt tastes days
beams of silver & golden daze
a time spent in fresh air haze

disappears quick the hands that built up strength
in the music the song-folk milked soft & s/wept/kissed/
rich & creamy the hardened climbs
for the honey & flowers in welcoming home harmony time

fire walks as the mountains talks
the sky did fall in love with she
and the earth did move & made a happy family
& went as far as the tide in noon

crashes the surf upon the hearth
the grass became wet & bent to the grasp
drowning rafts a lifeline toss
a wish in the blues & greens

dark & light
the day or night
early setting
under tales too

burying bodies
lost rings discovery
a secret place
to admit their peace/piece/

tender cud the horses ran
on top of ground the iron rein
oil soot into the flute
smoke & gases littering the slow womb/world/hold moving

unmoving eggs
there in the clutch
lay still the next
& left the dust

mother of pearls the dragon has
shells that bloomed & hugged the lass
swaying sweet & whispered loft
the willows & reeds tickle

boats sail & stable
expensive ghosts in the middle
sunken treasures, the forest tinkles
trickling the birds that heaven saw

long limbs the hardy root
bark & leaves with star fruit
juicy & sour the yellow mango
ripens the hour of sandman clover/clever/cover/

blue notes the whistle sung
grass knots the river hung
wreaths inside the bubble nets
come play with the fins & men of gray

fragrance of the sweetgrass, crabapples & coconuts wafts
falling down the hills of past
passing the horns of the brawn & brave
silent noise becomes the new stayed

old in numbers, letters knew
words that said in pictures drew
memories of a lagoon, the oasis & mirage & tired hues
desert fences, mending the healing adventured/s

et etceteras to be continued an all:
~ideas like of the beach, names of trees; this an that & or others
(Yay Spring lol)
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 819 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 3/21/2016 12:18:15 PM
the/ir toys/ed
from another
time of war, innocents/ce
betrayal & love flees freeing
them all/spared none/...

Temple(s)
murals, mosaics
mandalas meditate
gardens & ruins teaching past
sing passed/passage/ferry/core, void/a ways...

et etc to be cont. & all
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3935 (view)
 
First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 3/21/2016 12:01:51 PM
misconceptions destroy way too late
perceptions mar unto waste
done the deal & barter trade, negotiations eons of pain
generations in a dizzy iffy tiff tizzy
humanly humane, humankind & men
perspective intro costs to the early enough await
dated in to tally, follow/fall back
trepidations hold onto hard the fate
historians flip & toss the ill lucked, the coin
in fire & thunder, in natures plunders
blundering oafs & the punishing/ment masks/ed
masculinity, femininity, the crossroad oft choice & bait a mess
meshes inbetween
bitten off more, swallowed less then whole
losing often, losses even, lost finally
dwell to the hole it claims
teal aqua the waters rusting crust a ring
foam & bitter batter, a missing persons letter
sweet old sweaters once fitted on a young kind master
the old being undone
become become, win what you want
beauty & art, naked sales pitch down a star
focal point, a vocal expression
starting & ending, settling & settlement
begun the soft escape into another case
cold files you cannot unearth
leftover tails you cannot absolve truth
bias & faith you can not make
flatten the ground or narrow the reach
how can manics be mellow, & bleed yellow
still can you meet up expectations
surprises, shock, surpass extinction
up to the scapegoats to question for the crime
when all you get is time
short lengths, periods trials testing physics, denying awhile
laughter of jesters who are the knights & godliness
the king a martyr the queen the convict
shot for releasing a pheasant
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 316 (view)
 
Acrostic Poetry - first letter of each line spells the Title of your poem...
Posted: 3/21/2016 11:49:03 AM
Serious sounds
Answering mounds
Nodding to humorous
Silent as the devil

Players visit
Undying requisites
Nectar & never
Shy sirens
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 818 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 3/17/2016 11:19:11 AM
Were birds
gone on, off ton
weighless, no borders, yes
a transformation, soul & heart
plural

were birds
the holy fleece
the golden chalice fleet
speaketh meetings in secrets code
temple

were birds
the scry mirror
astral dreams, savant reels
transfigure stones, alchemy dolls
the/ir toyed/s
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3789 (view)
 
Cinquain on My Brain
Posted: 3/17/2016 11:10:37 AM
To count
a lovers name
an beauty unmeasured/measures
poets papers, charred blood ingrained
For seas

To count
innocence wail
a guilt trip derails
in resting peacefully, romance
is bliss

Is bliss
euthanasia
emerge the depths in, out
too all sides & void, dance the rain/
come up

come up
in downing rings
flaming trees dripping cold
hard bottoms soft above, between
liquor

liquor
favours a pain
deliverance receive
the middle men beneath disagrees
feud laws/lords
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5025 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 3/17/2016 10:59:55 AM
do three sets of ten
yogi, guru, shaman, witch
isles of the damned/brave/bore/

do three sets of ten
breathless nurture warring hoards
people against hate/fate/faith/mates

do three sets of ten
to satisfy the emeralds
the barren hen lied

the barren hen lied
wicked lands that multiply
guilty parties none

guilty parties none
the tactless nun & sainthood
never learnt the/from past/passed

never learned the past/pass
from present do-gooders to
burial in claim/...

do three sets of ten
the students after, before
a teaching future

a teaching future
counting numbers time still mimed
the retarded nature
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 815 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 3/7/2016 5:20:48 AM
not see
estranged resolve
accountability
wise beyond her years, remember
shy blinks/so/ungs /siren/floodgate/padlock/

not see
development
knotted wraps twists turns, stabs
wrists & fingers inner dialogue
remorse/recourse/recount/a bout/

not see
naughtiness coils
angers dismissive loathe
ugliness a worst, however
keep love

not see
rescind options
changing views, apathy
pathetically, no fight left
yes, care

not see
disappointment
disapproval reverse
institutionalize, object
degrade/subject

not see
both harm & cure
blocking, limit, restrict
fat disgust, shaming blamed, ever
nicely

not see
nazis seizure
innocence bystands bought
deranged dementia, demented
failing/ure

not see
two wolves one soul
inhabit read stories
dust & appropriation deeds
red eyes/dice hull

not see
blindly unseen
unseemly descent
describes a mess, acceptable
your own

not see
storming at sea
keel over, inhuman
monstrous or alien dictates tools
fools truth/trust/

not see
impossible
importance encourage
entourage decency, salvage
borrow/ed/s /

not see
entirety
good in us all, true trust
though through trials, wrong judgement, thorough
lifetimes/timelines/

not see
a fearful smile
the jokes struggle along
caring, an advantage benefit
complacent / empty / blank shots /

not see
erasure cry
kinship, friends, lovers, non
you & I, decry, deceased hint/proof
worlds world

not see
strategy
indifferent hardships
differences begrudge, reluctant
blameless

not see
aimlessly stay
coerce, humility
trials justice, still regards same cruel
goings

et etc to be cont an all
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3786 (view)
 
Cinquain on My Brain
Posted: 3/7/2016 4:41:00 AM
YW :) Lol Maybe I guess I try a bit an to spice up sweet arts, an in my way tis a sip o' tea to see an such any matters

stop lights
despairs purpose
converge allowance
accidents changes, frisks risque, hung
intent/indent

stop lights
offenses best
blue blood crestfallen ranks
defends better, cirtrus rouge blush
slow pause

slow pause
heated, chills, fast
drama & angst, which ties
manners nor force, is unpunished
the puns

the puns
hanging nightmares
screams & silent dissolve/dissent/consent
reluctance aborting kindness
astute/a cute

..

Don't cry
young born safeguard
protective instinctive
models to perfection, there for other
admires

Don't cry
big sibling here
rivalry thickens, thins
distance a fond laziness rule
loyal

Don't cry
vacant rooms alarm
elephants pain, agonize
melody beats laughter speaks, breaks
right hugs/ lately/ness/late too/

Don't cry
child o' mind
heart & soul trades wounds forth
back & refuse a decree guards
their age

Don't cry
won't quit neither
cannot die, should not
opposing, attraction, infatuate
oblige/d

dont cry
running away
driven extreme, drastics
fanatic search, given took gain
jealous/envy

dont cry
trying drying
white obviousness dares
adopt foster, kicks love muster
shanty/fancy/cheaply/ness /

dont cry
a chosen life
lies unravel spinning
weakness, sins, a hopeful entrance
it felt/looks doubt/regret/denounce

dont cry
bruises pale
cuts scrapes a sign ode power/strength/
stature fake, manic depression
revulsion/revolt/divorce/

et etcs to be cont. an all
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5017 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 3/7/2016 4:04:15 AM
live now for the leaf
chambers bereft a doe's/bestow/kowtow last chance/glance
mother nature witch/

live now for the leaf
enough for the meat to salt
bridging drifters pads

live now for the leaf
mistakes in laps, mercy grasps
sparce/scarce/stark sparing sparrings/it cause/lost

live now for the leaf
dawns rising a growth surrounding
millennium mold

live now for the leaf
bracelets in fled her hair, fledge
pledges feathered f/wish/kiss/twist/fist

live now for the leaf
shaman mist, raining the breast
curves flatten holes in/out/tout/spout

live now for the leaf
whistles shrill the pans flutes, pipes
old harps panning reeds/shrewd/

live now for the life
span does life opportune, wreaths
start of universe

live now for the leaf
kamikaze, the wings command
tracing marks, rubbing

live now for the leaf
cleansing harsh the stain, pure means
it meant the world, mum/

live now for the leaf
stood still got by, getting on
chaining/setting seasons free

live now for the leaf
jumping bodies dove courage
faith a crowns respect/honour/admire/fullness/ worthiness

live now for the leaf
excitements risque, landing home
home together, lone/love

live now for the leaf
emotional mosaics/mandala
kaleidoscope builds

live now for the leaf
reapers hands, summons/commands demand
abandon neglect/forget/

live now for the leaf
vines & ivy entangle
furling closely bonds/knots/release/relief

live now for the leaf
straightened arrows matten tugs
drinks a stunning/budding feast

live now for the leaf
eternal boats lighting groves/glenns
a haven rescue

live now for the leaf
the young & old, dead or babe
paving words pictures

live now for the leaf
bones beneath litter agree
a dealing devil/
(-can even be written opposite & such other ways too..depends varies..)

live now for the leaf
chartreuse ankles, mauveine wisp
whispers ha/ollow foals/

live now for the leaf
chewed & spat collected, hence
weeds cigarettes churn/ burn/t

live now for the leaf
gurney clemency, undo
gurus common sake/peasants cursed friend/

live now for the leaf
acknowledged reached r/beckons
intrudes interrupts/unfairly matters/masters/casters/ worn out of from strife/dress/stress/

live now for the leaf
candles interfere shadows
admits to...?!

et etcs to be cont.&all sorry
Well, g'd morning anyhoo
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5016 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 3/7/2016 3:22:14 AM
Oh Howdy B. Yup, again, well who knows..the end..of any of it and so

live now for the leaf
photo sins this is, a framed
pressing down water

live now for the leaf
eras of feuds over stones
echo amongst harm

live now for the leaf
a warriors way a path
their undying souls

live now for the leaf
symphony natures present
singers harmony

live now for the leaf
hidden veins the light touches
weighs swinging windchimes

live now for the leaf
the cutting men bled bark tea
strippers call to land

live now for the leaf
moving earth a terrors flight
seismic flames shot towers

live now for the leaf
feeling unsafe the fall, brush
a breathing oft names

live now for the leaf
nestles smallest, appears giant
curiosity/curious touches/feelings

live now for the leaf
sleeping winter, first of bitter
grasses marrow/mallow bite

live now for the leaf
fluttering hard wooden carves
passes the damaged

live now for the leaf
leavings of the pane from rain/reign/rage
torn pages aside/uncertainty nods/shakes/quakes/still/

live now for the leaf
games by light gayness in want
their home adventure

live now for the leaf
tremble mumble, these rays lay/lain
strained luck hatches swords

live now for the leaf
sordid displays acts the noise
minerals poison/sweet relief vanish

live now for the leaf
runs the dear & captured pull
senseless qi losses/lost found/confuse/muddle

live now for the leaf
puppy fat puddles, pudgy
youthful begins when

live now for the leaf
sickly seeds climbing, sticks burnt
emeralds colours pay/cave/hide/find/mine/

live now for the leaf
resting easy awakens
golden flowers dance/chant/fraught/mock/tease/tea/see/

live now for the leaf
grief all forms melts like dust spores
pouring clean musk/ honey stems/cells/ nectar kills/ ambrosia/

live for the leaf
roots hearts the faintest of
pouring out below/sunshine underneath/above ground/ surface dwelling souls

live now for the leaf
walk in the past, footsteps drop
dull lifeless, return/shower/blossom/courage/

live now for the leaf
marches directions, impress/imprint/nowhere
pink cherries drying/spotting

live now for the leaf
between floating water air
sands that time begin/can stare/share/bear/bare/care/

live now for the leaf
sticky imprints trails off blood/clay/
often knowledge obey

Et etceteras to be continued an all
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 2457 (view)
 
/////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\
Posted: 3/5/2016 1:59:18 AM
-A need to try,the ambitious motivated,deterred
-a promise disliked but why accept when had personal feelins against
-grief does odd things to captured mind,mourners do much deny
-1being amongst multi universes
-the clowns&guardians kept from you,away to stick to the script, unscripted,cue lines
-a limit surpass tyings,lettin the other beneath benefit
& ripoff

deranged,or considerable
execution - points, leveling odds evenly
acronyms to analogy, metaphors to wise fools
a figure often now hides
the formula drawn withdrawn withdrawals

parasitic relationship,a tradeoff in valuable possessions
fluids of the earth&water,browns &greens,yellow&heat
created forms to evaluate,a probable evacuation in failure
the chill from the core locks loads set loose
unloosens the frail tragedy

repeated motions tagging
deceit resists the pullin force
fight to prove independence
survive to prolong opportunity

namecalling to numb the blankness
purifying the separated Confucious
Complications a rose, dawns & settles the setting
the love of senses at stroke of the sun
lights & lightens the smallest

tall heights but not older, a swap in personality
in noticing in observing in lucking
a misstep entirely, later assurances cannot calm
the surging panic & quick patterns to cheat
the kill, a pacifist, the runaway
the start of it
...
Et etcs to be continued an all
maybe
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4657 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 3/5/2016 1:12:16 AM
The thing that was at stake
-can each give or take,in change charge like games is it to be left to 'em,win or lose cont.or quit who chooses control n yet nothingness again
-forevermore foreign tho thru same wars between whats real& where that damnation twin,each buryin apart of family&a their sin; foolish lovers smilin fake,tears
-bloods is on your hands,poolin from every eyes freak leaked like swept foundin sand raindrops back into multiple skylines/lights
-Redhearts&selfish souls a desired colourful dusted sword, ears travel to a monsterous bed of/for man with loneliness by matter of judgement atone
-Errors mess&laughter lies& mercy runnin for your lives, freedom is still a barrier to the kind,return to a true side too
-Risking all to experience(an experimentation gone g'd if not an escaped miscommunicated)
-Determination&breakin friendships lil ol dance-Mercy but spares noone in the end, begin over morals to undying sentiment;our curiositys cruel feared safety

The thing that was at stake
-A selfimposed exiled mother versus all breakin broke deaths to bring home fate
-burns to hell childrens mistakes & purpose face
-a punishin ground non with will, no accidents can pardon to beg reason
-cheap words&misleadin acts remains to be tested
-as you grow&growup you will, half of which you wont tell
-some remember,some may bequeath
-a flower to surrender life

The thing that was at stake
spills under wishes,makeshift stones as treasured stars above
sentenced unfairly,accordingly as due
echoes near impossible risks
the beaten & forgave..each wrought,a story of example
stolen his rest in peaceful sacrificial stone coffins
& jumping the mountain they had once climbed to flee
discovering the truthful nature, sparing the lost &mad
both a time & corrupted particle,neither in stature

The thing that was at stake
a lazy hope to utter defeat screams in silent centre of unwordly attention
unknown few,the anger & hold, unworthy than,a second chance then
shy mute can gather forth so it sings..
attraction is it enough to pay & help
bones & origins the honesty
summoning the demons the angels
a happily ever after

The thing that was at stake
Being here,peace& clarity understandings
Tellin every one a thing no stone left alone no leaf unturned
A strong decision as ambassador
reuniting the bodies to babies
shall a king apologise to the golden wound
&these/those dogs releash the chimeras that built the traps & sickness
no cures can redo nor undo,naught for lack of want
the puzzles fun
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4649 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 3/1/2016 1:54:08 AM
sleeping sailors often dream of land
oft the light, the bows back did with misunderstand
freely the hands that caged a bird & clear jade hung the promise of men
tempest storms in lagoons sands slit shadows & starry friend sings mist
rare oasis & cobalt treasure the end of the time in maze amend
the eye & love that breached the fluke or tail
homesickness in the breath of dragoon wail lost finds
the set shell & pearl of heavens/ly hell wheel reveal/unveil/veil/entail/entangle

&/Or:

Sleeping sailors often dream of land
come go front of the drums the servants went die from,sent/chant
shackled whips & spoiled curses, in the eaves of ghastly wallow dried planks
shadows bent & salted ranks, harpoons by the cove dastardly bays
fresh prayers & war spots the writers chuff
banks, bayous, anchors nightmarish monsters catch
electric currents & wind spurs, storming to drown & hanging nigh

sleepless sailors often dream of land
the coral reefs made of sand
the kelpie & sirens that shyly command
sinners rocks into hands
stolen scales & historic statues chaining man
atlantis weeps for the pure & clean grief, shallow deep damned
badly sails childrens books as lanterns
sun & moon dips the scrying astral mirrors

sleeping sailors often dream of land
blood pinkens the dirty waters
tears that reach the mermaids foam
echoing to guide lay harm the unicorn home
the sky & ripples the cloud & whirls
soundless travels, searching alone/to atone
what mate is here, real or invisible
whereas infinity isnt clarity but for longing

sleeping sailors often dream of land
sewn hearts in beatened chests, roughens the dread youth or old dead
stoic, vast, cruel & as see through though left forgotten in stead
guilds & masters, the greenhorn punishments
attacks the fleets & mutinous braves, cowards rope & escapes if ill
sways the mind that floats & is
wonderous technology, a simple dawning
powered though thorough, wrecks the haunt
..
et etc to be cont. an all
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4647 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 2/29/2016 3:44:15 PM
Thinking about a hot toddy
with laudanum & a spritz of whatever fragrance they wore in the books I kept to self
& the powdered blush & creamy kit stares alone waiting wits
in the bathtub cleanly sit, demurely by for with a twitch, watching life alike which fit, lit the time
all decked & ready to go, glowing pristine & in thy home humbled mumblings bowing arch
Leap Year is only a one extra day show to cuff to sip grandeur & all the miss
four years & counting, or for the moment bliss in a diary with secret crushes kiss darkly does the mind covet/omit/overt/taste/yield/
wistful wishes in hungers grip, romance & that tickling kick shall we dance my prince/king's teacher, god

Et etc to be cont. & all.. hmm how to make a g'd toddy now
rereading others works, wow so nice, & the references to food too lol yum and pretty landscapes and all that
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1256 (view)
 
Post Your Favorite Music Lyrics part 2 =) 2015
Posted: 2/29/2016 2:50:45 PM
Regina Spektor "Blue Lips"
He stumbled into faith and thought,
"God, this is all there is."
The pictures in his mind arose
And began to breathe
And all the gods and all the worlds
Began colliding on a backdrop of blue

Blue lips, blue veins

He took a step but then felt tired
He said, "I'll rest a little while"
But when he tried to walk again
He wasn't a child
And all the people hurried fast, real fast
And no one ever smiled

Blue lips, blue veins
Blue, the color of our planet
From far, far away
Blue lips, blue veins
Blue, the color of our planet
From far, far away

He stumbled into faith and thought,
"God, this is all there is."
The pictures in his mind arose
And began to breathe

And no one saw and no one heard
They just followed the lead
The pictures in his mind awoke
And began to breed

They started off beneath the knowledge tree
And they chopped it down to make a picket fence
And marching along the railroad tracks
They smiled real wide for the camera lenses
As they made it past the enemy lines
Just to become enslaved in the assembly lines

Blue lips, blue veins
Blue, the color of our planet
From far, far away
Blue lips, blue veins
Blue, the color of our planet
From far, far away

Blue, the most human color [3x]
Blue lips, blue veins
Blue, the color of our planet
From far, far away

...

Sum41 This Is G'dBye
Take a look around you
Consequence surrounds you
I would cross my heart and hope to die
You should thank your lucky stars and
Count your fading scars cause
No one said you had to live a lie

Too late my friend it's over (Memories broken)
Nice to know ya
Guess that means this is goodbye

Days will come and go by
You will never know why
You're the victim of your own denial
You took the vow of contradiction
Bound by lies and fiction
Holding onto nothing all the while

Too late my friend it's over (Memories broken)
Nice to know ya
Guess that means this is goodbye

This is goodbye
So nice to know ya
Time has come and gone
This is goodbye

This is goodbye
So nice to know ya
Time has come and gone
This is goodbye

Guess that means this is goodbye

This is goodbye
So nice to know ya
Time has come and gone
This is goodbye

This is goodbye
So nice to know ya
Time has come and gone
This is goodbye

Et etc. to be cont. an all, what comes to mind & such a day depends on say feelings, strengths and any a matter I suppose give &/or take
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1255 (view)
 
Post Your Favorite Music Lyrics part 2 =) 2015
Posted: 2/29/2016 10:27:58 AM
Halsey Castle Control Gasoline(3Songs, her voice I like a bit, reminds me of a few others & all!? Like Lana del Rey, even if a few styles not as liked and such)
Female Singer/Musician, solo; Info don't know...:

Sick of all these people talking, sick of all this noise
Tired of all these cameras flashing, sick of being poised
Now my neck is open wide, begging for a fist around it
Already choking on my pride, so there's no use crying about it

I'm headed straight for the castle
They wanna make me their queen
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying that I probably shouldn't be so mean
I'm headed straight for the castle
They've got the kingdom locked up
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying I should probably keep my pretty mouth shut

Straight for the castle

Oh, all of these minutes passing, sick of feeling used
If you wanna break these walls down, you're gonna get bruised
Now my neck is open wide, begging for a fist around it
Already choking on my pride, so there's no use crying about it

I'm headed straight for the castle
They wanna make me their queen
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying that I probably shouldn't be so mean
I'm headed straight for the castle
They've got the kingdom locked up
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying I should probably keep my pretty mouth shut

Straight for the castle

There's no use crying about it
There's no use crying about it
There's no use crying about it
There's no use crying about it

I'm headed straight for the castle
They wanna make me their queen
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying that I probably shouldn't be so mean
I'm headed straight for the castle
They've got the kingdom locked up
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying I should probably keep my pretty mouth shut

Straight for the castle
They wanna make me their queen
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying that I probably shouldn't be so mean
I'm headed straight for the castle
They've got the kingdom locked up
And there's an old man sitting on the throne that's saying I should probably keep my pretty mouth shut

Straight for the castle
..
They send me away to find them a fortune
A chest filled with diamonds and gold
The house was awake
With shadows and monsters
The hallways they echoed and groaned

I sat alone, in bed 'til the morning
I'm crying, "They're coming for me"
And I tried to hold these secrets inside me
My mind's like a deadly disease

I'm bigger than my body
I'm colder than this home
I'm meaner than my demons
I'm bigger than these bones

And all the kids cried out,
"Please stop, you're scaring me"
I can't help this awful energy
Goddamn right, you should be scared of me
Who is in control?

I paced around for hours, on empty
I jumped at the slightest of sounds
And I couldn't stand the person inside me
I turned all the mirrors around

I'm bigger than my body
I'm colder than this home
I'm meaner than my demons
I'm bigger than these bones

And all the kids cried out,
"Please stop, you're scaring me"
I can't help this awful energy
Goddamn right, you should be scared of me
Who is in control?

I'm well acquainted
With villains that live in my bed
They beg me to write them
So they'll never die when I'm dead

And I've grown familiar
With villains that live in my head
They beg me to write them
So I'll never die when I'm dead

I'm bigger than my body
I'm colder than this home
I'm meaner than my demons
I'm bigger than these bones

[2x]
And all the kids cried out,
"Please stop, you're scaring me"
I can't help this awful energy
Goddamn right, you should be scared of me
Who is in control?
..
Are you insane like me? Been in pain like me?
Bought a hundred dollar bottle of champagne like me?
Just to pour that mother****er down the drain like me?
Would you use your water bill to dry the stain like me?

Are you high enough without the Mary Jane like me?
Do you tear yourself apart to entertain like me?
Do the people whisper 'bout you on the train like me?
Saying that you shouldn't waste your pretty face like me?

And all the people say,

"You can't wake up, this is not a dream,
You're part of a machine, you are not a human being,
With your face all made up, living on a screen,
Low on self esteem, so you run on gasoline."

Oh, oh, oh, oh,
I think there's a flaw in my code,
Oh, oh, oh, oh,
These voices won't leave me alone,

Well my heart is gold, and my hands are cold,

Are you deranged like me? Are you strange like me?
Lighting matches just to swallow up the flame like me?
Do you call yourself a ****ing hurricane like me?
Pointing fingers cause you'll never take the blame like me?

And all the people say,

"You can't wake up, this is not a dream,
You're part of a machine, you are not a human being,
With your face all made up, living on a screen,
Low on self esteem, so you run on gasoline."

Oh, oh, oh, oh,
I think there's a flaw in my code,
Oh, oh, oh, oh,
These voices won't leave me alone,

Well my heart is gold, and my hands are cold.

...

Love, Oldies, others.. think also sung/made by another, not sure of info an such again, sry. Hope this works too & nicely..
a belated Valentines Day sort maybe

Westlife The/this Rose (Boy Band?90s..!still exists to be learned)
-the slowness, the sadness, the feelings and such, ah to move to, & behold and well

Some say love it is a river
That drowns the tender reed.
Some say love it is a razor
That leaves your soul to bleed.

Some say love it is a hunger
An endless, aching need
I say love it is a flower,
And you its only seed.

It's the heart afraid of breaking
That never learns to dance
It's the dream afraid of waking
That never takes the chance

It's the one who won't be taken,
Who cannot seem to give
And the soul afraid of dying
That never learns to live.

When the night has been too lonely
And the road has been too long.
And you think that love is only
For the lucky and the strong.

Just remember in the winter
Far beneath the bitter snow
Lies the seed that with the sun's love,
In the spring, becomes the rose.

Et etcs. to be cont an all ~* Heard on YT was how, amvs and whatnot
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1019 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 2/29/2016 10:19:12 AM
Chinese New Year
Monkey & then
over above the headfast
instructors chiefs, chains command, defends bureau
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 813 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 2/29/2016 10:11:38 AM
Slide down
snow puffs checking
thawing the parcels inn
greasy dive to exploring sky
salt sun/moon dip
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3783 (view)
 
Cinquain on My Brain
Posted: 2/29/2016 9:54:28 AM
and cold
lies the woman
in the glass river mound
coffins drape the talentless shape
la/au chateau

and cold
the mirror mask
slithering by past wars
early years leapt four birthings, pleats
icing/slick beams/creamy

and cold
the bedsheets soothes
the dreamers maid in noon
by wares of owing pedigrees
warmth's beck/peck/deck/call

and cold
electric notes
blaring nights of gadgets
tupperwares of which survived blues
compress

and cold
the palms to head
throaty agreements moves/d
removed bare, close shock, wrapped mess, dress
clocking

and cold
shoulders to floor
behooves a couple, mad
spat with derision sent to bemuse
shuttle

and cold
houses, the rooms
sparse of love, brims violence
what witnessed is witnessed, feet pulse
throbbing/robbings/

and cold
leftovers spoil
bereft cleft & hooks, clubbed
flubs the klutz, flusters buzz, in bets
deficit

and cold
corpses or ghosts
humane or by textbook
chills the hall before the next murk/lurks
barrier/kings queens/flowers/exit/ way through/out/

and cold
depression seize
kisses behind dabbing
tears soak the bloody bath, cloaks coats
terrors/herding/herring

and cold
lay dying rides/walks
closes one child, proof piles/pricks/picks/ticks/rifts/
riddles interrogates all awhile
aging/less /

and cold
skeletons dance
singing bones chant, red roads
nominees/ates judges, audience/vip/tickets pay/play/pray/spay /ambient/ambiance
ho hum/speech/gold false
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1254 (view)
 
Post Your Favorite Music Lyrics part 2 =) 2015
Posted: 2/29/2016 9:46:36 AM
Same as before,from above another of from by..:Lizz Alice Human Sacrifice Book (poss VideoGame? other..&/or a Fansmade sort..unsure, plus diff lyrics variations & as so;here's one guess to try)
English- maybe translation diff
*Starts off with like a monologue of sorts than
The first Alice walked
Into the woods of Wonderland.
Bravely, with a fearsome sword,
Held tightly in her hand.
Slicing down whatever laid
In her unyielding wrath.
Leaving chaos in her wake,
By a red bloody path.

Then Alice strayed too far,
Lost within the woods.
Giving in to all her sins,
Locking her away for good.
Much like the gruesome path
That marked her evil ways,
Still her life remains a mystery
'Till this very day.

Second Alice was a tame
And tender gentle man.
Singing songs to all the folks,
Who lived in Wonderland.
Everyday he’d sing away to
All the girls and boys.
One by one, he’s spreading evil
Slowly with his voice.

Whenever he would sing,
People gathered round.
Madness took a hold of him,
Shot him dead to the ground.
Blood stained the roses
To a bright and somber red.
Once loved and enjoyed by all,
The man was left for dead.

The third Alice was a
Lovely girl from Wonderland.
Beautiful, the girl was born
Into a life so grand.
She charmed all the people
To her every beck and call.
Then she birthed a kingdom
That would rise above them all.

This Alice was then crowned,
Turned into a queen.
Ruling all the people here,
Lost within a crazy dream.
So afraid of death the girl
Was mindless and warped.
Once a gorgeous ruler,
Now she’s just an ugly corpse.

Find the bright forest path,
That’s where the journey starts.
A tea party with blue roses,
That’s where the forest parts.
The invite from the Queen,
It actually was
The trump card,
the Ace of Hearts.

The fourth Alice was a pair
Of siblings who were twins.
Straying into Wonderland
Is where their tale begins.

Wandering across the world,
They passed through many doors.
Curious of this new place,
They traveled and explored

The stubborn older sister,
The clever younger brother,
Were close to see the nature
Of the true Alice at hand.

Both will never wake up
From the dream that they had planned.
Forever they’ll wander hopelessly
In Wonderland.

-Instrumentals, laughter..choir/repeat..

~watch on YT AMVs?!
Et etc. to be cont. an all, thinking
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 5014 (view)
 
Haiku Connection - Part IV
Posted: 2/29/2016 8:29:59 AM
Hey fellow artistes of poetry works & such on tech. Great to still read your stuff, an hope all is going well, even with the cold and all that ups & downs of life

Neon lights aglow
the leap year begins to row
caterpillars born

Neon lights aglow
the midst of throes in the ponds
crowning galore bored

Neon lights aglow
crackling rubber trees sop
milking the marshes

milking the marshes
soft prickles the knife, the skin wick
anthem of statues/medals/awards

Neon lights aglow
flowers burning in the night
powers of humanity

powers of humanity
comets become a core, cords
choirs chorus bulldoze

Neon lights aglow
hellsingers blowing rakes gored
weeds & reeds a thing

weeds & reeds a thing
deer bear wolves owls, ants eat sand
the sight in emblems/amblers
 ASIANPEACHQtEA
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 1253 (view)
 
Post Your Favorite Music Lyrics part 2 =) 2015
Posted: 1/25/2016 12:07:39 PM
2016
Asian FanMade? not sure of full info, but here..think from a VG & or other Anime, saw on YT as a AMV

Lizz - Hide and Seek
Ding dong, I know you can hear me, open up the door, I only want to play a little

Ding dong, you can’t keep me waiting, it’s already too late for you to try and run away

I see you through the window
Our eyes are locked together
I can sense your horror
Though I’d like to see it closer

Ding dong, here I come to find you, hurry up and run, let’s play a little game and have fun

Ding dong, where is it you’ve gone to, do you think you’ve won, our game of hide and seek has just begun

I hear your footsteps
Thumping loudly through the hallways
I can hear your sharp breaths
You’re not very good at hiding

Just wait, you can’t hide from me, I’m coming
Just wait, you can’t hide from me, I’m coming
Just wait, you can’t hide from me, I’m coming
Just wait, you can’t hide from me

Knock knock, I am at your door now, I am coming in, no need for me to ask permission

Knock knock, I’m inside your room now, where is it you’ve hid, our game of hide and seek’s about to end

I’m coming closer
Looking underneath your bed but
You’re not there, I wonder
Could you be inside the closet?

Ding dong, I have found you
Ding dong, you were hiding here
Now you’re it
Ding dong, finally found you dear
Now you’re it
Ding dong, looks like I have won
Now you’re it
Ding dong, pay the consequence.
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3749 (view)
 
Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 12/3/2015 7:01:20 AM
from strife
refuge in sight
needle in a haystack
broke the last step, notorious
migrant

migrants
solving every
problem in this hue/loon/cue, stick
inside emerging vacancy
grant out

grants out
education
business & livelihood
cents or trade a persons aim, stone
paper/metal

paper/metal/iron/
a happy kings
swallow with tunes to death
meets no sorrow, tomorrows spar
swans horn

swans horn
lays to waste, ice
trumpeters aghast, large
against a lion & gold trunks
cast shade

cast shade
hidden the caste
hinder the towne in wars
games without win, a hearts chest cuts
lock(/ed/s) up/

lock up
closed down mantles
tough hides of small dashed hopes
sends no more then sounds to fable
clean guns

cleaned guns
clears innocent
innovation by unique
unicorn & its very breath
submerge

submerge
integrate voids
segregation a boon
white versus black, common of sorts / ingenuity beckons back
forth love

forthe love
dissolves courage
dissipates dreams, collects
the friends surrounding their one life
cordial
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 169 (view)
 
Going for the Nine's
Posted: 11/16/2015 3:51:56 AM
Lights from all manners, theaters comeuppance beheld you favours

remembering revered & repeating songs, over over, forlorn gongs

your grand rapid words defeats a mind of grievances

great mother godde, that held the splitting moons, departs

sun off fathers carrying, rues every err cannot wish away/

explain why the rapping inside is not resting lies

rinsing tears falling sighs, dreams divided is planned conception

nothing lasts forever, a day is all bequeath, breathe/
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 2448 (view)
 
/////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\
Posted: 11/16/2015 3:46:21 AM
Is this funeral a farce
not misleading the larks
feints to the matter that has some warring for cud
Ain't high in the sky nor grounded to truth, but can't be taken
not for aloof, for what you notice isn't fair

There's no woolgathering being spun nor clouds in head
got no ethic compass to rule who has ownership woes, no nothing to shred
yet right is right in comparing the fool
& wrong is the grieved by which we mean dead
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 313 (view)
 
Acrostic Poetry - first letter of each line spells the Title of your poem...
Posted: 11/16/2015 3:39:38 AM
Partial to practicality, partially due to priority
Assuaging what has each of us in such hardcore frivolous formalization
Rustic familiarity hits the nail in its rusted blood dyed salt, faults
Is to the star & the leaf above & the ground
Sensing what may be our dilemma in moral immortality

Merits
Yesterday

Reliving enactments
On pretending that charm
Saves all possibility
End
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4541 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 10/7/2015 5:31:21 AM
please close the door
subtle hand beckon & dismiss,a wave,a lift of tears,salutes wooden betrays/kicks
out of our sight & loose hidden minds increase such rigourous tempo
monotonous breath dissipates voices lower raise no questions
hiring the body to dis/re/engage
sharp raps muffled movements rides unbridled,does require
the madam must appear within a disappointing shot discreet gossip
drama fade from existence, disappear often brilliance,settling bridges/future scores

please close the door
bolts & hinges fall from false sense to safety
covet mocking retorts, a quietness surveys, portrays a stark contrast converts
comparisions in pause & effect what is..reverse angles
names manners, respecting dishonour, disembark every will a smile if yet parlour tricks
disproportionate mistaken of life duration anxiety we picked to adorn & trash

please close the door
shield ajar from bitter cruel world withstanding war
avoids return pf present chance adore to old wounds
pressuring ticks nonunderstanding the hard withered stance/lance
past & buried canot stay a haven,sanctuary trapped by tin springs
loaded guns slicing apart wings: stuttering engagements a laughingstock behind
in full view ownership gives away their last key imprints
no home for the homeless, deeds hidden breaking wreaths

please close the door
secrets remain guarding
mishaps a kissed invite
hugged under influence of rich sour wine
wrapped decoration, forgo the meanings
ministrations withhold claims among the weak & strong prevail
fights splinter the barrier, like the axe wrongfully displayed
troubles peeping, destroying where rebuild
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 4540 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 10/7/2015 3:45:22 AM
please close the door
dead queen off cold floors & winter twin in its shore counting
princess of wilted flowers, so dark your petals & poisoning words hoards wish
embracing this salt vinegar coated lungs tracing which a covet does sin
fast paced lump, but faster the bite, harsh it sings/teems whip
underneath you try to sleep, but the fears echo through these ears
years pinpoint you to a spot, dominant & subservient, ballet
the swan & sweetest fat, barest autumn cannot kiss back a spell

or

please close the door
I welcome you to lock it
may each youth who sees, come by to check it repeat
polish that storm & swing on the knob, as the bell chimes from torn out rugs
peer up into a sky,is it empty is it still dark an high
could one deliver to send, shall it be received to take again due
Would a thankyou suffice for those steps away, airing grievance, despair
talk though the rust/rush/wait is long over

or

please close the door
theres no need to hesitate, nothing to bet, use the knocker
all there is here, is there & in front..now swear confess, lying ways
at any sides mingling parties, startling princes with devoted handlers with their own gain
in another time, in some misplaced agenda
on either a stroke of both rock & glass/brass/crass/class/dash
comes nor goes, just us
only to be a dream from space between windows/shutters

or

please close the door
an invite or warning in stead-the foyers
tis the table ahead of the chair, the opposite is right
elders of a type primp & become fixtures
rubbing together a friction, oil and fire waxing cold soft iron
disappearance of anger, the dim light opens solely seems
wet from drying; was it really/ simply/merely only a selected/selective memory
what pleases, treasures that master & mastered

Et etc to be cont. an all perhaps, thinks
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3741 (view)
 
last line, first line
Posted: 9/13/2015 5:48:38 AM
comes to mind
a savory tidbit
behind it a farce
in front is ?
a tool to study & make do
says you are injured, your dreams a fool
left over askewed
trying to bring back balance
a threatened chance
suppose opportunes are readily understood
than of the mess
everything obsessed
worries, lack of cues, growing up older
aghast
no other way to, we do
and we smile
& we abuse non commitment
& we admit & play different
an gaining the same
an losing out
till very words are stunted
and everyone is insane
never so much as is a realization
failing to assimilate, be indoctrinated,
follow the rules & obey
accidents are by choice
broken matter
shielded & locked, such is the useless form
however
a desperate credit
depraved from basic moulding
set to the world a defected comadrie
sobering effect, antiquated ideas
promises from later days drift to unyoked minds
got spare for repair, return to the realm
apart a part of separated lands
connect by inventions, by tenacious adversary
almost near, alike a set of perfect twins, triplets, here after
catching up to disabled, outmatching the runts
merely toys shunned
abandon change, reverse the future
time takes heart, effort a worth of fame, trends we gather
like flocks in couples
making sense aware

et etc to be cont maybe
thinking an all..
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3739 (view)
 
last line, first line
Posted: 9/13/2015 5:23:23 AM
Finding comfort while I cry
in clothes or softy cling to a lie
sleep, sleep, succumb to a dry
given up, giving in, & quitting
stopped out of control sins to be common in unison
my wings are broken swept from me awhile
human am
I could but fly with a crooked down sigh
pulling out, waiting within
escaping from boredom & preposterous obscenity
in hindsight, or foresight, for any appearances, knew
wouldnt end well, just as well.
justifying every day
taken away the danger we instinctively know well to sensual memory
or is it being..
forgetting what hurt when you went and died
wept a charade & too died
numbing the reasons so desperate to explore
complications from over less stimulating response
right away or wrong as it should
be it from far grace or in disguised vulgarity
salted orchards brings in past winter chill, autumn's slumbering wreath
of another moment lost to unfulfilled withdrawing weak will
temperance is an unyielding foe
remembrance in stained & pure hands
friends of stature we hold too loose in mock dear
your glass lands & their sooty sky
leaving out the nightmare we kill like all defense
an outrage to quiet grudge
sickness & wealth we do to covet
protecting our first name rights, few can accept
best we assure those who would set free
all it takes is a time of essence
forever we are here in this we sought closure we hold blessing
held a bit for a purpose or secret
running over loose knit boards to walk in watered down holes
and continuously the indifference builds, the hatred grows
never is it concluded to be
an another act begun, but again
is it tears we are accustomed to reward us in
disappointing the disgust
tears flow down, stinging
Each one is different, meaning,
sensory overload, overwhelms, under way
given a grant we take a short leash, battering nearly all
through
solitary, a thrall, a friend or kin
teaches early the grave sharing we are punished in
riddles tantamount to nothing
small is the light, giant is the simplicity, & both in complexing
finding a grieving run consequently rerun repeat rewind destroy,
peace
for one fear
cleansing love

et etc to be cont. maybe
thinking an all..
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 745 (view)
 
Cinquain stains on my membrane
Posted: 9/13/2015 5:02:32 AM
The truth
halfway there, time
an empty sure concept
unbecoming from descendants/ancestors
The trust
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 3712 (view)
 
Cinquain on the Membrane
Posted: 9/13/2015 4:37:58 AM
wander
spotted it hid
in plain sight in no robes
little precious left to recover
at stop/our camp/parked laws

wander
antics bring by
a monkey's cymbals, clash
frightful smiles terrorized deny
ambush/barrage/a stroll/stroller/oils fail

wander
warring between
flippancy in blood let
lustful to a stark victory
there were/wound up/bounding

wander
constant patience
a soul hurting holds home
a heavy grinding melody
wonder/winder/

wander
nomads, migrants
immigrants pilgrimage
tripped of history & off/oft love
freedom/freely/free them/save us/you can't/it's eye/
 asianpeachqTea
Joined: 5/5/2011
Msg: 193 (view)
 
Best song one liners/lyrics you love
Posted: 8/18/2015 12:58:00 PM
Short songs an all
To be cont.

Young Heretics Dear Rabbit I Know I Am A Wolf
-Saw an animation with this song..lovely. The differences..

..And I've captured you once but I wasn't quite right
So I'm telling you that you'll be safe with me.
..
Rabbit my claws are dull now so don't be afraid
I could keep you warm as long as you can just try to be brave
Yes I know I'm a wolf and I've been known to bite
But the rest of my pack I have left them behind
And my teeth may be sharp and I've been raised to kill
But the thought of fresh meat it is making me ill
So I'm telling you that you'll be safe with me.
..
So rabbit please stop looking the other way
It's cold out there so why not stay here
Under my tail
...
Joel Faviere If You Knew
They think you're crazy.They think you're mad.(echo/repeat drawn out..).They call you stupid, worthless, tell you you're not worth it.
And now you're walkin' back to a place you call home, But you feel so alone.
The same hurtful hits, it's your darker place.
In your virgin ears, the remarks they make.
And if they, if they really knew all of those things.
That you do in your room to hide the pain
I bet their minds would change.
I'll bet their minds would change.
They'd change if they knew the pain.
Change
'Cause I believe in these scars
'Cause I believe.

...
Don't You Dare Forget The Sun -(again some lines etc..meaningful)
You think you haven't sinned.
Your walls are impassible.
Oh, I think that you're better off looking alone,
And at the end of the day you think to yourself,
"My body is a product being sold on a shelf."
Tell me I can change,
Well, I know you lay in bed,
Contemplating your own death.
Well, just look at what you've done.
Don't you dare forget the sun, love!
Cold white walls, keep you from your pad and pen.
You just wanna stab again.
I can't believe it's half this hard,
You never knew your mind was dark, no!
You can dig so deep for scars,
Come on and breathe with me, oh!
You look down on, me so casually,
In everything I know.
You look down on me, but not right on me.
Did I wreck this broken home?
Dear diary,
Life is trying me.
Can I get a sign?
Or a two of mine, a piece of mind.
Can I get a sign? (a sign)
Can I get a sign? (I know)
Is it plain to see
Can I think of something?
Gotta think of something!
 
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