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 Author Thread: 4 Lines
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 728 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 12/4/2013 11:04:44 PM
Exploding stars travel the universe
Space and time start to converse
Forming our world and where we reside
To laugh, to play and even hide
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3612 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 12/4/2013 11:02:18 PM
Persona's anxiety confess, compel loving myself than
Looking for moments creating Zen
A place of fortune, fame and pride
Alas a lonely place you hide

If it weren't for love you'd escape
Create the beauty beautiful landscape
Of perfection you'd create in mind
Beauty and perfection leaving you blind
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 1024 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 12/4/2013 10:56:23 PM
Waking from a dream can't remember
Fogged memories begin to tremor
Blurred in images form in shapes
Mystery of memories and all it creates

Trying to form the images blur
Lost in the fog without a cure
Creating thoughts of what it means
Leaving mystery formed in dreams
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2151 (view)
 
Oh, it’s so Ascetic
Posted: 11/29/2013 6:27:35 PM
Thank you Joshua... it does have meaning
BTW I have been here before under a different pen, (triplebp) from long ago
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2421 (view)
 
/////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\
Posted: 11/28/2013 10:23:15 PM
I traveled to heaven and back again
A vision of memory about to begin
But was it a mystery of life to read
Or a warning of death for one to heed
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 723 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 11/28/2013 10:18:22 PM
Blood flows through memories lanes
The taste in your mouth and all it disdains
Corrupt in the moment of yesterday's lies
Taking to flight your destiny dies
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2149 (view)
 
Oh, it’s so Ascetic
Posted: 11/28/2013 8:28:16 PM
Losing is lost in other man's dreams
When nothing is important as it seems
Carried into the darkness on the backs of the poor
The rich take everything leaving the lure
But they are not as rich as they seem
Carried in materials that other's dream
Their lives are empty, vast and full of greed
Moving through time at standing speed
Creating nothing but wealth for the world to see
Lost in the memories they long to be free
Free of the loneliness created by a crowd
Yelling inside... screaming out loud
They want their lives to gleam and glisten
Surrounded by many but no one to listen
They are just there for the epic ride
Lost in the wealth with nothing to hide
Taking the memories of other man's dreams
But life is more important then all the wealth seems
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3600 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 11/28/2013 8:15:05 PM
Listening to Thunder Mountain erupt then fall
Cascading brightly on the moon lit wall
Snow crests breaking silence into the night
As it crashes the darkness into the light

Sonnets carried to heaven on angels wings
While the wind whistles and the silence sings
Breaking moment the notes fade like old blue jeans
The beauty of nature creating epic scenes
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 91 (view)
 
hide profile now has to be paid for?
Posted: 11/18/2013 6:15:33 PM
My two cents......
I am sorry to say this is a negative idea for me I use the hide site so I can remain in the forums why because I like them pretty soon they'll start charging for that just like when the poetry forum and its disguise now.

I guess just one more reason to spend as little time here as possible.
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 697 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 10/22/2013 7:47:10 AM
Eyes of mystery consuming my view
Mimicking the sky in their gentle hue
Drawing me closer tumbling deep within
I vanish in the beauty of your iris’s grin
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 920 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 10/18/2013 4:13:02 PM
Hear the clouds when the thunder calls
Breaking the silence throughout our walls
Opening the mysteries within the skies
Leaving us empty with nothing but lies

The lightning crashes tearing into our souls
Carrying us off on its dreadful shoals
Leaving the darkness breaking into the light
Far from our memories deep out of sight

With nothing left but memories moist
The earth below us gently rejoiced
For this is the fertilizer of our world
Rejoiced in the moment with each unfurled

Taking in stride its every breath
Recycling the land with every death
Planting the seeds for tomorrow's rebirth
Deep in our souls within the earth
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 911 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 10/12/2013 11:14:09 PM
Dark energy to blast to black holes
Reaching deep within our souls
Creating mystery and directing the past
Throughout the darkness deep and vast

Taking us to a time and place
Further our minds as if to chase
The deepest desires to keep us whole
To hold us back or lose control
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2407 (view)
 
/////\\\\\ 6 Lines or Less //////\\\\\\
Posted: 10/2/2013 8:00:21 PM
Gracefully floating in silent wave
Her wings stretched out forever crave
Reaching far beyond the stars
Erasing everything even the scars
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 870 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 10/2/2013 7:55:34 PM
Ice crystals skate across frozen ponds
Sketching chasing cementing bonds
Aligned animating eminence
Graced forever woven suspense
Surfaced hard bridging swirled
Sheathing below another world
Under suspense of frozen state
Atoms collide substance vibrate
Crafting design the world we view
With their splendor shining through
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 852 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 9/26/2013 8:26:42 PM
And after death one's heart is placed
Where life is taken and erased
To the mortal the end of time
Is this the penance for your crime
Lost in illusion suspended grace
The stars align in time and space
Beating has stopped and silence remains
Fluid has ceased bound in chains
Taken from life in silence stance
Lost in death with nothing to chance
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 814 (view)
 
On the Wings of an Angel...
Posted: 9/24/2013 2:53:15 PM
Sometimes in life we learn to let go
Take the moment and go with the flow
That’s not to say the past is forgotten
Only to speak of it less often
These are the fabric of our very soul
Teaching us the way to leave us whole
Memories and dreams to take us away
Placing us forward without the decay
The lessons we’ve learned spark memories heart
But sometimes best forgotten to make a new start
The ache we carry like bags on a train
Don’t have to burden us with terrible pain
They can carry us forward to something anew
Maybe something so special that’s given to few
Remember each of us travel along life’s path
And sometimes it carries such terrible wrath
Along with these memories comes pure full bliss
The hope for tomorrow and a skillful wish
A wish to carry us far beyond the stars
To trace our memories and heal the scars
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3486 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/24/2013 12:33:44 AM
Damp in the dew of love's only revelation
Two bodies entwine host celebration
Long is lost for loves last lament
To hope to break or at least prevent

The moment in time to precious to cherish
Rolled up in memories not to perish
Locked deep within our souls
Love, passion beyond what life controls
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 817 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 9/13/2013 10:49:04 PM
Miner for gold and a perfect heart
Shines in the memory of chemistry spark
Butterflies fluttering with each glance
Sent in the moment of circumstance

Chance meeting eyes locked in stare
On my sleeve my heart doth bear
Laid out for her in perfection's place
Carry me through both time and space
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 678 (view)
 
4 Lines
Posted: 9/13/2013 10:43:25 PM
I sit in solace as time goes by
Suspended mystery wondering why
Lost in the moments I take away
Sun in the sky beautiful array
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2135 (view)
 
Trespassing Mystery
Posted: 9/12/2013 8:13:10 PM
I'm lost and I can't find my way
Terribly faulted and full of decay
A life of torment from past mistakes
Promises lost and all of the fakes
I take stock and look back at it all
Was this the plan or destiny's call
I'm in a place where faith has faltered
Completely destroyed and a life that's haltered
I tried to amend for past discretions
But life still leans to learn me lessons
I have been at the bottom a time or two
And made my way back struggling through
This test of time now the worst its been
But I've tried to amend from a life of sin
Played the game by all the rules
But I still stand in the hall of fools
I'm tired of praying to a god I doubt
Who left me on this terrible route
So I'll toss this message for you to see
To pray for me then set it free
Free to travel to another prayer
For the next to read and then to share
From its travels I hope I find
The world to center and release the grind
To turn my fate and set me free
And all this pain to absentee
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2134 (view)
 
Trespassing Mystery
Posted: 9/12/2013 8:13:02 PM
I'm lost and I can't find my way
Terribly faulted and full of decay
A life of torment from past mistakes
Promises lost and all of the fakes
I take stock and look back at it all
Was this the plan or destiny's call
I'm in a place where faith has faltered
Completely destroyed and a life that's haltered
I tried to amend for past discretions
But life still leans to learn me lessons
I have been at the bottom a time or two
And made my way back struggling through
This test of time now the worst its been
But I've tried to amend from a life of sin
Played the game by all the rules
But I still stand in the hall of fools
I'm tired of praying to a god I doubt
Who left me on this terrible route
So I'll toss this message for you to see
To pray for me then set it free
Free to travel to another prayer
For the next to read and then to share
From its travels I hope I find
The world to center and release the grind
To turn my fate and set me free
And all this pain to absentee
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 813 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 9/12/2013 7:47:52 PM
Underneath the stars with a master plan
To head back to the beginning where it began
Trace the path from the heaven's gate
Setting it forward to be lost in fate

Is this where we thought we'd be
Under the stars so carelessly free
Holding hands and caressing time
Flawlessly faulted creating sublime
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3462 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/11/2013 7:26:20 PM
Think we'll hit land come morn light
The sands of time under the starlit night
Soft wind wisps through her hair
Locked in the moment under moonlit glare

I reach for her hand and draw her in
To a space in time about to begin
To take us to a place of bliss
Her soft gentle lips embracing kiss
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3432 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 8/19/2013 7:32:31 PM
Then learn how to lose, then how to win
Take nothing for granted and then how to spin
Toiled in stories the mind creates
Capturing moments setting fates

Then walk a mile in their shoes
Feeling their loss and terrible dues
Then try to remember your gentler side
And hope from judgement your don't have to hide
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 253 (view)
 
Cinquain Stains on My Membrane...
Posted: 8/19/2013 7:28:00 PM
Blanket
Tattered and torn
Draped flowing
From a newborn

Passed
Down through ages
Wrapping generations
Stages
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 239 (view)
 
Cinquain Stains on My Membrane...
Posted: 8/8/2013 7:37:36 PM
And turns
this twist in fate
the lines we cross
our minds in state
then comes
the life we feel
the path we follow
to something real
then twists
the test of time
the distance we travel
life sublime
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2667 (view)
 
First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 8/8/2013 7:29:05 PM
which way the wind blew was how to decide
forward motion rising and falling with the tide
taking us further than our minds will allow
the waves crashing far over the bow

on this journey to a far away land
set in motion to land on the sand
lost in the moment of the beautiful sun
the adventure ahead has just begun
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2626 (view)
 
First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 7/11/2013 7:27:11 PM
Than the lowest of the low
Create this world as we know
Taking bribes and endless crimes
Poverty left within its confines
The few get rich upon our backs
Leaving the rest in the world that lacks
But are they wealthy with with happiness
Or is it the poor its up to you to guess
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 708 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 7/11/2013 7:21:05 PM
not everything is as it seems
illusions in minds and endless dreams
taking away from realities mind
boundless and endless leaving you blind
darkness haunts beyond our world
leaving everything and nothing left unfurled
to be considered and pondered for days
like time and space and endless arrays
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3356 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 6/25/2013 7:24:11 PM
To help battle this world without a care
I'll empty my mind and leave it bare
Taking with me this grain of sand
Immensely large within my hand

I'll hurl far through the test of time
Breaking momentum leaving you blind
And within its wake left to subside
There'll be nothing left for the evil to hide
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 3282 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 5/23/2013 8:38:00 PM
By deduction this must be false or true
Broken or bent the lines go through
Tracing the points and subsequent lines
Testing the limits of space and times

Through the planets and stars above
Pushing barrenness benevolent a shove
Evolving leisurely over a billion years
Delicately creating the space it rears
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 591 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 5/16/2013 7:36:08 PM
split exactly apart in the middle
the mystery of life left to a riddle
above the heavens where the angels roam
below the heat of the devil’s throne
are we caught in a place and time
with nothing left to find sublime
or is this a place to share our hearts
until the time of our life departs
is this world a place to ponder
to see its glory and simply wonder
or are we here to just exist
for a moment of certain bliss
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 281 (view)
 
Pick a line, any line, from the poem above (props to W)
Posted: 9/18/2012 8:45:35 PM
what angels have forgtten an done
broken wings the healing begun
captured within the wrath god
totally frozen then they thawed
creeping warmth beneath their wings
riches greater than many king's
covered over many a heart
the beauty of the ancient art
filling up many a soul
containing glory without the toll
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2804 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/18/2012 8:25:27 PM
we can still be strong sweet love
take your heart and give it a shove
lighting up this heart of mine
brighter than the stars that shine

in the sky for all to see
with the stars I long to be
held in brilliance suspended dance
hoping for some happenstance
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2051 (view)
 
First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted: 9/18/2012 8:16:21 PM
but celebrations looms
not lost forever but lost in tombs
seeking memories to make today
lost and lonely caught in fray
travelling the path on the way to you
to catch the love given to few
royal sonnets of the heart it sings
beauty greater than crowns or rings
flourished with your tender dreams
soft and flowing with the current streams
creating the past for you to cherish
not to hide or even perish
preserved within this heart of mine
for all the test of time
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 21 (view)
 
What do american girls want to talk about....?
Posted: 9/18/2012 9:56:49 AM
Hmm I don't know but the first thing that comes to mind is.... German girls are so much easier. lol

I guess it depends on if you are a player or not... it seems women these days have a nose for that, you know, I see his toys but the profile is a little vague...

just saying lol
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Would seriously LOVE some reviews/critiques
Posted: 9/17/2012 9:48:16 PM
dude get use to it lol think about this I really don't think it matters what your profile says for the most part
I have done some experimenting with the profile thing and I am guessing if you get anything it is mostly what you are not looking for. Mine seemed to have been from older ladies or totally unrealistic attempts even when I have been polite and suggested them luck in their search.
If she is beautiful more than likely her email is full lol
I really don't know what to tell you other than lose the pic with the girl in it, don't give it all away as your profile is very detailed. Try something like avid reader and drop a few of your favs

other than than prepare for a long visit and if she is real enough she just may find you
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 2799 (view)
 
8 Line Poetry Stanzas - Use Last Line 4 First Line
Posted: 9/17/2012 9:14:44 PM
and loves never comin' back
burned up the chimney and out the stack
drifting up to find the wind
carried away and never pinned

floating gently and far away
becoming nothing but the dark of day
leaving you empty and dark inside
knowing that your life was a lie
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 8 (view)
 
Date him or dump him?
Posted: 9/6/2012 8:58:30 PM
Well what you raise here is important issues and some of these things should never be tolerated, period. But of course that is part of the process poor hygiene should have been noticed pretty much right away and some of the other things can easily be hidden. What you mention are major issues and to be honest I would be gone at first sight as usually these are ingrained and have been with them for a long time and probably will be repeated.
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 6 (view)
 
Date him or dump him?
Posted: 9/6/2012 8:43:44 PM
See that is the problem too many seek perfection when in reality no one really knows what that is. When you start to pick at the little things then you are being unrealistic, instead you should cherish the differences. If it isn't easy then it probably isn't right, instead of hating the way something is maybe you should look at why it makes them unique. I don't know like the way their nose crinkles when they laugh etc. etc. maybe you should look at it in a different light.
See the problem is today people have these huge laundry lists of what they deem to be perfect when the reality is you are not really giving the relationship the chance to grow. Today's society is so throw away it seems relationships have gone that way too. Maybe instead of picking at something communication would be the key relationships are a compromise and it takes effort so let's just go get the new I phone 5 or whatever the next one is.

Now there is something to think about.
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 683 (view)
 
>>>>>>>>>>>>> Viewed Me Now a Paid Feature: Please post comments here
Posted: 3/13/2012 9:45:58 PM
Hmm I guess then it would not be a completely free site like originally advertised....

just saying is all... I liked it better when it was completely free who cares if there are ads... oh accept the operators of POF I guess
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 10 (view)
 
Reminders
Posted: 11/27/2011 12:14:49 AM
Sitting here reminds me of
The dreams we shared and the ones we loved
The memories of love locked deep inside
In my heart where they tend to hide

Wishing that it would never end
No broken hearts that need to mend
A love to last the test of time
Your path to follow until entwined

Beyond the skies and far above
Entwine until we collapse in love
Holding our grasp until we reminisce
The fond memory of that gentle kiss

That led to love and tenderness
The feeling of that first caress
Held in mind… forever still
Locked in memory beyond my will
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 8 (view)
 
POEMS AND QUOTES: Type your poetry or quote 2share
Posted: 11/26/2011 12:13:26 PM


Each and Every Time Aligned

The drum beats out of time
The words in the music start to rhyme
A tender voice fills the air
Carrying the melody for all to share
Words of fancy, spun in song
A message grand, the meaning strong
Carried through this heart of mine
Feelings and memories all align
Of a time in presence past
Losing love, to find one to last
Funny how the music fits
And all the feelings that it knits
In each and every circumstance
Creating just a tender trance
Of feelings, emotions, tender kind
Each and every time aligned
When the songs play in tune
Hoping the search is over soon
 just4this
Joined: 9/25/2011
Msg: 6 (view)
 
POEMS AND QUOTES: Type your poetry or quote 2share
Posted: 11/25/2011 10:33:42 PM
Emotions lifted near heavens soar
Floating on wings, off to explore
The true essence of a flower’s scent
Longing to feel love’s last lament

Emotions lifted toward heaven’s gate
Bequeathed to the ones…detained in fate
Life’s a journey a winding course
Love’s destiny a tremendous force

Emotions carried on angels wings
A beautiful sonnet of the heart it sings
Standing through the test of time
Lost in the heart of love sublime

These are the emotions we concede in mind
Carefully selected with tender design
Promised to a heart so tender and true
To be lost in the love… given to few
 
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